Here si chapter two of Naruto No Kami.
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Eleven years has passed since Naruto has seen Konoha. He stood at the height of six foot, with shoulder length blonde hair. His once bright blue eyes were now a mixture of blue and green slits. He stood in one of the many trees' that surround the village. He had on his Acolyte robes, which were a white tank, white cargo pants and white flats, along with a white hooded, sleeveless cloak. He had bandages wrapped around his arms and hands, and around his face, hiding his once famed whisker marks.
"So many years, wonder if the old man even remembers me." Naruto mumbled to himself. He leapt down to the clearing below, and pulled his hood over his head before pulling his goggles over his eyes. He stood and began walking towards the village gate.
The gates of Konoha were huge to him, but nothing he hasn't seen. He took caution steps towards it, from his past experience dealing with gates, something were behind them. When he was a few feet from them, they opened only to show two male ninja's. From Naruto's memory and what Kami told him, he guessed they were Chunin.
"Identify yourself?" asked one to the pair.
"Naruto." Naruto responded; he pulled the hood and goggles off.
"What is your reason for coming here?" Asked the other.
"Returning from training." Naruto reach into the sack on his back and pulled out a scroll with the Hokage seal. The two of the looked at the scroll before nodding and stepped aside for him to walk in. Naruto walked a few feet before one of the Chunin called him.
"You know Naruto, the village been quiet with you here." He yelled.
"No duh, who can keep this place active and on their feet." Naruto went back to walking, pulling his hood over his head again along with his goggles. He swiftly moved through the crowd, dodging the civilians and few shinobi's; when he heard his name yelled out.
"Ten minutes, really slow for gate guards." Naruto mumbled to himself as ANBU appeared around him, "Now, let's see if they still have their skills." He pulled the hood of his cloak down and inched into his custom fighting stance.
"Sir, you are to surrender yourself." Yelled the masked ninja that was the captain of the squad.
"Sure, if you can catch me." Naruto jumped back, as one ran forward. He went to deliver a punch to Naruto, who squatted down. Naruto shifted his movement around the shinobi as another one came after him. Naruto jumped to the side, round house kicking him it the back of the head, driving him into the ground. He turned as the two more came, both with their ninjato drawn. He clocked his right fist back as it burst into flames, and punched the first one in the mask. Ht sound of it cracking, followed by the sonic boom of the Ninja being sent into his partner, adding on more force as they was sent down the market street road into a venders cart. Naruto stood up, the cloak flapping in the wind; he looked around, noticing the Civilians staring at him. Then the sound of a katana being drawn and the shift in the wind cause Naruto to turn to be pinned down by the ANBU captain with a cat shape mask.
"Neko-chan, why so rough?" Naruto mumbled.
"Shut up, and surrender!" Neko said.
"Fine." Naruto answered. He looked up to see the top of the tower from his view he was in. He reached into his cloak pocket, causing for Neko to get tense and pulled out a small orb. Looking into it, he saw the Third Hokage reading a certain orange book.
"Old man, really needs to think where he reads that." Naruto said as he appeared in front of the doors to the Hokage office.
He dusts himself off before asking the lady in front of him something. "Excuses me ma'am, but is the Hokage in?" the lady sitting in front of the doors looked up at Naruto.
"Um…yes, I'll buzz you in." she said softly. The door to the hokage office opened showing a very old and tired man.
"Who is this?" He asked.
"But old man, surly you remember me?" Naruto said sounding shocked. The Hokage looked at Naruto for a few seconds before dropping his pipe from out his mouth.
"Nar-Naruto…is that really you?"
"No, I'm the damn Yondaime old man!" Naruto yelled, "of course it me."
"Wait…you know who the Yondaime is?"
"Well…blonde hair and blue eyes is really rare in the village, besides Inoichi, who if was my father; would of not placed me in a damn orphanage. So that left the Yondaime, but then the matter of who my mother is…?
"Naruto, come into my office. Hitomi please cancel all appointment and meeting I may have until I am finish with Naruto here."
"Yes lord hokage." Hitomi said as she went back to work. Naruto walked into the Hokage chambers and took a seat on the couch as the Hokage took his behind his desk.
"Naruto I am happy you are back, but since you left, the council hasn't been happy with everything." Sarutobi said as Naruto nodded.
"Yeah, I know. Fate's been keeping an eye on you." Naruto said, "Now, how are we going to do this?"
"Do what?"
"I'm a shinobi now, so…genin team or are you going to send to the fields now?"
"Oh…well I have thinking on that for the last eleven years." Sarutobi said as he pulled out a file. Stamped across it was Naruto's name along with several s-rank seals, "This is your current file, it has everything on you until eleven years ago. I want you to fill it, but, if you don't have to. This will only make the council hate or love you." Naruto let out a groan as he stood up.
