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pinksakura271: First I want to thank you for your review, second I didn't know that anyone else made a story similar to mine I always thought I was the first one. Thank you for reading my story and thank you so much for your review, I hope it was meant to be a good one.
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On to the story
MAL
A day went by and I knew that we had to tell Ben about Carlos' visions so I invited him to lunch outside in the courtyard of the school. We were all there waiting for him, it was Friday and today everyone was acting really weird. The Fairy Godmother had all classes cancelled and told everyone to have a nice day off. But we never got days off except on the weekend and the air would've chocked you if you didn't live on the Isle. I guess that's why no one is here but I couldn't seem to figure it out.
"Hey, why did you need to see me?" A voice said before it sat down next to me and kissed me on the forehead.
"Ben, there's something we need to talk about."
"I know and that's why I also wanted to talk to you." I could tell that Evie, Jay, and Carlos felt like a third wheel.
"It's going to have to wait, Carlos needs to tell you something and it's not a good thing." After a long explanation of what Carlos told us yesterday I could see the tears forming in his eyes.
"Are you okay?" I heard Evie say to Ben.
"No." He said quietly. "No." He said louder. "No!" He yelled, I could hear the anger and sadness in his voice.
"Ben what's wrong?" I asked him, I had never seen this side of him.
"Carlos, did she have brown hair?" He ignored me and banged on the table.
"Y-y-yes." Carlos spoke softly, he was scared. Ben just stood there, his face looked like he was angry but his eyes were full of tears.
"Did she have green eyes?" Ben spoke like he knew her, Carlos just nodded. "It can't be." He trailed off into his thoughts. "She's gone."
"Who's gone?" I said to him, he just ignored me, he ignored everyone.
"She's alive?" He turned to Carlos, his eyes lit up like a firework.
"Ben whoever she is, she is still alive." I could tell that Carlos was trying to calm him down, none of us saw this Ben before.
BEN
When Carlos told me all of this my brain couldn't comprehend it all. How could she still be alive? Where was she? How is she? Does she remember me? I couldn't come out of my thoughts, it was like I was stuck there. There was so many questions filling my head, so many memories. Especially the one where she was kidnapped.
*Flashback*
Fourteen-year-old Ben was playing with his sister in the forest, she was twelve at the time. They looked like they were having fun until they were followed into the forest.
"Let's play hide and seek." The little girl said.
"Okay but you count first!"
"Fine, but you owe me!" They both laughed as the little girl started to count to thirty. Little Ben took off into the woods, he was looking for a really good spot but he could still here her counting.
"One...Two...Three..." She continued counting as she shield her eyes by using a tree. Her vision was completely shielded off by the tree. "Twenty-five...Twenty-six..." The little girl was going to continue counting when someone grabbed her by her waist and picked her up. "Ben!" She yelled. "Ben help me!" Little Ben heard her and started to run as fast as his little legs would carry him, he always swore to protect her.
"Grab the boy if you can find him." A voice said to another one.
"Will do." The other one responded.
"Ben!" The little girl yelled again. "Don't come! Run away as fast as you can and don't stop! I'll be okay!" Of course he heard and he did as she told him, he turned around and ran the other way as quick as he could. He ran deeper and deeper into the forest.
"Shut up you stupid little girl!" The person yelled at her before smacking her so hard that she blacked out. The only thing she wished for at that second was for her brother to be safe. That was the day Ben lost his sister but that's also the day where he came a crossed the enchanted lake.
*End of Flashback*
Ben was snapped back into reality when he heard a loud noise, it sounded like a vehicle came to a fast stop. He could then hear it starting back up again and heading off into the distance. Just then Ben heard a someone yell out in pain, he turned towards the yell and saw Carlos kneeling over, his hands holding on to his head.
CARLOS
Everything happened so fast, Ben was off into his own thoughts and then there was a loud noise and then the next thing I knew was my head hurt so bad that I bent over and I put my hands on my head. I had no idea what was happening, all I could hear was faint voices I just assumed that it was my friends. Soon I became so overwhelmed that a black curtain came over my eyes like I was closing them and I fell into a deep sleep.
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