Okay guys thank you for the awesome feedbacks and yea I will try to make it better but I love to have fun too it's not a work so I don't give it my absolute on the grammar or the spellings I just do it out of fun I just like to write and express my emotions through it and it is not exam so I just go and write what I usually say in that situation and be honest it is the way you speak too. You don't correct every mistakes that you do while your speaking and please if you are reading my story just think that the characters are talking not that I am writing.
Okay now that the touchy feeling about grammer is over I like to know if I should stop the story cause you guys don't like the way I write or should I continue and yea last time I forgot to say this so the FLAMES and INSTULTS will be ignored.
"talking"...
"Demon/Dragon"
'Thinking'
"JUTSU/SPELL"
CHAPTER ONE: I'M STILL STANDING TEME!
After the wonderful vesion of her nude body Naruto finally noticed her every beautiful features. She was so beautiful, her hight was 5'7". Her perfect pink lips, her beautiful silver and gold eyes and her beautiful long navy blue hair . After returning to land of the living Naruto asked the frist thing that came to mind " hey Dinaiga where can I find ramen around here " well it was fortunate or unfortunate on one personal view that Dilaiga now had clothes on and yay no more blood loss. Now Dilaiga was have trouble to handle this, Naruto just woke up from a thousand years of slumber and all he asks is where can he find some ramen. " Well we could go to the town near by and ask. If you are wondering why I don't know is because I was A FUCKING DRAGON for last couple of century " was the reply of an one angry Dilaiga? ' Why the fuck is she being so hyper about it, anyway to my dearest Ramen-chan' was the tought of one idiotic immortal, which he didn't know of course. As he went down the road Dilaiga was following right behind him. Having enough of it he asked " why are you following me Dilmila? Don't you have something else to do then follow me around? " that was not a thing to ask as she told him just some moments ago that they were to marry soon and now he is asking what the hell is he following him around? AND HE GOT HER NAME WRONG! AGAIN! " Well for starters my NAME is DI-LIA-GA and no I have nothing else to do we are to be married soon. " god it was like you are talking to a kid with him. Naruto stopped right there and turned white as a peper sheet why you ask becouse that meant the end of his freedom that is what ero-senin said when they were on the road. Slowly turning around he asked " mm when are we ge-getting ma-ma-married Dilgaya? " okay there are two thing he should have done right: one was to not ask when they were getting married in such a manner that it would sound like that was the worst idea and two, he should have said her name right. " I can't belive that I waited this long for you and you too just be an asshole and say thing like that. I wish there it was another female that choosen and not me. AND I NAME IS DILAIGA NOW THAT!" was the reply of a sad and angry Dilaiga. She was about to cry, she was trying her hardest not to let the tears fall from her beautiful silver and gold eyes. It was about to fall when suddenly she felt warm and shoft finger wiped it off her beautiful face and said " hey now, please don't cry. I am sorry I was teasing so much. I am teasing you because I feel a connection with you, I don't know how or why but with you, I get the feeling that I known you for a long time and I know that we meet few hours ago, I am really sorry " with that Naruto hugged her and kissed her on her forehead. Dilaiga was speechless, she could not say anything other then to reach out and hug him, not knowing what to do Naruto warp his arm around her. It's was her first that anyone had ever hugged her and inside her heart there was this warm feeling that made her feel special and wanted. " Now what should we do, I mean that we have to get married right? Can you tell me why? Please it's not that I don't think your beautiful, I do think that your the most beautiful in this world! " said one smiling Naruto. Dilaiga thought for a bit then said " We could go on a date I mean that is what most couple do right? " now Dilaiga was a strong and proud woman but asking out on a date will always make any woman blush. Naruto was well just being Naruto and said smiling brightly " Sure why not so let's see what should we do? I have gone on some dates with a girl I used to like so I got experience so let's go to the town! " with that Naruto and Diliaga went on their very first date!
