Hmmm….
I've gotten a lot of mixed votes.
It was a little hard to tally up all of the votes, considering that some people also had second choices. So I counted everybody's first choice as one full vote. If anyone had a second choice, it counted as half a vote. It was the only fair way.
However, I think most of you will be happy with the decision: All of them teaming up! That way, everyone can have the villain of their choosing in the story; or if you picked this option in the first place, then you must be very happy!
I spent hours just wondering if I should add Ian as an antagonist in the story, but I don't think I could add him into a cartoon fanfic. It'd just be too confusing for both me and you readers.
I am absolutely stunned at getting 12 reviews on just the first chapter! I was jumping out of my seat when I saw so many review alerts in my e-mails.
Well, I hope you enjoy chapter 2!
"Alvin? Alvin! Did you call my name? What's wrong?"
The room was still, and no one dared to answer Dave from behind the door. All six chipmunks watched the disguised kidnapper as he seemed to have frozen in thought.
"Alvin…?" There was a pause, and the sound of Dave attempting to open the door filled their ears. He was banging on the door. "Are you in here? Why's the door locked? Open this door right now! ALVIN!"
The kidnapper turned his head in Alvin's direction. "Tell him to leave." He ordered in a low voice.
"B-b-but-" Alvin stammered, unsure of how he could have ended up in this situation.
"Alvin!"
The man took a few steps toward the door. "You're going to make this harder for all of us."
"Alvin! If you don't open up this door…" Dave yelled, leaving an empty threat.
Alvin cleared his throat nervously, wringing his cap between his hands. "D-D-Da…" He gulped. "Dave?"
"Alvin! What were you screaming about?" Dave's voice was laced with relief.
"Sorry, Dave." Alvin replied, sounding completely convincing. "It was just another nightmare."
"Alright. Do you want to talk about it?"
"No thanks." He pulled at his collar, looking to his left and noticing his little brother shaking and clutching onto both Eleanor and Brittany. Jeanette was behind Simon's bed, only the top of her head showing. While as Simon was standing behind Alvin.
"Okay, go back to sleep, okay?"
"Okay." Alvin responded. He listened for Dave's disappearing footsteps before turning to the kidnapper.
"What do you want us to do?" Simon inquired, grabbing his smaller yet older brother by the shoulders and pulling him back.
"Come with me." The man growled, gesturing for them to follow. He unlocked the door and looked back to find that no one was following him. "I told you not to make this as difficult as it has to be."
Simon looked to his friends and brothers before stepping forward. "Why are you doing this?"
"I've been ordered to do so. It's my job."
"Who were you ordered by?"
"Like I'd tell you, kid." The man sneered. "You'll find out soon enough. Now, enough stalling. If you don't come with me now, I'll be forced to knock you out first."
Hours later…
"Where do you suppose he's taking us?" Brittany asked, peering out of the car window.
"Who knows?" Alvin groaned.
"I don't believe we've ever been to a neighborhood like this." Simon stated, watching the large houses pass by as the limo they were in sped 85 miles per hour.
"Yeah! Look at these houses! They're like mansions. These people must be millionaires!"
At the sound of 'millionaires', something clicked in Simon's mind. "Wait a minute….. Isn't this…" But before he could voice his thought, the limo halted.
They all piled up against the window, wondering where they have been taken to.
The house was huge! It was ten times the size of the Chipmunk's house and the Chipette's house put together!
The kidnapper opened the car door, causing Jeanette and Brittany to topple forward onto the cement below. The other four carefully stepped out of the car, Simon and Alvin each helping their dazed counterpart off of the ground.
They looked nervously up at the mansion in front of them.
"You can go inside." The kidnapper said gruffly, lightly kicking Eleanor on the back of the leg in order to get her to walk. Eleanor glared at the man and took Theodore's hand, leading him and the others up the marble steps and through the mansion door.
"Oh! You are back!" The Chipmunks and Chipettes gasped in complete shock. There, to greet them, was Claudia herself, wearing expensive looking clothing and heavy jewelry all around her neck and wrists. "I haven't seen you darlings in about a year! Look how much you've grown!"
It took a few moments for each of them to get over their shock, but Brittany was the first to recover.
"Why you-" Brittany growled, leaping towards the grinning woman, only to be stopped by her sisters restraining her.
"What are you doing here?" Alvin barked, trying to stop himself from trying to kill her.
Claudia laughed. A sound that made them cringe with familiarity. "I live here, silly!"
"I mean… What are we doing here?"
"For various reasons, my dear chipmunk." She grinned. "Come. You are just in time. My guests have appeared and are in the kitchen right now."
"Guests?" Theodore and Eleanor questioned in unison.
"Yes, I believe you know them, too." Claudia quipped, chuckling and snapping her fingers towards two guards that were standing by the doors. "Bring them into the kitchen."
Brittany and Alvin huffed angrily as they and their siblings were pushed forward towards the kitchen. Claudia opened the door for them and they each let out a petrified gasp at who they saw.
"Harry?"
They looked at him with wide eyes before turning their heads toward the other man sitting at the table.
"Dr. Frankenstein?" Alvin, Simon, and Theodore yelped.
"What's going on?" Alvin shook his head, feeling lightheaded.
"Nice to see you boys again!" Harry exclaimed.
Simon and Theodore, sensing that they're red-clad brother was about to faint, each grabbed one of Alvin's arms right before he limped.
Yeah, well, Alvin sure does faint a lot due to shock in the cartoon series, so I thought I'd add that in here. Sorry if this chapter was boring. Next chapter… THINGS HAPPEN!
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~Jamie
