Thank you for all the feed back guys and gals. i made the changes like you suggested and i hope you like the 2nd chapter of loud house hero also as a reminder i DO NOT OWN THE LOUD HOUSE IT IS OWNED BY NICKELODEON AND THIS STORY WAS INSPIRED BY SMOKING WRECKERS STORY ok lets get right in.
"Guys im worried about lincoln" lori said. "What's there to worry about "lana asked. "Really he almost burned down the house because we laughed at him, when school starts on monday what are we gonna do he gets bullied a lot and that could set him off and potentially hurt a lot of people or even worse" lori replied.
"Don't worry eldest female siblings i have a plan" lisa said" as she pushed in her chaulk bored if my calculations are correct and i almost never say this lisa said and they may be wrong if i were to build a special suit it could help him control his power but you guys also have apart in this". "What would that be" lola said "i have no business helping him". "Would you like him to accidentally burn all your dresses and tiaras" lana said . "oh no what do we have to do lisa" Lola said" sweating bullets". "Ok the plan is you guys take Lincoln far away to a field and make him mad" Lisa said. "Wait wait wait" Lori said "you expect us to risk our lives". "Yes I think what Lisa is trying to say we have to fire him up" Luan said. "Yes that is precise "Lisa stated. "Guys we need to go to bed it's really early in the morning and mom and dad will be here soon" Lucy said. Ahhhh they all screamed, "we need to put a bell on you bro" Luna said. "Sorry" Lucy replied. "Well let's hit the sack" Lynn jr said.
"Ok" Lisa said as she started to walk to her room to get started at the suit. "Wait what about Lincoln's eating problem" Leni said "Eh i'll look into it" Lisa said "for now we just wait and see". After the big family meeting everyone went to bed. All except one and that one was Lincoln. "It's not funny he said I could be a superhero if I wanted to and I'll prove it to them he said". Lincoln then pulled out some costumes to make his super hero outfit "let's see pink no white pants yes what with white shirt a red hat with games yes let's see some eye wear red goggles check". He then put everything on and looked in the mirror. "Ok this is pretty bad although it's not like a can make a suit like the human torch in the movies". Next Lincoln grabbed some pillows out of the closet and put them on his bed to make a body for his fake self that would take his place tonight. "You could barely tell us apart" Lincoln said. "Now how to get out of here he thought". "That's it the window" he said as he opened it up and started to crawl through. When he heard his door open. Oh crap he thought. "Hey bro how you feeling "Luna asked. But Lincoln gave no reply or he thought it would give him away. "Oh you're already sleeping here let me shut your window for you" Luna said as she walked over to his window and started to close it. No no no Lincoln thought I didn't think it would end like this. Luna then shut the door all the way not noticing the fingers that she almost crushed. "Good night bro see you tomorrow" Luna said as she shut off his light and walked out. Unaware lincoln was falling to the ground. Lincoln closed his eyes and prepared for the worst but once he opened his eyes he stopped falling awhile ago and was flying.
"I'm flying Lincoln" said as he started to fly around. As he was flying he almost hit the trash cans a bird and the tv antenna. "Oops" he said he tried to put it back to where it was. "Good as new he" said as he jumped off the roof ready to fly but this time he wasn't," agh why isn't this working he "said. But then he thought to what Lisa said "your powers are based on concentration". Lincoln then closed his eyes and focused as he fell Down almost to the ground when his flame aura engulfed around him and he shot up with speed. "Wooooo who" Lincoln yelled as he took off for the city to make his mark.
"Time to find some crime" he said as he flew through the city looking for something to do. Lincoln flew and flew until hours went by "ugh" he yelled" the one time nothing happens in royal woods is when i'm looking for something bad". Lincoln decided to stop on top of a building." I think i will rest here for a while" lincoln said as he looked around making sure no one saw him stood on the water tank looking out into the city."I think i'll just lay down for a while" lincoln said and so he did he made a spot on the tower and he slowly started to drift in to a slumber when the loud sirens
Woke him up." whats happening" lincoln said as he walked over to the edge to watch ambulances and cop cars speeding by." looks like it's time for me to go to work" lincoln said as he activated his flame aura and took off to the skies following the squad cars." where are they going lincoln thought. Lincoln continued following the squad cars until he reached his destination. "The supermarket" lincoln said. Lincoln landed on the roof of the building not catching the eyes of any of the police officers." lets see hear" lincoln said as he looked for a way in where he wouldn't be noticed. " COME OUT WITH YOUR HANDS UP" the police shouted towards the building. "I've seen this before lincoln said whenever the police say come out with your hands up usually means the bad guy has a gun".lincoln crawled around the roof of the supermarket looking for a way in. "ooh a vent" lincoln said as he crawled over to it and tried to open it. But to no avail the vent didn't open. "Oh come on" lincoln said. Lincoln continued to pull at the vent bu still the vent didn't move. Lincoln started to and a little irritated and the more he tried the more his anger grew until the vent started to heat up and then it started to melt and this got the attention of lincoln." good now that i'm in i have to find a way through the vents" lincoln said. Lincoln decided to start looking for a way in after about ten minutes lincoln start to hear crying and whispering."that must mean im close lincoln thought. He crawled to the noise hoping it would lead him to an opening were he could see what was going on. "Almost there" he said as he continued to crawl to the noise. "Ok im