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Firestrike's POV
Firestrike glared down at her kit. She looks too much like her father. I will not care for a kit who looks like him! "Stay away from my kits!" she hissed as she pierced her claw into Flarekit's ear.
She heard a hiss from behind her, Mouseflight!
The she-cat tackled her and slashed her shoulder. "How dare you touch my precious little darling. Not like you would care, but I happen to love her. So stay away from her!"
Firestrike staggered back to her nest, limping because of her shoulder. She remembered how as she was kitting, her mate Blazestorm said he would never call the kits his own. Flarekit looked so much like him that she despised her because of that.
She refused to ever go to the medicine den, she didn't care if the wound got infected, she just wanted to sleep.
When she returned to her nest, she laid her head down until she heard someone yowl, "Shadowclan is attacking!" She pushed her kits to the back of the nursery and began to fight an apprentice that came into the den. She was fighting it for so long she didn't notice Flarekit come to check on her kits. Without a word, Flarekit flung herself at the apprentice, trying to claw its tail. it yowled in pain when her teeth met its ankle, and stopper fighting Firestrike.
Firestrike looked at Flarekit. Mabey she isn't so bad...
No! She is his kit! She is as bad!
She risked her life to help me!
She risked her life for your kits! Not you!
Firestrike looked away from the young kit. She decided that it was time to show the she-kit who is boss. She threw Flarekit out of the den and heard a snap as Flarekit's paw twisted backwards. The young kit started to cry and Firestrike looked at it, smirking about her victory.
When Mouseflight heard Flarekit's cry, she came over, hissing at Firestrike as she picked up Flarekit.
Firestrike sneered at her, saying, "I hope you and that pile of foxdung have a great life."
Mouseflight just padded off to her nest, taking a deep breath to calm herself down.
Hope you like it! I spent so long on it, i know it isnt very long but... Yeah! I really hope you all like it.