Tanks 2 da muffin preson! Angelia sed we shuld do dat so we did I preciate cunzturtibe critizmisn!
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I was so happy! I was finally invited to go somewhere with someone, and what was more, with a beautiful guy! I swear, I got a jolt of energy when I saw his beautiful pale skin and perfectly messed-up brown hair. We met up after school and I went with Edward to his shining volvo. There were some really gorgeus people there, who were Edward's family. They were Rosalie, emmet, and alice.
"hi guys!" I said, happily. Maybe I would finally make friends!
"Who brought this pizza face along?" Rosalie asked, clearly making fun of me. Of course she was allowed, as she looked like someone out of a photoshoot in a fashion magazine, while I had skin like a leather bag and ugly yellow hair and small boobs and I was painfully ugly, like marilyn manson if he weighed 600 pounds (I weigh 600 pounds).
"I dunno," Emmet said "but I hope she tastes better than she looks!"
I was so saddened, being judged by these gods. I ran away with tears running down my checks. Just then Alice tripped me, and I rolled down a hill, scraping my already ugly face on the pavement. My skin smeared on the floor like jelly and I did'nt have skin in my face.
"What have you FUCKERS DONE?!" Edward yelled. They hissed but ran away scared.
"Edwar…d…" I said nearly unconscious. I was disfigured badly. Some cheerleaders laughed at me and spat on me.
"Melony… don't worry." He said tenderly. He called his dad doctor cullen and he sewed my face back on. But I got a horrible infection and my eyes and nose bled red blood and yellow pus.
"Edward… I think we should…" Carlile said concerned, but Edward cut him off.
"NO!" he said. "I can't!"
"Why?!" Carlile demanded in agony. "We NEED to!"
Just then, a huge hummer came! I recognized the guy in a wifebeater that came out… IT WAS MY RAPIST FATHER!