Chapter 2: The plan
Hey. Chapter 2 is up. I know I need a few pointers on the first chapter but I not getting review to tell me what I need to change on it . I need to know. the only person who is helping my telling my if its better or not is bonus kun. Thanks u rock . Hopefully u can tell me if this chapter is better or not. Goten is 7 and trunks is 8. Well here is chapter.
Chapter 2: the plan
"WHAT, TRUNKS ARE YOU CRAZY. WHY WOULD YOU WANT TO BE EVIL." shouted Goten. He had gotten up and back away from his friend (like a crazy mad man)" you cant do this to me."
"Goten shut up don't let people here you. gosh I just asked a question. What's with the yelling?"
"well I don't know what its like to be evil but do you wanna try it out" Goten went back over to trunks and said "how about we start with satan city?" he suggested
"ya lets rob some banks. I think that's a start. What do you think?" he stared at him for a while. He knew he was thinking hard and long.
"ya lets start in the morning. I can ask if I can stay the night. Well if its ok with our moms." Goten was thinking of what his mom would say about him staying the night. Of course vegeta would not like it. Trunks interupted his thoughts.
"Well my mom would say yes. Here use my house phone to call here and hurry. We need to start planning ASAP." he handed gotten the phone and he started to dial he moms number.
"hello?" came a female voice. "so residents."
"hi mom its Goten can I spent the night with trunks? Pretty please with a cherry on top." he pleaded to his mother.
"Well ok. Stay out of trouble" she said with a serious voice.
"don't worry I will." he said im a evil voice. Then he hung up.
"Yay you get to stay. well I want to go to sleep now. we have a very, very busy day tomorrow. Goodnight Goten see you tomorrow." trunks was excited but also very, very tired. He closed his eyes.
" ok trunks remember don't tell anyone ok." he knew trunks herd him but he didn't reply he went to sleep too. Little did they know gohan was going on a date with videl in satan city.
How was that chapter? Better? Well that chapter 2. Three will be up soon. It very late I'm going to bed R&R well u already read so review. If I get 2 or 3 review chapter 3 will be up soon. BYE!