Chapter 2: Growing up! (Updated)
(Chapter 2 edits: spaced out certain parts of the text and extended the chapter, The author's note is still the same except at the end of this one... I also changed Josh's name to Flames[I kept thinking that Josh was a weird name for a Flareon])
#TheRedUmbreon: I started writing this chapter the day after I uploaded the last one so hopefully I get more time to make it longer and make sure that there are at least minimal to no errors (since the last chapter was written within a day I did not fix all the errors of it, just some of them p.s. The last chapter was fixed before I uploaded this so hopefully there aren't as much errors anymore :u), meanwhile I'll leave you guys with Shadow as I write the chapter...
Shadow: Right! So as you all know TheRedUmbreon is so lazy that he started writing this at midnight, again...
#TheRedUmbreon: Hey! That's not true! I started writing this hours ago!
Shadow: All you ever did was write the title...
#TheRedUmbreon: So? That counts, doesn't it?
Shadow: No, anyways today is Sunday, so I suppose that if you would've gotten your lazy ass up early you would've finished by now!
#TheRedUmbreon: Yes I know, but...
Shadow: NO BUTS!!!
#TheRedUmbreon: Fine...
Shadow: Anyway... TheRedUmbreon dose NOT own Pokemon, meanwhile you guys read the chapter... I got a writer to mess with... Enjoy.
1 year later; Shadow's POV
It's been over a year and we are still living in the same place since we were born and now we have neighbours, they recently moved in just a few months ago, it was a Flareon called Flames and a Leafeon called Alice, both of them are almost as old as our parents and they usually come every day to talk with them, they also have an Eevee with them called Alex and he seems to be of our age.
Early that morning
I woke up when the sun was just rising, a few months ago, my dad told me when the sun was rising it was called a sun rise which happens in the morning, and in the evening when the sun goes down it was called a sunset, he also told me a lot of thongs that I found interesting.
I got up and stretched a bit before looking at my family, seeing that they're all sound asleep I shouldn't wake them up, so I quietly headed over towards the entrance of the cave, looking down I saw that we weren't too high to hurt ourselves if we were to jump and just high enough to see above the trees, nearby there was a clearing of grass that me, Sandy and Alex usually go to play everyday.
yawns*
Seems that I'm still a bit tired...
I turn to see the sky as the sun was just starting to rise and the sky was a red mixed with a orange/yellow color along with a few clouds that I thought was beautiful "It's such a beautiful sight" I said to myself, then I heard someone behind me say
"Well someone got up early"
as soon as I heard that I got so scared that I jumped and screamed, when I turned around to see who it was, it turned out to be just my sister,
"Your so easy to scare, Shadow"
she said to me with a grin on her face
sighs*
"Could you please stop doing that!?" I said to her in an annoyed tone
"Nope" she responded
"Is it really necessary for you to scare me when ever you get the chance?" I said,
"Well your easy to scare so it doesn't take much thinking to be able to do it", I gave her an annoyed look as she walked over next to me to look up at the sky "wow the sky is so pretty in the morning"
"Looks like you two are up early"
Just as I heard that I saw a Jolteon walk out from our room, "Dad? What are you doing up so early?" I said
He responded "Well I heard someone scream like a girl so I decided to see who it was"
"Oh yeah that was Shadow", said my sister followed by a giggle, I gave her an annoyed look as soon as she said my name, I turned towards my dad and saw him with a grin on his face.
"well since you two are up early, why don't you two come pick berries with me?" said my dad
"sure!" we both yelled
"Not so loud, your going to wake up your mom" said my dad in a low tone
"Too late", said my mom coming out of the room " Where are we going?"
My dad responded "we're going to go pick some berries, you can join us if you'd like"
"I'd love too!", and with that we were off towards the plain in search of berries
Meanwhile; Alex's POV
" huh?" I said as I felt someone nudgeing me
"Good morning, sleepy head!"
I easily recognize that voice, my mom always does that when she want all of us to go bring some berries back to the den, fortunately for us, the den is located in the plain field so we don't have to walk so far to get them. I opende my eyes and i could see a cheerful Leafeon looking at me. "Good morning mom"
"come on your dad has gone up ahead"
Yeah, whenever my dad does that, it's because he wants to sleep a little while longer, I've seen him a couple of times but somehow he wakes up before my mom sees him, I followed my mom as we left the den.
"I really don't understand why you want to stay asleep on a beautiful morning"
if only she knew that my dad does the same when she isn't noticing
Shadow's POV
While my parents went ahead of us we decided to stay behind them, I didn't really like it since Sandy was making fun of me
"Good morning Alice! Good morning Alex!"
My mom's voice caught our attention, it was nice because I didn't have to hear Sandy's voice anymore, I ran to catch up to my parents and ahead I could see Alice and Alex eating berries by a bush and behind it I could see a sleeping Flareon
"Oh Good morning to all of you! what brings you here?"
"We came here to bring some berries back to our den"
"you guys should move nearby so that you guys don't worry about having to come back to get berriesover and over"
then I heard my dad respond "is there a den that's big enough for us?"
Alice responded "sure, i can take you to it if you'd like"
"yeah"
"ok, what about you two?" then she looked at us
Sandy said "I'd love to come along!"
I responded "can i stay with Alex?"
"if you'd like too, if something happens Flames will be watching over you two"
"okay"
"come on Sandy", After Alice said that, both my paremts and Sandy went with her to go see the den while I stayed with Alex and Flames
#TheRedUmbreon: I edited most of my sto-
Shadow: My story!
#TheRedUmbreon: okay, okay, you don't have to get angry about it, Anyways I feel like the story sounds better then how it was before...
Shadow: now, explain to everyone why you took FOREVER to update my story!
#TheRedUmbreon: Yeah, well I had to leave for a few days to spend time with my family and I didn't have any internet connection to update it, so sorry guys, please don't kill me... *runs away*
Shadow: okay... Make sure to review the story if you think he's improving, right now I've got to "talk" to him.
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