EDDIE'S POV

What the hell? Why would she talk about her sister like that? Why is she acting like such a bitch? Three classes pass and now it's lunch break. I walk into the yard and look around. Emily is sitting with the populars and Loren is sitting with the cool kids. When Loren sees me she smiles at me and gives me a small wave before going back to talking with her friends. Emily signalises for me to come sit with her so I do. My best friend Ian sits down with Loren's group and so does Damon. Dylan and Tyler sit down at Emily's table. Phil sits down with Emily and Cameron sits down with Loren. Emily pulls me into a make out session as soon as I sit down.

Dylan: So, we're going out tonight right?

Emily (pulling back): Of course we are.

Eddie: Are you going to invite Loren?

Emily: Why would I do that?

Dylan: That's actually a really good idea. She's single and smoking HOT!

Emily (flipping her hair): Thank you.

Tyler: He was talking about Loren and not you.

Emily (sassy): Loren and I look exactly the same so basically he was talking about me.

Tyler: No offence Emily but I think Loren is hotter than you.

Dylan: Yeah me too.

Emily (sassy and a little frustrated): We look the same!

Tyler: Neh, Loren's body is way hotter.

Emily (sassy): That's just because she does karate which is totally ungirly by the way.

Adriana: Yeah, totally.

Dylan: I think it's pretty cool.

Tyler: And I like Loren's hair better.

Emily: You're a guy. Guys don't look at girl's hair, they look at their asses. And I thought you guys were supposed to be my friends and not Loren's.

Dylan: Friends tell each other the truth.

Tyler: Doesn't mean I can't be Loren's boyfriend.

Dylan: No way, she'll go for me.

Eddie: Honestly I think she won't go for either of you.

They're not her type. I know I just met her but I like her. She's funny, she's smart, she's sportive, she's spontaneous and without Emily hearing it she's sexy. I think we could be good friends if Emily would let us. I wouldn't like Loren dating Tyler or Dylan. That would be a mistake.

Tyler: Because?

Eddie: You're not her type.

Dylan: And you are?

Eddie: If it wasn't obvious already, I'm taken.

Tyler: So if you weren't taken you would go for her?

I think I would. Loren is a nice girl.


LOREN'S POV

Melissa: So Loren kissed Eddie Duran!

Loren: That's so not true.

Melissa: Even better, he kissed you!

Ian: Really? My best mate kissed you?

Loren: Only because he thought I was Emily.

They all immediately act like they get chills down their spines while making disgusted faces.

Cameron: I hate Emily.

Melissa: Me too.

Jennifer: We all do.

Jennifer is a brunette with green eyes and a few freckles on her nose.

Loren: Come on guys, she's my sister.

Melissa: A sister who does horrible things to you.

Lily: Do we have to remind you about the whole Kevin thing?

~ Loren (crying): Please don't! NO! Please! ~

I snap out of it by Lily placing her hand on my shoulder. Lily is a blond with green eyes. She's not the smartest but we love her.

Lily: Hey Lo, are you okay? I'm sorry for bringing it up.

Loren (faking a smile): I'm fine.

Melissa: No, you're not. You were out of it just now and I know you were thinking back to that time.

Loren (fake smiling): I'm okay. It's all in the past.

Jennifer: B-

Loren: Let's talk about something more fun.

The rest of the day goes by and now I'm at my locker grabbing some books. When I close my locker Eddie walks up to me.

Loren: Ehm, hey Eddie.

Eddie: Hey.

Loren: What's up?

Eddie: We're going out tonight and were wondering if you would like to go with us?

Loren (raising her eyebrows): We were wondering? Like Emily wants me there.

Eddie (smiling): Okay, you got me. It was my idea and the boys thought it was a good one.

Loren (suprised): Really? You want me there?

Eddie (playfully punching her shoulder): Yeah, you're a cool girl Loren.

Loren (flipping her hair): Tell me something I don't know.

Eddie (raising his eyebrows): What?

Loren (laughing): Sorry, really bad imitation of Emily.

Eddie: You know it's really awkward you guys not liking each other cause Emily is my girlfriend and I would like us to be friends. That kind of puts me in the middle.

Loren (brushing a few hairs out of her face): Okay, I won't make that kind of comments about her anymore. I don't want you to feel uncomfortable.

Eddie: Thanks. So, are you coming?

Loren (hestitating): IIIIIII... (sighs) don't know.

Eddie: Come on, it's going to be epic.

Loren: It's just that I already know how it's going to go. Emily and her girls will hate on me and Dylan and Tyler will hit on me.

Eddie (teasing): Full of yourself aren't you?

Loren (acting offended): I am not!

Eddie: Just invite some friends.

Loren (sighs): Okay, I'll be there.

Eddie (smiling and walking away): I'll see you there Loren Tate.

Loren: Wait

Eddie (turning around): Yeah?

Loren: I don't know where or how late it is?

Eddie (walking back): Ehm..put your number in my phone and I'll text you.

I do and then he really walks away. Suddenly Melissa appears out of nowhere.

Melissa: What was that about?

Loren: Geez MEL! You scared the crap out of me!

Melissa: Good, now what was that about?

Loren: You and me are going out tonight.

Melissa: We are? That's great. Since when?

Loren: Since Eddie invited me.

Melissa: Then why am I going?

Loren: Because I love you and I don't want to be there alone with Emily and her crew.

Melissa: Who else is going?

Loren: Ehm, I'm going to invite Lily, Jennifer, Ian and Cameron.

Melissa: Well, let's get ready then.

