A.N. Please review guys I need the feed back
I walked gingerly down the stairs to the exit of school after final bell. I was excited to make my way home and continue my education how I viewed fit. Yeah, I was grounded, but that's past tense so now I could venture to the main city library and indulge into books not yet touched by my hands lusting for knowledge. I was almost smiling as I was walking down the hallway leading outside into the world of true learning, when I was grabbed by the waist and legs and raised into the air.
It didn't take long to figure out I was being carried by both Lee and May Kanker. Interestingly enough I found myself being carried by Lee like a binder at her side and May holding my legs in place so I might not run away. I simply tensed every part of my body to make it a little easier on the two girls as they dragged me to an environment, I was sure would be, filled with suffocating amour. "So ladies, can I trust this will be done by five at the very latest?" I stressed the word very to make them understand I would be accepting my fate, but was hoping to be done by a reasonable time. "I only ask so I can be sure I make to the library today it would be lovely if I did indeed make it today is all." My plan might require patience, but dealing with the ridicule that came with being an outcast as a kid certainly trained enough into me.
"That's all up to our sister, bub." Lee retorted, with sarcasm lightly sprinkled in her response.
"Yeah, Marie wants to see her lova boy" May giggled, the imperfect speech I was hoping was intentional. "So you be quite until we get there and make our sister happy, mister man." I smiled on the inside since it seemed my plan was working, The sisters only kidnapped one of us at a time if one sister in particular was upset.
Soon I found myself at the boiler room door as my two escorts opened the door and licentiously threw me down to the cave of amour that would on any other day been a death sentence, but this was going to speed things along in my plan. "Curse the human restraint of not being able to fly or float without machines." I said getting up from a somewhat painful tumble down the stairs, "Really it's a miracle I have no damage to my skeletal structure or any internal organs." I mused to myself dusting myself off and straightening my black tie. "Miss Marie I do implore that we speed this up for I really do not wish to stay past a certain time." I spoke aloud unsure where she was yet.
"Ohhh. So have you decided that I was right about how you feel about me?" she smiled walking to me out of the shadows. I merely look at her eyes glazed slightly and arms out to the side.
"No, but I do see the point in resisting. The conversation we held today still applies, you will get bored or tired be done and I will walk away removing any evidence you attacked me." My voice flat and unwavering. In all honesty I was nervous, questions flew through my head; Would this work? Will she see through the act? How long will this take? I needed to stick to my guns though so I remained visibly calm.
"I know what your doing oven mitt. Pretending like you don't care to make me get bored. It would work if it were not for my women's intuition." Wow, I was impressed she caught on quickly, but I wasn't going to show my hand that easily.
"Marie, I'm sorry to disappoint, but it's no act I assure you." It wasn't a lie, I cared enough to make her leave me be, but I had no romantic feelings for her. "You have become like washing dishes to me. I don't like dealing with it, but if I need to might as well stop fighting it, but I won't be happy either."
"Yeah so you say." she got close to me and seemed to sniff me, probably to see if I was sweating and showing fear, my cologne should keep her senses confused. The look of sadness washing over face confirmed she couldn't tell I was nervous.
"Are we done?" I asked raising an eyebrow. I was beginning to lose patience and wanted to be set free soon.
"Not even close oven mitt I will make you feel something by the end of it." she smiled and tackled me plastering her lips all over my being while I just sat there stone faced accepting it all with the removal off my emotions. Thankfully meditation helped me learn to clear my mind and focus on other things.
About 45 minutes later I was being told to get out by an annoyed Kanker sister. I stood up and walked up the stairs and walked out the door. Dusting myself off and using a makeup removal wipe I had in my messenger bag I addressed the other sisters and walked out the door wishing them a pleasant evening.
It was almost four and I was in my gas saving car headed to the Library in Lemon-brook. As I took the off ramp to the city I looked at myself in the rear view mirror and smiled as my plan was starting to work like a charm. "Never underestimate the science of the mind." I laughed to myself and pulled onto the main street leading me to the library. I was in and out pretty quickly I knew what books I wanted to acquire and was driving back to Peach Creek with an old anti war novel that even had a movie that inspired a metal bands numerically named hit song, a biography about Pavlov, seemed appropriate, and a few graphic novels I decided to get since having them was one way I could get Ed to read with me.
Soon after arriving to my home I quickly completed my sticky note chores and went upstairs to do a bit of reading before bed. I wish I could say I had homework, but on a rainy day a few weeks back I decided to get a head start and already had my semesters worth of homework done. I then rested for the night after getting a few chapters in the anti-war novel in and was ready to start the next day.
A.N. So yeah chapter two yay lol. The anti war novel is "Johnny Got His Gun" its a great read and the movie would inspire Metallicas song "One" both Johnny got his gun and Metallica and their song are owned by their respected parties I own nothing but you should give the music video the movie and the book a go they're all well done and I am pro war and saying this.