Okay so idk why I didn't get any reviews yet…. But anyway im posting the next chapter

"Woooooooo!"

Ugh, what's going on now?

"Woooooooooo!"

Oh goodness, today was the day. She had to go to that stupid rock concert at West Palm Beach, Florida. They only lived about 15 minutes away from the beach. Ashley rolled out of bed and went to the bathroom to take a shower.

When felt the hot water on her back she thought about what she had to do. Maybe she could just drop her sister off and her mother would not even know. Or, maybe she could bring her textbook and hide in the bathroom. A rock concert was the last place that she wanted to be seen. She reminded herself to bring her textbook just in case.

She stepped out of the shower, got dressed, and headed downstairs. She was automatically greeted by her hyper little sister.

"Oh my god I can't wait! It's going to be soooo much fun!" Her sister screamed.

Ashley cringed. "Whatever let's just eat breakfast and get this over with." Their mom was by the stove finishing making pancakes and bacon for the girls.

"Here you go girls," said the mother as she put a plate in front of them. "Eat up, then you can go. Ashley, make sure you have your money, and here are the tickets." Her mother handed two tickets.

Ashley ate her breakfast slowly while Mary sucked it up like a vacuum.

"Okay I'm done! Let's go!" yelled Mary in delight. Mary was wearing a Papa Roach t-shirt with Papa Roach wristbands and heavy black eyeliner. Ashley was wearing shorts with a red blouse and a little mascara. Ashley clearly was not going to enjoy this.

"Alright go to the car and I'll meet you there," said Ashley. Mary nodded and went out the door. Ashley ran upstairs in her bedroom to grab her textbook. She slipped it into her bag and headed to her car.

Mary had her feet propped up on the dashboard as the wind from the open windows blew her hair.

"I really can't wait! I wonder what songs they will sing! Oh and Jacoby is so hot! Maybe I'll be able to talk to him! Oh Ashley, how can you not be excited?"

"There are a lot of reasons why I'm not excited, Mary." Ashley replied.

Mary ignored her and screeched when she saw the beach. The sun was shining so bright and you could hear the screaming fans as they wait for the show to begin. It was about 80 degrees outside and Ashley wondered how you could perform music in that weather.

"We're here! Yes! Yes! Yes!" Ashley yelped when Mary literally pulled her out of the car. Mary was stronger than she looked because Ashley could not get out of her grip. Mary continued to pull Ashley to the gate where you had to show your tickets. Ashley handed the security guy their tickets and he let them into the beach. There were no seats and you had to stand by sweaty screaming fans. Ew, thought Ashley.

Suddenly, loud music roared from the speakers and the fans started to cheer. A group of tattoo covered, rocker guys came out on stage and started to play. The fans screamed louder than before, if that was possible.

"You know I love it when you're down on your knees

And I'm a junkie for the way that you please…"

Ashley cringed at the lyrics. What has she gotten herself into? Suddenly, her sister was not holding her hand. Ashley started to frantically look for Mary, but she couldn't find her. Oh god, oh god, oh god, Ashley thought. Ashley didn't know what to do. So, she pushed herself through the screaming fans and tried to find the bathroom. When she did, she went into a stall and called Mary's phone. However she got no answer.

It's okay, thought Ashley, all I have to do is wait until it's over then I'll find Mary. She opened her textbook and began to read. But, the walls vibrated with the sound of the music playing.

Ashley waited there for hours until she knew that the concert was over. People began to come into the bathroom to pee and then leave to go home. Ashley came out of the bathroom and went outside to look for her sister. It was around 5:00 PM. The sky was just starting to get dark and she was panicking.

What if I don't find her, she thought. She heard a noise from the back of the stage. She was going back there to see if anyone was there. Maybe they have seen her sister!

As she was walking towards the back a door on the side of the building opened and slammed her right in the face. Ashley's vision began to blur and she passed out.

Okay, that's it! Please review. Keep in mind that I have never been to a concert before so idk how it is. I really feel like nobody likes my story since no-one said anything. Please, it will only take a second…. Review!