Okay, here we are. Not sure if you like it but as much as I am a Sloth, I still get bored.
Chapter 2: Visualization
Blood and bruises; they cover the raven haired girl as she staggers to her bedroom, trying to hide her limp. She pushes open the door and falls to her knees. But even doing that hurts from being on them so long. The girl crawls over to her mirror and looks at herself.
We
The Hyuga immediately looks around. "W-who's there?" She said. No answer.
A shiver crawled down her spine. She looked around once more, hoping to discover where the voice came from, but disregarded it for the moment and went into her (rather large(spoiled brat)) bathroom. She turned on the water and slowly she removed her clothes and looked at the girl that was in the mirror, staring back at her weakly. She saw a rather modest chest, a somewhat small waist, and hips and thighs, a slight size bigger than she'd like. And nearly every inch of her skin was covered with a bruise, a scar, or in some places, cum.
Are
She turned again searching her bathroom top to bottom, looking for, who or what is speaking to her. But there wasn't a trace of life besides her, anywhere. A tremble rushed through her body. She ignored it once more, praying that it was some cruel joke Neji was doing. But the questions still lingered in the back of her mind.
The heiress sighed and went into the shower. She let the water run down her, it turning red before it hit the bottom. She watched the blood stained water circle into the drain for a moment. She turned around so her back faced the water. She cringed slightly as the water seeped into the large gash all the way down her back.
After cleaning all the blood and other fluids from her body she walked out of the shower and began to dry herself.
You
She jumped and looked. There was nothing in sight.
This had unnerved the girl. She frantically looked around as all three words began to echo in her head. Then, all of a sudden, it began to pour outside and thunder rumbled in the distance. Almost immediately following this, she fell to her knees as her stomach felt as though a knife was going through it. Light blue lightning struck outside her window, and Hinata had become faint and dizzy. The room had spun around her, and a dark blue mist came from under her door and from the windows.
She gripped onto consciousness as hard as she could while the room turned and the gases spewed. Then she gasped as the knife was pulled from her stomach. And when Hinata looked at herself, she saw blood. Hinata, although still naked, walked into her bedroom to look at her cuts in a mirror. Then she grimaced at the different girl standing in the mirror. She looked like Hinata. She even had the same birthmark. But that girl that had been glaring back at Hinata certainly wasn't her.
She jumped and fell back onto her bed, the other girl in the mirror copied the movements. Hinata just grimaced at the sight. The dark blue eyes of the thing lurking in that mirror kept itself looking at Hinata, even when the heiress turned her head away. The reflection crawled itself as close to the mirror as possible. It stared at Hinata with an evil curiosity. Tilting it's head slightly the corners of the reflection's mouth turned up, creating a sickening smile.
"We. Are. You." The mirror girl repeated. Then with a blast of lightning from outside, the glass had cracked, and a sick and twisted, deafening cackle rang from the mirror. Hinata looked as the girl in the mirror turned into a sickly creature, (that looked something like a Hyuga version of the grudge). Then the glass shattered. And with a final, gut-wrenching stab, Hinata lay of her bed. Naked, slightly aroused, bleeding, and unconscious.
This seems so super natural to me but I know that's not the aim of this story. Weird huh? Well whatever....... Another chapter complete.