Okay, so here is the revamped second chapter, and this is where it really starts to differ from the original story,

but hopefully not so much that you all hate it.

"We would like it if you could check on our two friends here in the bed" Nikki replied

"alright, would you like to tell me what happened to them, they look fine to me. Maybe a little bruised but nothing life-threatening at first glance" he said walking to the bedside table and taking out some equipment.

"they took a pretty large fall, and where unconscious for a while, so we though that having them checked out would be best. Better safe than sorry you know?" Holli said. The doctor looked at Riku first, checking his vitals and looking for any internal injuries or damage to the skull.

He gave Riku a good bill of health, saying that he was in perfect physical condition, and then bandaged up some of his slightly more than minor cuts.

Then he went to look over Sora. Since Sora was still unconscious he used his stethoscope to check his breathing and used a portable x-ray to check for broken bones and internal bleeding.

"All is good with this young lady," commented the doctor. After this prognosis the others looked at him in shock.

"Wait, did you say LADY?" asked Riku after coming out of his stupor.

"Well yes, i mean she is a female? right?" the doctor now had a confused look on his face.

"Um, no Sora is a male, as in a boy, you know what I'm saying, right?" Riku was almost in hysterics by now.

"well, yes I do speak the queens English but you must understand, this teenager is pregnant, males don't have the capacity to become pregnant" the doctor was starting to think that these people were a few screws short.

" No, Sora is a male" Riku said, astounded. Wondering how it was that his best friend could be pregnant.

"Well, he... she... he... Sora is pregnant. And to tell you the truth I am really not qualified to deal with a pregnant woman, let along a pregnant male, I'm only a house doctor. I'll be on my way, if you have any questions I would suggest you contact a specialist" the doctor stated before running like a bat out of hell.

"Damn, this is going to be hard on him, he's in a new area and he's pregnant, I wonder how he'll take it." Riku thought. Looking over his friend with tender eyes.

By this time Holli, Yuki-chan, and Nikki had left, thinking that Riku and Sora needed some space.

While Riku was thinking Sora woke up wondering "where am I? what happened? where is Riku?"

"So, Sora, you're awake now?" Riku asked, watching Sora's eyes slowly open.

"Yeah, hey Riku, do you know where we are?" Riku sighed, "well, not totally, but i do know who's house we are staying in, their names are Holli, Nikki, and Yuki," Sora sat up and winced " hey take it easy Sora, don't sit up so fast you'll get dizzy" Riku said reaching out to steady him.

" Why are you being so helpful Riku? Normally you'd be punching me in the arm for falling unconscious" Sora asked looking up at him from his spot leaning against the pillow. Riku winced, dreading actually asking what he was about to.

"Sora, did you know?"

"know what Riku" Sora started to get nervous, hoping that Riku wasn't asking about what he thought he was asking about.

"Did you know that you were pregnant?" Riku said looking into Sora's eyes, watching him, looking for the truth.

"y-yes" Sora whispered, closing his eyes and bracing himself for the blow he was sure was coming.

"Why didn't you tell me? Did you not trust me?" Riku asked. Hoping that it wasn't because Sora didn't trust him.

"N-No, I trust you Riku really I do!" Sora shouted, nearly in tears at the thought of not trusting his friend.

"Then Why Didn't You Tell Me!" Riku shouted, starting to get angry now that the shock had worn off.

"BECAUSE I WAS SCARED!" Sora screamed " I- I was s-scared". Tears formed in his eyes slowly making paths down his cheeks.

"shush Sora" Riku said, holding his head up and wiping away his tears with a finger. Sora just started crying harder and launched himself at Riku holding on to his shirt for all he was worth until finally he cried himself to sleep.

so there you have it. completely different right? but still just as good i hope.

so please read and review. leave your thoughts, your hopes, your dreams. and i'll see you all next time!