"I hate filing things. This is all Kami made me do, when I wasn't learning anything." Naruto picked up the file and looked it over, "Whoa…this needs a big update, hair; still blonde" Naruto began fixing the outdate information, "Eye color; Bluish-green mix slits, height; about six foot, six foot one, weight; hundred and eighty nine lbs. Still have the exotic whiskers, shinobi rank…well I'll have you fill that out. Bloodline? Hmm…bloodline." Naruto looked up at the hokage, "Sarutobi…ready for more paper work and a bigger headache?"
"No why Naruto?"
"Bloodline; Fire release, wind release, lightning release and immortality." Naruto said with a smile, "Along with that…everything should be up to date."
"Good…I decide to test your skills." Sarutobi said, "You will meet me here at the end of the week. Then we will head to a secured training area to test you in; ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu and any other skills you have." Naruto began to laugh.
"Then old man, I want a girl with a lot of stamina, because the skills I have will leave her restless and unable to walk." Sarutobi launched out of his chair with a nose bleed as Naruto walked over and picked up the orange book in the top drawer, "Hmm maybe page 146 will be a good place to start." Naruto mumbled as he flipped through the book.
The end of the week came as Naruto walked into the hokage chamber. He looked up to see a blonde hair girl standing in front of the desk. She was wearing the standard Chunin vest over an orange mini shirt; she had on green cargo short that hanged loose off her; black high top shinobi sandals and black fingerless gloves. She turned around to the sound of the door opening and looked at Naruto. That's when Naruto noticed her eye, light green almost transparent with swirls.
"You actually took what I said seriously?" Naruto said, "I was kidding, Kami let alone Tifa would kill me if I did any of those things." Sarutobi let out a groan.
"Naruto this here is Tasu Torme; Heiress to the Torme clan*." Sarutobi said, "she was here turning in her reports on the clan. You may leave Tasu." Tasu bowed before walking out the room.
"An Al-Bhed here?" Naruto asked as took a seat on the couch, "When did she and her clan come here?"
"Not that long ago; her clan came about a year after you left, they just join a year ago." Sarutobi answered, "She was the first of her clan to have chakra, and be able to wield it."
"Hmm…she would be nice to have on a team." Naruto said as he stood up, "So let's get this test done with, shall we." The Hokage nodded as he placed his hand on Naruto's shoulder. They shunshin out of eh office, appearing a clear that was training grounds zero commonly known as the Hokage Pit. Naruto looked round, noticing only three people was standing under a tree, and roughly about thirty ANBU ninja's scatter around. He then looked over to see the three old people that made up the Hokage's advisers.
"I see that you took precautions." Naruto said with a smirk.
"Well…I didn't." The hokage said, "They did." He pointed to the advisers, "It seems you stunt you did when you arrived sparked a few old memories."
"Hmm…let them think what they want." Naruto pulled off his white cloak and walked towards the center of the field, "Ninjutsu, you're up!" Naruto yelled as a man with gray gravity defined hair and mask stood up and walked over to him.
"Hello." He said with eye smiles, "My name is Hatake Kakashi; I will be testing your ninjutsu skills."
"Sure. Just don't get mad when you lose." Naruto said. Kakashi just nodded as he walked back a few paces. They both dropped into a fighting stance.
Kakashi went first as he went through a few hand signs.
"I'll give you a simple low level fire attack to start off." Kakashi said as he finished, "Fire style; fire ball jutsu!" He sent a small car size fire ball at Naruto. Naruto just smirked as swat the ball away with his right hand, shooting out his left as he release fire small fire balls. Kakashi jumped back as the balls of fire it the ground. What shocked everyone was the mini explosion that happened they hit.
"Shit!" Yelled Kakashi as he landed on his feet, "Earth style; earth spike jutsu." He said as she slammed the palms of his hands on the ground. Spikes of earth shot up out of the ground, traveling towards Naruto. Naruto let out a laugh as he stuck his hand in his pocket's as he began dodging the spikes. Everyone was shocked at his speed as he dodged the spike, making some of the crash into each other.
"Lightning style; lightning surge jutsu!" Kakashi slammed his hand to the ground, causing a surge of lightning through the ground, "Ha…try to dodge that." Kakashi smirked as Naruto was stricken. Naruto began to spas as the lightning flowed though him, He curled up in the air, screaming before laughing as he opened up, releasing a wave of lightning. Kakashi took the hit, sending him back against a tree. Naruto began going through hand signs when he heard Kakashi say something.