here he" he said to himself as he crawled up close to the vent." lets see what we have here" lincoln said as he looked through the vent." ok i see a bunch of hostages seven armed goons probably more cover the entrances" lincoln said. "Who said that" One of the robbers said "was it you little girl"."no sir i wouldn't do that" the little girl said. " oh really because to me it sounds like you need to taught a lesson EVERYONE HEAR DOES and looks like your the first one" he said. " I have to do something" lincoln said." what's your name little girl" the goon asked "its its emily" emily said."well emily it seems your out of time" the goon said as he pointed a pistol at the little girl. " goodbye emily " goodbye emily the goon said as he was about to pull the trigger yelling could be heard. "What's the goon asked another goon". "I don't know but lets call some back up over just in case" one of the goons said. " ah The flamingo is red over" one of the goons said. "What the hell is that" the goons asked the other. "It's our code for someone is coming moron" the goon replied. As the goons walked over to the vent the yelling got louder and louder until the wall bursted and a young boy dressed and a costume came flying out." what the hell is that the goons said. .I'm uhh that's not important right now you goons have been hurting innocent people and i'm here to stop you" lincoln said said trying to make his voice unnoticeable from any one that was near. But the goons took it as a joke and bursted out laughing" you defeat use hahahaha"one goon said." Go home kid" the other one said. Lincoln was getting mad now. " I bet right now you wish I would go home lincoln said." As he activated his flame aura which freaked the goons out. "What the hell is this kid " one goon asked. " I don't know or care let's pump his guy full of lead". The other goon replied as he held up his gun which made the other goon raise his gun."FIRE" the goon yelled and so they did bullet after bullet Lincoln could fly faster than the bullets. But the bullets we're going. Everywhere the ceiling the floor but the sound of screaming got the attention of Lincoln which made home stop. And look to see a grown woman who was wrapped around Emily protecting her. Lincoln was filled with anger which the started to show his body was now entirely orange and red he wasn't just a kid wearing a costume he was like a human fire. "Dare you fire upon the innocent" lincoln said as he stepped closure to the goons who were frozen not of fear but of shock the goons tried to fire at him but were still to slow. Lincoln got right in front of each goon and punched them once. Knocking them each unconscious. Lincoln then fell to his hands and knees as his fire body vanished and his normal one returned. Continued to to kneel and catch his breath. Lincoln looked up to see six more gunman all holding there pistols up to him." Don't move "they said lincoln was in no mood for listening he got up slowly and and stared at them" leave now and turn yourself in or stay and feel my wrath."the goons just cocked back there guns and aimed at him but lincoln was already a step ahead and ran at them dodging each one and one by one each of the goons fell until they were all on the ground. Lincoln turned to the people who were hiding behind walls, chairs and trash cans." You are safe now you may leave whenever you like" he said everyone ran right past him out of the supermarket. All except five including himself. Emily was kneeling down next the wounded woman whispering. "It's ok mommy it's ok". But with every time she said it her crying grew until she couldn't control herself anymore. Lincoln walked over to her and started talking to her. " you know when life gives you lemons you make lemonade" lincoln said to her. "How *sniff* do I make lemonade out of this" Emily asked. "Oh ahh ok that's was a bad example" lincoln said as he looked at the woman lying down. " here come on I'll go get help while you stay with your mom ok" lincoln said" ok" Emily replied. Lincoln then ran towards the front of the building before he was stopped by a couple." Thank you mister"the man said. It's no problem if you excuse me I have to get help. "Oh ok"the man said. " boy do we have a story to tell our eleven children" the woman said. " wait wait wait you have eleven kids" lincoln asked. " yeah we're known as the loud family and it's funny because we are kinda loud" the man said. " oh ok " lincoln said trying not to give away his identity. " ok by now "lincoln said as he bolted to the door trying not to waste any more time. So he could help Emily." Help help someone is hurt inside "lincoln said trying to get the attention of medical attention. " put your hands on your head" the police yelled. " I'm now the bad guy there all in side and knocked out" Lincoln yelled
"Yeah that kid saved us " one person yelled." Well ok then thank you sir " the police said " move out and medical help the injured".
" hi umm sir we would like to get an interview with you" I news reporter said. "Oh um ok " lincoln said.
" ok I'm live with umm what's your name sir" the reporter asked. " it's blaze " lincoln replied. " ok I'm live here with someone who single handedly took out the robbers at this supermarket " the reporter said " how does it feel to be a hero blaze". Well it feels pretty good I'm glad that everyone is now safe"lincoln replied "I have to go now by". Everyone just stood there watching lincoln confused about how he was going to leave without being followed. Lincoln activated his flame aura and took off leaving everyone on the ground shocked and as Lincoln flew back home he wondered how his sisters would react to it. Once Lincoln got to his house he opened his window and flew in careful not to make a sound. Lincoln then proceeded to take off his costume and hid it under his bed. " whew I'm tired lincoln "said as he got in his bed and looked at the clock five thirty am. " oh man I'm not gonna get any sleep today am I" lincoln said as he laid back down and dozed off into a world of dreams.
ok so this story was fun to write and tune in next time for chapter three and remember read, review and give me ideas for the story.