Hello everyone. I'm very happy with the amount of attention my story has gotten so far solely from the introduction. From now on, my chapters should be longer than the intro. Also, please notify me if I make any glaring grammar or punctuation mistakes. Also, because this story has done very well so far, I will hold it to a high standard and I will not update until I get five reviews for a chapter. This number will grow as I continue writing the story. If this standard is met. I should be putting out new chapters either weekly or biweekly. So without further adieu, here is the story. Enjoy.


I do not own Naruto.


"Get him!" Yelled one of the jounin ninjas that was chasing the twelve year old child. For some reason, as experienced as they were, the jounin were having a hard time catching him.

"Stop right there kid!" The same jounin called. However, all he received was a taunting from the child who merely stuck out his tongue and kept running. The boy turned around and with a smiling face as he squinted his electric blue eyes in glee. He turned around and was gone in a flash of blond hair. The ninja could see that the boy was definitely the son of Konoha's Yellow flash.

The jounin was about to continue the chase until he was tapped on the arm. He turned around and had to look down at the boy in front of him. This boy had spiky hair as red as blood and purple eye. This was the other son of the Hokage of the village.

"I'll take care of this." The young man said as he walked forward a little bit. The boy reached into his pouch and brought out a three-pronged kunai. The man didn't even have to guess what would happen next.

The boy flicked the kunai up towards his blond brother. As the kunai reached the child, there was a red flash and the boy that was previously next to him was right next to his brother. There was no time to react as the red-haired boy simply stuck out his foot and tripped the blond-haired boy. The child went tumbling down the roof of the building and onto the ground. When the boy recovered, he was rubbing his head.

"Ah Arashi, what the fuck!?" The blond boy exclaimed to his brother who remained stoic.

"You know that father doesn't like it when you vandalize the proud Hokage monument Naruto." Replied Arashi to the now identified Naruto.

"I don't give two shits about what that old man does and doesn't like. He only ever has time for you, so I need to preoccupy myself." Responded Naruto with a caustic tone.

"That is because I have the nine tails sealed inside of me and I need to learn to control it." Arashi said starting to get angry.

Naruto Namikaze just stared at his brother and spit at him.

"You guys suck." Naruto said as he got up and started running again. Arashi responded by throwing a kunai at Naruto and kicking him in the back of the head to the ground. He immediately picked up Naruto by the back of his collar and carried him to the academy while he was kicking and screaming.


"Ok class, today we will learn the basics of the bunshin or clone jutsu. This is-" Iruka-sensei was interrupted as the door slid open and in walked Arashi carrying a squirming Naruto.

"Sorry Iruka-sensie, I had to deal with my little brother." Arashi said causing everyone to laugh.

"You're only older by 30 minutes." Naruto whined.

"Ok guys, please take your seats." said Iruka as Arashi and Naruto sat down.

Naruto sat down next to probably his favorite guy in the class, Sasuke Uchiha. He could be an asshole sometimes, but Naruto could understand because of the Uchiha massacre.

Now the only living Uchiha were Sasuke, his missing nin brother Itatchi, and... Fuyumi Uchiha.

Fuyumi was Sasuke's twin sister and the most beautiful girl in the school. She was super cute, fun and amazing overall. Also, Fuyumi was one of the only girls that wasn't in either Arashi or Sasuke's fan base. Well, it would be weird if she was one of Sasuke's fangirls.

Nevertheless, it made Sasuke bitter and angry with pretty much everyone. However, Naruto found that he could somewhat relate to the Uchiha.

"What's up Sasuke." Naruto said with a casual greeting as Sasuke gave back a slight nod. Sasuke was really the only person that was actually nice to him, and that is why Naruto considered them friends. Naruto was brought out of his thoughts as the class resumed.

"Ok everyone, back to the bunshin no jutsu. Can someone explain to me how it works?" Asked Iruka-sensei and Arashi raised his hand.

"Yes Arashi." Said Iruka.

"Hai, the bunshin or clone jutsu is an illusory jutsu where one makes clones of themselves. However, this jutsu does not actually affect the physical world because it is simply an illusion." Said Arashi with a smug smile that made Naruto roll his eyes.