XXX SOME NUMBER OF YEARS LATER XXX
It was a bright and sunny day in the town called Sunflower which used to be called Konoha a thousand year back and which will be called Magnolia after a couple of hundred years , the weather was so good that it seemed that nothing could go wrong. But that was all about to change in to a bloody day that later on people would call the war of dragons. It seems that somehow some of the dragons felt that they were the only ones that should be living in this wonderful world. But half of the population of dragons didn't like to think that they were the only one to be worthy of a life. Humans, animals all were worthy of being alive that was what the half of the population thought. Soon once peaceful town was attacked by a swarm of dragons: fire, water, air, steel and a lot of other elemental dragon were the ones responcible for the destruction of Sunflower town. Sevral hundred miles further was a grand house, home of the Nukelhead Immortal Uzumaki Naruto sitting on his chair, HIS no one else was permitted to sit on his chair but him. He was having the day of his life, more ramen he could ever have, a beautiful wife all he was missing was some children he could spoil. What HE was an orphan so all he ever wanted in life was to have a family and give his children what he could not have but he would have kept them in humble though. You don't need another Sasuke as far as he was concerned. Though he was his best friend he was still a major dick. Dilaiga was, well happy with Naruto. He was still childish but in a good and cute way, but if he had to get serious then god help the person who pissed him off 'mostly men though' cause a hero like him would never rise his hand on a woman. It was not that he thought that women is weaker then men no far from it, because he had first hand experience how strong ' don't forget scary ' women can truly be. No, it was because a woman maybe strong and tough but she will still be delicate, like a coconut hard on the outside and soft on the inside. Anyway it has been a hundred years since Naruto woke up, and about 80 years of their marriage. The year was X401, ten years had passed since the start of WOD (war of dragons) a lot has happened since Naruto woke up, first of all he leard the tomd or shrine where he woke up was made in his honor. Secound was what shocked him the most, was that the jutsu he used made him an Immortal being. As he could not and will not die his energy slowly changed in it's form, his chakra changed in eterno.(THE SPELLING IS WRONG, I KNOW!) As everything changes with time, Naruto mastered the magic Called Dragon Slayer in about twenty years. Nothing could make him pissed today, untill BOOM he looked outside the window and sees the Sunflower town was destroyed in smoky ruins and the dragons were heading towards his home. So he with outside his house and stood infront of his home soon he was joined by Dilaiga in beautiful scarlet kimono made from the scales of a fellow dragon. A fire Dragon to be presice that could withstand the hottest flames and protection form the coldest blizzard. Anyhow they confronted the dragons as they landed slowly, and one of them said " Well what do we have here two lowly humans trying to fight us? heh, I would just love to step on you hahaha " Naruto being Naruto said " What was that earlier? Why did you destroy that town? THAT TOWN WAS HOME TO GOOD PEOPLE! WHAT DID THEY DO TO DESERVE DEATH?! ". The dragons just started laughing and said " What did they do to deserve death you ask hahahaha, that is simple to answer. THEY WERE HUMANS INSIGNIFICANT HUMANS LIKE YOU! Don't worry you will join them soon, YOU TWO LOVE WORMS WILL DIE HERE HAHAHA! " Dilaiga not want to hurt her own kind transformed into her dragon form and said " Every living being has right to live why do you hate humans so much, fire dragon? Is it so hard to understand that we are all equal to ants to trees, yes we kill animals because they are what we eat, we dragons do not eat humans so what is it that you kill humans? ". The dragons were stuned not because of what Dilaiga said but because of that she is. Was it possible for a human to transform into a dragon? Was this some kind of illusion? No this was not an illusion this girl just transformed into a Dragon! And so the fire dragon said " OH you are a dragon huh, but what element are you, your not fire, water, sky or earth! The light and shadow dragons would never be with some one let alone a human or are you a dragon too gaki? " hah that was new to Naruto, to be called a brat. ' If he knew my age he would filp and drown on his own sweat ' -_- was what Naruto was thinking and said " No I am not a dragon, but a close to one. Now I'll ask you again why did you kill those people? " the fire dragon being arrogant and said " Because we are dragons! Only we are allowed to live in this world! " Naruto was have a hard time trying to calm down. Naruto's eyes was shadowed by his hair and then looked stright into the eyes of the fire dragon who dared to say some thing like that infront of him. In a flash he was right infront of the fire dragon and Punched him right in the kisser. As the punch connected few of the dragon's teeth flew out of his mouth, the rest of the dragons soon attacked him. As the fight went on Dilaiga trying to make others who didn't attack understand that every living thing had the right to live. She knew Naruto could handle himself and didn't bother to look as he fought the swarm of dragons. As Naruto knocked out most of the dragon the fire Dragon attacked the back of Naruto who was trying not to kill the dragons he knock out. As most of the dragon who didn't fought Naruto understood a lil bit about equality for life, Dilaiga turned to look at Naruto but was shocked what she saw. The fire Dragon's claw was going right through the mid section of Naruto with a screeching voice she yelled " NARUUTOOO! ". That woke the other dragons up as the fire Dragon asked with a broken voice " Wh-Why? Why did you spare my comrades? When you could have easly killed them. " Naruto with blood dripping for his lips, had a smile it seem finally the dragon was ready to understand and said " As my wife 'MATE'(yelled Dilaiga) said earlier everyone has the right to live. You guys just seem to think that only dragons had that right, not because you wanted to but because you guys were taught to think that way. Oh by the way Gaki I am over a thousand years old and I am a senin so you should listen to you elders gaki, hihihi " " WHAT YOUR THAT OLD, YOUR LIKE A SUPER JIJI! Any the names is Igneel and will you teach us your way of life. Why life is everyone and every living thing right? Please jiji show us the light towards a better future! " said the fire dragon now named Igneel. Igneel was a proud dragon who never bowed to anyone but for the first time in his life he got to his knees and bowed to Naruto, as Naruto had a wide smile on his face even though his stomach had a large hole that was closing slowly nodded and then fell face first to the ground. For that moment all the Dragons that were following Igneel stunned but soon they shouted " HE DIED! " at that moment Dilaiga just remembered something that so forgot for about half a century that was Naruto was fucking IMMORTAL! " OIE JIJI YOU CAN'T JUST DIE AFTER TELLING US YOU WILL TEACH US THE WAY OF LIFE THAT YOU LEAD! COME ON WAKE U- " Igneel was interrupted when a fist met his jaw, Naruto had his hand raised and he said in a very sleepy voice " uruse baka hebi... I need my beauty sleep... " for a moment no body moved or said anything. If you focused really hard you could hear the water droplets, then Dilaiga burst out laughing and slowly everyone started to laugh and there was left one stunned Igneel. Dilaiga then started to explain that Naruto was the lagendary Savior of the World that even the dragons respected. And feared more then anything, who wouldn't be afraid of the lagend said to be wake up after "dying". It had been a couple weeks since the fateful day that Igneel and his followers met the wise yet idiotic sage and an immortal. And they learned a lot about the world before magic, in this few weeks they had made a few rules that they will follow to their death beds. First and the most important was kill was is need to survive not more then that, secound was never harm a hatchling or a child of any species, third was try helping the ones that need the help or if you don't want to then don't gloat before them, forth was revenge will bring you nothing but emptiness in you heart, fifth was a promise is ment to be capt even if you have to die in the process or just don't make promises that you can't fulfil and finally sixth fighting to protect something important will make you stronger but if you fight for yourself then you shall never grow.
