This is another version of Chpt. 1 Tell me what you think

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(Sesshomaru P.O.V)

'The scream he had heard must have come from near here.' He thought. As he was just about to come out of the trees, he saw the young miko his brother traveled with running towards the well. He watched her shed sad tears as she ran to the bone-eaters well. He had been watching her ever since she appeared out of the well. Even though she was human, something about her recklessness and bravery, intrigued him. He watched as she tripped seemingly over nothing, and dashed to catch her, feeling his time to act was now.

(Kagome P.O.V)

I felt my heart breaking again seeing Inuyasha and Kikyo in the clearing. They were embracing with the most tender kiss she had ever seen. This time, she could see, Inuyasha's eyes weren't blank like the last few times. They were full of life...and love he only kept for Kikyo.
'I really was just a shard hunter,' I thought sadly. I continued to cry harder and tried-but failed-to hide a hiccup. Inuyasha looked over at me, his eyes widening.
"K-Kagome...,"

"Sit!" I screeched.

He fell instantly and I took the chance to run. I ran quickly, saying sit every now and then to buy me more time. As I came to the clearing, feeling releived at seeing the well, I tripped. I kept my eyes closed. But instead of falling to the hard ground, I found myself caught in someone's arms.
'Who...?' I thought.
I looked up to see eyes like Inuyasha's. But instead of being a rich honey color, they were a deep, but beautiful, amber.
"Are you alright Miko," A deep voice asked.

"H-hai Lord Sesshomaru-Sama. I-I'm fine."

"Hn."

He set me down and I hung my head in respect.
"Arigato Lord Sesshomaru-Sama,"
I started to cry again. I sat on my knees and covered my face with my hands. I was surprised when he kneeled next to me.

"Look at me Miko,"

I looked up
He reached a hand up and swiftly wiped a stray tear from my cheek. His eyes showed all the emotion he couldn't express himself.

(Sesshomaru P.O.V)

I looked up at the darkening sky and sniffed. Inuyasha was coming.

'We need to-'

"Sesshomaru," I heard Inuyasha shout. "What the hell are you doing here?"

He looked at the Miko and saw her tearstained face.

"You did this, didn't you?" He shouted.

Of course the mutt would think it was all my fault.
He charged at me, his sword drawn. I was about to unsheath Tokijin when the Miko jumped in front of me.
"Kagome..." I whispered as the blade cut through her shoulder.

(Kagome P.O.V)

The Pain in my shoulder was excrutiating but I stood straight.

"Inuyasha," I said darkly..
His ears drooped.

"K-Kagome I-I didn't mean too... I..." Inuyasha stuttered.
I clutched my shoulder tightly.

"You didn't mean to? You didn't mean to? You bastard! Why don't you go fuck the clay bitch like you do every other night? Why don't you go be happy with her like usual and not notice my suffering! Why don't you..." I stopped for a moment. "Sit..." I whispered before I was pulled into darkness.

(Sesshomaru P.O.V)

As the Miko started to fall, I caught her and cradled her in my arms.
'It is time we take our leave'

I ran away from there as quickly as I could, masking my scent so my younger half-brother could not follow.
"You'll be safe with me..." I murmured