"Very good Arashi." Iruka-sensei said with a smile. He went on talking about the jutsu until class ended for the day. Naruto had some free time, so he thought he would stop at Ichiracku's before he went to see if anyone was out.


When Naruto got to Ichiraki's, he was greeted warmly by old man Teuchi and his daughter Ayame.

"Hello Naruto. What would you like?" Asked the owner of the store. He wore what looked to be a white gi and had on a chef's hat. Underneath the hat was short gray hair. He was a very lively man despite his age and Naruto found that he got along very well with Teuchi. Ever since Naruto's dad took him there for the first time, Naruto fell in love with the place. Although, Naruto hadn't been there with his father in a while because the Hokage was always so busy.

"Yeah, I'll have the usual old man. Thanks." Said Naruto causing Teuchi to grow a tick mark on his forehead because of the way the 12 year old blond boy was talking to him. However, he let it slide because he knew Naruto's situation and that he needed all of the attention that he could get.

Teuchi looked over to see his lovely daughter getting out the bowl and chopsticks to put the food that he was cooking in. She had long brown hair that was tied up in the back and was wearing a similar shirt to his. She had brown eyes and a warm smile on her face. Teuchi had already had to fend of some boys that were trying to talk to his precious daughter.

"You look nice to day." Remarked Naruto to Ayame who replied with a smile and a thank you. However, Naruto suddenly froze as he saw Teuchi turn only his head around with what could only be described as a demon-like face. He had an unusually wide smile and his eyes were glowing white.

"Narutoooo, your food is ready." The chef said in almost a whisper. Naruto didn't know what hit him because, all of the sudden Teuchi was in front of Naruto with his smile impossibly widening. Before Naruto could react, he had burning hot ramen shoved down his throat. He spat it out and backed up from the stand.

"Ah what was that for?" Asked Naruto incredulously.

"Now Naruto, you must eat your food before it gets cold." Said Teuchi standing in front of Naruto again. How was he doing that? He was moving faster than Arashi and even Naruto's father. The sickening grin widened even more as Teuchi shoved the ramen back down Naruto's throat.

All that could be heard was the screaming that sounded like it was coming from a little girl.


(At the Hokage mansion)

Minato was in his office doing paperwork when all of the sudden he sneezed. He heard a sneeze coming from the kitchen too meaning that someone must have been talking about him and his fa-, his son Arashi.

It could only be Naruto, who was probably at the ramen stand goofing off. That kid was getting to be a little too much for him to handle. With all of the recent pranks, Minato had to worry about not only the important things, but also the minor vandalism that his son was performing. Why couldn't he be like Arashi. Arashi was gifted, intelligent, and mature. He was also a lady killer not unlike Minato as a kid. However, the best thing about the older of the twins was that he inherited most of Kushina's looks. Oh his beloved Kushina, how he missed her. The only part of her left was in their son Arashi, the Kyuubi no Kitsune. Hi son had also mastered in a year two very high rank jutsus that took Minato years of practice to learn, albeit his Haraishin needed a little bit of work.

Minato put all of his work aside and went in the kitchen. He would surprise Arashi and take him out to train.


After Naruto had left the ramen stand, he went to the park. This was a place where he could go to be alone. He was usually alone anyway, the only difference being that he was alone in a crowd. Here at night, he could enjoy the piece and quite that let him think about certain things. However, this silence was short-lived as he heard footsteps behind him.

He turned around and saw none other than the beautiful Fuyuki Uchiha. All of the sudden, Naruto couldn't move because he had frozen up from nervousness. However, the raven haired girl didn't seem to notice this. She looked very similar to Sasuke, but at the same time she looked different. They had the same onyx eyes, but her face was more angular than Sasuke's. She had a very sharp beauty about her. She had long onyx hair that was pulled up into a pony tail. The way she walked showed both her experience as a ninja and the grace and dignity of a clan leader. She had captured Naruto's heart from the first day he saw her, but he never really talked to her at all. Whenever he was near her he would get nerous. However, right now wasn't the time to think about that because Naruto had to man up.