XXXxxx YEAR X 682 TENROU ISLAND xxxXXX
It had been two and half plus centuries since Naruto was last seen in Earthland with his wife. They were currently in an island Tenrou, where they have been looking after their child, her name was Uzumaki Lucky she had the wild and curvy long hair in the shade of blue and some highlights of blond. She was born on year X 664 October 16th, she was a bright child and when they first came to Tenrou island Dilaiga was with child and was going to labour there they met Mavis Vermillion who was a fairy fanatic. She was only 15 then but now she was 31 years old and she was gone to a town called Magnolia to creat a guild called Fairy Tail. It had been two weeks since she went to Magnolia town, they haven't heard of a guild made there so maybe it will take some more years before the guild was made. With out her Lucky was feeling lonely so Naruto and Dilaiga decided to go around that world and explore and make some new friends. But what they didn't was that soon they would lose the thing that all parents cherish the most. As they soon got ready to leave the island. As they flew through the sky they were confornted non other then the Apocalypse Dragon Acnologia, the dragon of darkness. Naruto thinking quick jumped and used his magic since his chakra transfromed completely in eterno the name of his magic was Chakra Make. As Naruto neared the dark dragon something glowed in his pam and he cried out his spell " CHAKRA MAKE: ODAMA RASENGAAAN! " the blue orb soon expanded and covered the dark dragon, who cried out in pain. ' Who is this ningen that could hurt me this much?! No matter I will kill them all! ' was the dark thought of Acnologia, as he prepared to fire his roar Naruto shouted " DILAIGA YOU TAKE LUCKY AND RUN I WILL KEEP HIM BUSY TILL YOU AND LUCKY ARE SAFE! " what Naruto didn't know was Acnologia was actually a female, and didn't liked to be referred as a male. What happened next socked Naruto and some what Dilaiga Acnologia transformed and turned in to a beautiful female human and said " I am a FEMALE you idiot and this is where you will die, Dragon Salyer of Time. " Acnologia and Naruto landed to the ground and soon Naruto did something that made Acnologia very very pissed Naruto said " I don't fight women so please let us pass and please don't try to fight me..". Now to any women who didn't know Naruto personally would have thought the thing that would make any women pissed as Acnologia the thought going through Acnologia's mind was ' HE IS A SEXIST! I AM SO KILLING THIS BASTARD! ' with Acnologia's mind focused on Naruto now, Naruto made a small gesture to Dilaiga who understood perfectly the gesture ment, " I got her attention, you and Lucky go to a safe place and I will join you shortly! " with that Dilaiga flew up and away from the battle which was going to be one sided shortly.
... TO BE CONTINUE ...
SORRY GUYS I FOR POSTING THE NEXT CHAPTER SO MUCH LATE, I TRIED TO WRITE IT AND FINISH IT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE BUT MY UNVERSITY STARTED AND I WAS BUSY WITH HOMEWORKS AND TESTS. ANY WAY I WILL TRY TO KEEP POSTING STORIES AS SOON AS POSSIBLE AND PLEASE DON'T FORGET TO R'N'R AND YEA THANKS FOR THE GREAT REVIEWS AND SUGGESTIONS I WILL TRY TO MAKE IT LONGER BUT I DON'T REALLY HAVE MUCH FREE TIME SO THE LONGEST I CAN WRITE WITH A MONTH WILL BE ABOUT 9 OR 10K SO PLEASE UNDERSTAND. OKAY AND ABOUT ADDING LUSY TO THE HAREM MAYBE BUT NOT SURE CAUSE I LIKE HER PARE WITH LOKE BUT THAT DOES NOT HAVE ANY PLOT SO I MAY CHANGE THAT. BUT THERE WON'T BE MORE THE 8 THAT IS THE LIMIT AND YEA THERE WILL BE NO LEMONS THIS IS M RATED STORY BECAUSE OF LANGUAGE AND DEATH THAT WILL SOON FOLLOW. AND THAT YOU FOR READING WITHOUT YOU GUYS I WOULD HAVE NO INSPIRATION SO THAT YOU!