Melissa and I drive to my house after picking up clothes for her at her house and walk into my closet. I grab white skinny jeans, a blue chiffon crop top with a blue bandeau underneath it and black strappy heels. Soft curls, blue feather earrings and black with blue shadow-eye make-up. Melissa changes and then we walk downstairs. In a few minutes the rest of the girls and boys arrive too. Eddie texts me the address and then we go. Cameron and Melissa go with me in my bugatti and the rest goes in Ian's car. We arrive at this huge club with spotlights shining from the club through the sky.

Loren: Wow

Melissa (squealing): This is going to be great.

We park our cars and walk into the club. I get checked out by a couple of boys so I quickly walk further into the club. On the dancefloor I can see Emily dancing with Eddie. I walk to the bar to get a drink. I order a martini and hang against the bar. After a while Dylan and Tyler walk up to me. Ian and Cameron immediately walk a little closer to me. Sometimes they're a little overprotective.

Dylan: Wow Loren, you look smoking.

Tyler: Wanna dance?

Cameron (butting in): Sorry guys, she already promised to dance with me.

Cameron grabs my hand and pulls me towards the dance floor and we start dancing.

Loren (relieved): Thank you Cameron!

Cameron: You're welcome T. Besides, I don't mind dancing with you. Although I can just feel how much you're holding back for me.

Loren: That's not true. You're getting the hang of it.

Cameron: You're just saying that to make me feel better. You are a great dancer Loren. I don't get why you don't try to reach something with that talent.

Loren: I don't want to. It's just for fun.

Suddenly Eddie comes out of nowhere and takes Cameron's place.

Eddie: You mind if I cut in?

Cameron: No please, be my guest.

Loren (acting offended): Hey! I thought you didn't mind dancing with me!

Cameron (walking away): You're just too good T.

Eddie and I start dancing like Cameron and I just did.

Loren: Shouldn't you be with Emily right now? Does she know you're dancing with me cause I'm sure she would freak.

Eddie: She knows, she wasn't happy about it but she knows.

Loren: If she doesn't want you to then why are you dancing with me?

Eddie: Well, first of all she can't control me. And besides I wanted to check out your moves aka see how much you suck at dancing.

Loren: Oh really?

Melissa who's dancing with Lily and Jennifer apparently overheard us talking.

Melissa: You shouldn't have said that.

Eddie looks confused but then I take a few steps back and start dancing. I've kind of been dancing hiphop since I was a kid so yeah. After about two minutes I stop all out of breath. Then Eddie starts dancing and I'm amazed. He's just as good as I am. When he's done he pulls me towards him and we start doing our moves together. I look around and see that a lot of people are standing around us watching us. Eddie and I are both kind of sweaty from dancing. Suddenly Emily walks onto the dancefloor and starts grinding against Eddie. That is my cue to go. I walk from the dancefloor and order another drink. After a while I've had enough. I've got no one to dance with and I'm kind of tired. I text Melissa that I'm going while I walk to my car. I don't want them to leave just because I am. I drive home and change into pink booty pyjama shorts and a black sport bra showing my sixpack. I like sport bra's. They make my D-cup look good. Emily has a C-cup. Then I lay down on my bed and put on my black headphones. I start listening to music while reading the notebook for school. After about half an hour I think I hear Emily come back so I pull my headphones off and peek out of my room. Shouldn't have done that. Emily and Eddie are on their way to Emily's room while in a heavy make out session. I quickly close my door again and sit down on my bed again while putting on my headphones. Gross, now the thought of them having sex at this moment keeps coming back into my head. I turn my music up so that there isn't a chance that I will hear moans in a few minutes. Been there before and believe me, not pretty. I try to focus all my attention on the book and after a while it works. Suddenly someone grabs my headphones from my head.

Loren: Hey! (looking up) I was listening to that!

Eddie: What? You didn't hear me.

Eddie's suddenly staring at one point. I follow his gaze and see that it's at my stomach. Okay, kind of awkward. My sister's boyfriend checking out my sixpack.

Loren: Eddie, stop staring. It's awkward.

Eddie: Wow, your sixpack is sexy.

Loren (shocked): Eddie! Emily would kill you for saying that! You remember Emily right? Your GIRLFRIEND!

Eddie: Oh come on, I know that. Doesn't mean I can't look at other girls.

Loren: I think it kind of does. Especially when the other girl is her sister who she hates.

Eddie: Nice belly button.

Yeah, I have a pink diamond belly button. I thought it would look nice on my sixpack.

Loren: Thanks, are you done staring now?

Eddie: I bet you have a tatoo somewhere on your body.

Loren: Okaaaay, changing the subject.

Eddie chuckles and I look down at the red nail polish on my toes and then at my ankle bracelet with a heart charm and an infinity charm on it.

Loren: Why aren't you with Emily?

Eddie: She fell asleep.

Loren (smirking): She must be tired after that.

Eddie (confused): After what?

Loren: Oh come on, you know exactly what I mean.

Eddie (still confused): Ehm, no I don't?

Loren: It's so obvious that you guys had sex?

Eddie: Well, that's weird cause we didn't.

Loren: I saw you guys making out and going to her room.

Eddie starts playing with the charms of my ankle bracelet.

Eddie: I think Emily wanted to but I just want to wait a little longer.

Loren: I understand.

Eddie: You still a virgin?

Loren (looking down): That's kind of personal?

Eddie: You asked me too.

Loren: Yeah but in return I had to tell you about my sixpack.

Eddie: Which I love but your question was much more personal.

Loren: It's just a really complicated story.

Eddie: I'm smarter than you think.

Loren (scraping her throat): Well basically, when I was ready to do it I found out he was cheating on me.

That makes Eddie stop playing with my charms.


Auch. Anyway, let me know what you guys think.