"Hi, why are you all by yourself. You're Naruto from the academy right?" Asked Fuyuki in her lovely voice that tickled Naruto's ears. Unfortunately, Naruto couldn't speak at the moment because he was caught up by the fact that she knew his name.

"Are you ok?" She asked bringing him out of his musings.

"Uh, y-yeah s-sorry." He said nervously.

"It's ok. So why are you here all by yourself? Where are your friends?" She asked again. Naruto's nervousness went away, it was replaced by pain in his chest.

"I don't have any. My brother Arashi ruined my chances of making any." He said catching the raven-haired beauty's attention.

"Wait, your brother is Arashi?" She asked a little to eagerly for Naruto.

"Yes, why?" He replied skeptically.

"Oh it's just that he is the best in the class, and he is the Hokage's son. I didn't know he had a brother. So I guess you must be the Hokage's son too." She said with a smile. Naruto couldn't believe it. Not only did she not know that Arashi was his brother, but she didn't know that he was the Hokage's son. He was getting sick as this conversation continued and he felt like he was about to throw up.

"Um, well I have to go home now, it was good talking to you." Said Naruto to which Fuyuki smiled.

"Yeah it was great meeting you Naruto-san." She replied back as Naruto walked away.

As Naruto walked through the streets of Konoha, anyone that was looking closely at him would be able to tell that he seemed to be upset. The bitter taste in Naruto's mouth caused him to grimace. As he continued to his house, only one thing was on his mind.

"You will pay Arashi!"


(Next Day)

"Good morning class, today we will be having practice spars," said Iruka-sensei as most of the class cheered, "So pick you partner and let's go outside.

"Arashi, I'm going to fight you!" Naruto said getting everyone's attention. The students were whispering and laughing which made Naruto angrier and in turn pumped him up even more.

The students all made their way outside to the sparing rings and Iruka-sensei told everyone the rules. The basic premise was not to use lethal force unless the opponent was coming at you with the intent to kill. After everyone accepted the rules, people started their spars. The audience cheered and booed as some of their friends were either victorious or defeated. Naruto didn't really care much for many of the fights. He went and sat down by a tree and waited for his name to be called.

"Naruto Namikaze, it's your turn. You will be facing Arashi Namikaze." Said Iruka-sensei as all of Arashi's fangirls cheered for him. They got into their ready stances and got ready to fight.

"Begin!" Said Iruka-sensei as Naruto ran at his brother intent on winning. He threw a sloppy punch at Arashi's face which was easily brushed aside by the latter. Furthermore, Naruto lost his balance and face planted on the ground. This caused all of his classmates to start laughing at Naruto. Nevertheless, Naruto got back up and continued fighting. He sent punch after punch at Arashi's face which were all either blocked or dodged. However, Naruto decided to mix things up a little. He sent a punch at Arashi's face which Arashi ducked under. However, Naruto was expecting this and brought up his knee which collided with Arashi's face causing him to stumble back. While Arashi was dazed, Naruto took the opportunity and punched his brother in the face causing him to fall. Everyone was speechless. The only person that had ever actually been able to even hit Arashi in a spar before was Sasuke.

"Ha, how do you like me now BIG bro." Naruto said mockingly. What he didn't notice, however, was that Arashi's eyes were shaded by his red hair.

All of the sudden, Arashi was up and running after Naruto. He got inside of Naruto's guard and, with one clean punch, knocked Naruto to the ground. Naruto went into a daze while he was lying on the ground. He was so dazed in fact, that he thought he could hear a voice.

"You are weak boy. Let me lend you some power." Said a very baritone voice in his head.

