Mohatu
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I say it again, English is not my first language and if anything is grammatically incorrect or wrong expressed, please tell me!
Note: A lion is full-aged when he is three years old and the average lifespan is ten years. (I don't know if it is so, but in this story it is)
Some geographies: I think the Pridelands and the Outlands are in the Serengeti, the Shadowlands in Ngorongoro and the other prides like the Grasslands in Serengeti, Ngorongoro, Lake Manyara, Tarangire, Kilimanjaro and Arusha. The Haijulikani land is placed in Saadani.
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The Eusaners attacked the Mdowo, but the Sariners and the Saraners sent the Mdowo help. The Eusaners didn't know that, and so they left the Sariners and Saraners alone. After many battles with many deaths the Eusaners arranged to kill the leaders of the Mdowo, Mosi and Jana. But Mosi and Jana had two cubs: Mohatu and his brother(we don't know the name). Mohatu saw his parents fall and his reaction was completely surprising: he didn't cry or run away, he run to the lost battle. He blew the leader of the Eusaners, Teksi, in the face, and when Teksi tried to kill Mohatu by hitting him he failed and Mohatu ran away. His brother (let's call him Fred) was during the battle watched by a Sariner lioness and when the Eusaners took over the Mdowo's land. The Eusaners killed all the Mdowo lions and lionesses who had not fight and sent a messenger to Sariners and Saraners. The Eusaners wanted to rule their land. They wanted to be the most powerful tribe in Africa. And the
Sariners and Saraners had no forces because they died in the first Eusaners war(the first war between Eusaners and Mdowo(with the help of Sariners and Saraners), there will be another). All Mdowo and Fighters of Sariners and Saraners died in the war, the last were Mosi and Jana. And then all Mdowo who had not fight were executed by the Eusaners, except for Fred and Mohatu and Mohatu flew. The Sariners and Saraners agreed and "allowed" the Eusaners to take over their land.
Fred was only a baby and the Sariner lioness who watched him assert him to be be her son, to protect him. One whole year passed and the future Pridelands and the first big drought came over the land. Mohatu lived in the Haijulikani land, so far away from the Pridelands that no lion from Pridelands saw it ever before or after. But then Mohatu, returned. He went to the den of the Saraners and told them everything. Two lions and two lionesses, all kids, followed him to end the reign of the Eusaners. The Eusaners were about fifty fight-able lions and lionesses (kids and other fight-unable lions and lionesses they sent to the Sariners and Saraners and every adult Sariner or Saraner had to join the Eusaners) and their den was in a huge rock (not Priderock, there is no Priderock at this time). Suddenly the patrollion noticed the little group who was walking towards the den. He run back and alarmed the Eusaners. Teksi, the general, but not the king assembled the army. Fred was a very good fighter and Teksi's highest officer and right-paw-lion but a voice in Fred's heart advised Fred not to fight. He said loud and forcefully that he will not fight and asked the other fighters to join him. Some approvingly murmuring, some angry curses, some outraged "traitor!"-shouts. Teksi roared and ordered, that everyone would fight. But Fred ran out of the den, and about ten lions and lionesses followed, before Teksi could stop them. Teksi and thirteen lions and lionesses who were already ready for the fight followed the conscientious objectors. Fred ordered the other COs to keep running and stopped. When Teksi arrived, he fought. He killed three fighters and then was killed himself. Teksi checked that he wasted to much time by killing Fred to get the other COs. He and his group went back to the den and were joined by the other lions and lionesses. Teksi trusted in his forces, but he wanted to win a safe victory, so he used his full troop
against this ridiculous five fighters. When the two armies confronted, Teksi realized, that the enemies were cubs(he is not the smartest). First he thought they kidded but then he got the first blow. "Remember your last scar from me?" Mohatu said. The fight began and also a thunderstorm. After ten hours the battle was over. Mohatu won and all enemies were dead(except for the five who were left when Teksi died, they capitulated.), but no one of the Sariners died. Mohatu killed twenty enemies by himself. Now he roared the roar what is now called the Roar of the Elders. In this moment a lightning, the mightiest and brightest lightning a lion ever saw hit the rock of the Eusaners' den. It broke and the half rock fell over to a much smaller rock near to the huge rock.
The Saraners were amazed about the roar and the lightning, that was able to break a Mountain. Mohatu was the first restoring his poise."Let's go and tell the Sariners and Saraners who had not fight what happened!"When every animal in the lands was assembled Mohatu climbed the broken rock and delivered a speech. He spoke about Pride, Faith, Hope and never giving up. After this speech the animals cheered and welcomed their new "king". They made such a noise that Mohatu wasn't able to explain that he didn't want to become king. So he gave up (for the first time in his live) and proclaimed himself to king. King over the united land of the Mdowo, Sariners and Saraners. And so the Pridelands was born. And the former horror rock (the rock with the Eusaners' den) was named "the broken rock", but soon it became "Priderock". Mohatu also named the circle of life(but not invited it). But now you will ask: "And what happened to the COs who escaped?"
They went to the Shadow lands and started a pride:" The Shadowlions" (Asali and Nyota had already left the land).
A few weeks after Mohatu's coronation, Mohatu is now nearly 2 years old. Asali was for months on the way. Trying to survive. Her goal: a place to stay. She was on the end of her energy. Asali lay on the ground, washed ashore by a river. In the pridelands, but she didn't know that. However, suddenly a lion roared and when Asali used her last Energy to jump up and growl low but drastic. A lion(Mohatu, distrusting any strangers after seeing his parents killed by strangers), nearly I her age stood in front of her.
Five years later
This day was a great day: in the night before princess Uru, daughter of Mohatu was born.
In the night many animals who had hear about Uru came to Priderock to see for themselves.
King Mohatu and Queen Asali asked the Royal Adviser, the mandrill Zemania to show Uru to all the curious animals. So it became Tradition: when a Pridelands prince or princess is born, all animals come to see the Royal Adviser holding the cub.
Two years later
This strange lion came to the Pridelands, Ahadi. His parents are Mvua and Kivuli, he said. No one in the Pridelands knows Mvua and Kivuli. Thought Ahadi. But Mohatu knew them. They were Shadowlions. He decided to give this lion his daughter loves a chance. One day Ahadi told Uru about his origin and she was shocked, but she didn't tell her father. Mohatu thought about talking with Ahadi about his origin, but he was afraid that Ahadi could flee, and so he decided to betroth Uru and Ahadi fist.
Three years later
After twelve years living and ten years ruling the sun of Mohatu's reign set and when he died the brightest star appeared.