"I give!" Kakashi yelled. Naruto stopped as smirked, "He's at low, maybe mid Jonin with ninjutsu." The hokage nodded as Naruto fell to a lotus position.
"Hmm…I say different, but since you're the one testing." Naruto let out a sigh as he lay back against the ground, "Genjutsu…if you don't mind…I'll fight you last." He heard a female say yes as he jumped to his feet. A sound rang out that made everyone look at Naruto. "What?" He asked as the sound hit his ears, "Oh for the love Kami!" He reached into his pocket and pulled out a black flip phone, "technology from the God Realms. Hello?"
"Naruto Uzumaki?" said a female voice.
"Sigh…Yes Tifa?" Naruto said.
"Have you heard from Cloud?"
"No…I thought he was with Vincent. Why?"
"He disappeared and no one can find him." Naruto let out a growl as he began crushing the phone.
"Tifa…when I get the time; I'll come to Midgar and look for his blonde ass. Then I'm going to drag it back."
"Thank Naru." Tifa hanged up as Naruto slipped the phone into his pocket.
"Taijutsu…get ready to go all out, because I really want to kill a certain blonde right now." Naruto said as a man in green spandex jumpsuit appeared in front of him.
"The sexy green beast of Konoha; Gai is here!" he said as Naruto punched him in the face. Gai bounce off the ground and did a back flip and landed on his feet, "My youthful opponent, packs a punch." Naruto appeared on his right side and deliver a back kick to Gai's back, forcing him to the ground. This went on for a few minutes until Naruto called it quits.
"Why my youthful opponent?" Gai asked.
"Because; if I continued, you would be hospitalized for the next month. My strength increases with my anger or something like that." Naruto walked away as pulled off the tank top his wore, showing the crowd the multiple seals and tattoos.
"Genjutsu if you don't mind, I'll like to continue after we had a break." The person he was talking to was Kurenai as she stepped over to him and nodded. Naruto took a seat on the grass as he pulled out the blue orb from his pocket. He looked into it to see the Tasu sitting in a tree looking at a training ground. He looked closer to see that she was staring at him.
"Hmm…and Tifa says girls can't be perverts." Naruto said as he stood up. "Tasu you can come out now…you hiding spot been spoiled." Everyone turned too looked at Naruto as the tree over head began to rustle. Out came Tasu, landing in a crouch.
"Rammu Tasu. (Hello Tasu)" Naruto said in a tongue that no one could understand.
"Oui cbayg Al-Bhed? (You speak Al-Bhed)" Tasu responded to him. Her hands went behind her back, gripping the handles of her two swords.
"Oac, E mayntat ed vnus y vneat. (Yes, I learn it from a friend.)" Naruto answered, he reached up to the top of the bandages and loosened them, and he inched into his fighting stance and pulled out a Kyoketsu-Shoge**. He stuck his hand through the ring and griped the chain link. Tasu let out a growl as she pulled out her two swords.
"Oui csamm uv Home yht tacand. (You smell of Home and Desert.)" She growled. Before anyone could blink, she charged, "Oui femm hud tecnacbld so Lmyh! (You will not disrespect my clan!)" She roared as she lunged at Naruto, who in turn use the chain link to block. Naruto jumped back, swing the chain around, wrapping it around the blade of one of her swords.
"Is that so?" Naruto said in a cold voice, "How does me smelling like a desert and Home have to do with disrespecting your clan." Naruto gave a soft yank on the chain, pulling it out of her hands, "Divine style Genjutsu; Destiny shores." Naruto mumbled as he vanished from her view. She looked around, seeing water upon water; she was standing on a beach with a small tree house like town.
Naruto sat next to the hokage panting hard as he gripped his right shoulder. He looked at Tasu look around, lost within his genjutsu and let out a laugh.
"So…still feel like going against me." He asked Kurenai who in turn said no, "good…I feel tired now." Naruto said as he passed out.
"Lord Hokage…I give him jonin level genjutsu skills, along with taijutsu." Kakashi said as Tasu broke out of the genjutsu and looked up at Sarutobi.
"Tell him to meet me at training ground six at the end of next week for practice." She said as she left via wind shunshin.
*Torme Clan- The clan originated in Spira, the crossed the realm into the Elemental Countries. Only hundred came, all are now civilian in Konoha. Tasuh, more commonly known as Tasu translate from AL-Bhed into "Demo" or "Demon". She is currently rank Chunin and is an expert swordsman.
** Kyoketsu-Shoge- is the chain weapon that was used in the movie "Ninja Assassin".
Question: Should i have Naruto promoted to chunin/jonin or have him go to the academy? please leave your answer in the review.