All of the sudden, Naruto could feel great power rushing through him, and for some reason there was a lust for battle in this power. On Naruto's face, his whisker marks morphed. They all got a lot thicker near his face, and stayed thinner towards the end of his cheeks. The top whisker marks curved up past Naruto's eyes and up to his forehead where they became parallel to each other. The middle whiskers stayed as they were, but the bottom whiskers curved down along his jawline and stopped at the edges of his jaw. His eyes also changed. His irises turned blood-red, but there was no pupil in them. Around Naruto's hands, a black energy with red outline formed. Then Naruto lost ocntrol of his body to the battle lust. The black and red energy formed into what looked like two kunai which Naruto threw at his brother. Arashi pulled out one of the special three-pronged kunai and deflected Naruto's own kunai. However, Arashi's danger sense went off and he jumped back as both of the kunai exploded. The explosion was still large enough to affect him. Arashi went tumbling to the ground.

"Naruto!" Iruka-sensei yelled. None of the students could do anything because they were so shocked. Iruka-sensei was about to interfere, but Arashi stoped him.

"I have to deal with this on my own." He said as he took out a bunch of three-pronged kunai and threw them around Naruto. His younger twin brother responded with a grunt and formed a two-handed sword out of the strange energy. He threw his three-pronged kunai at Naruto, which he deflected with an upward slash. Arashi then took the opportunity to use Haraishin and teleported behind Naruto in a red flash. However, what Arashi didn't expect was that Naruto would be facing him when he teleported. Naruto sent an upward slash at Arashi causing Arashi to teleport to the kunai in the air. However, as soon as Arashi got airborn, Naruto jumped up wit speed he should not have had and sent a downward two-handed slash at Arashi. Arashi put up his kunai to block, but he didn't expect the outward concentrated that the explosion caused sending him hurtling to the ground. When Naruto landed, he triumphantly beat his chest and yelled a battle cry.

"How did Naruto get this strong. He shouldn't be able to put me on the ropes like this." Thought Arashi.

"That's right Biatch." Thought Naruto fully aware of the situation. He didn't know where the power was coming from, but he didn't care. All he cared about was that he was whooping his brother's ass. The one that was so adored by everyone else would finally know his place.

Arashi decided that he had to get serious in order to beat Naruto. In a flash, he was behind Naruto who was ready with a backward slash while twisting his body. However, Arashi was also prepared and he teleported to the front of Naruto and sent a kick at Naruto's stomach causing him to slide back. He kept doing this over and over until Naruto was worn out. However, Naruto got enraged and started slashing wildly at Arashi. Arashi responded by throwing his kunai at Naruto's face which was dodged. Arashi expected this and teleported behind Naruto.

"I'm sorry Naruto." Arashi thought sadly as he kicked Naruto in the back of the head knocking him out. Everyone started cheering for Arashi. They said things like "nice job beating up that twerp" and other hurtful things. Did they realize that Naruto was his brother? The kids continued yelling mean things about hi brother until Arashi snapped.

"Shut the FUCK up!" He said silencing everyone immediately. They were so surprised that the most level-headed guy at the academy would get so angry.

"You guys are horrible. My brother is really cool, even though he is annoying, he is still cooler than all of you." Arashi said as he picked up his brother and took him to the hospital leaving everyone speechless.


(Back at the Hokage Mansion)

Naruto had recovered from his and Arashi's fight and was now sitting down at the dinner table with his brother and father. Minato was very angry with Naruto for trying to kill Arashi.

"What came over you Naruto? Why would you try to kill Arashi?" Minato asked in serious anger.

"Dad, I don't know what happened, something washed over me and I couldn't control myself." Naruto responded.

"Don't give me that bullshit! You don't accidentally run at someone with kunai and a sword without the intent to kill!" Refuted Minato, "I don't want to hear anymore about this, and next time it happens you will not be allowed to continue your training as a ninja. That is final!"

Naruto didn't respond, and the family ate the rest of their dinner in silence.


-End


That's it. I really liked this chapter and I thought that it had some good progression. The next chapter will be a time skip, so be prepared. Also guess which god it was that lent Naruto his/her power. Be sure to leave a review for me (constructive criticism would be appreciated). Remember that I will not update until I get at least five reviews on this chapter. Also, for those of you that sent a friend request on the playstation, I cannot use it right now because my father pulled the chord and hid it. :'(

- Until next time