Wow I thought the other authors were just kidding when they said reviews kept them going,heh guess I was wrong. I'm not sure when the next update will be probably in January. Well enjoy the chapter
Bold writing – demonic or summoned creatures speaking
bold italics – demons or summoned beings thinking
italics – people talking inside other's heads or thinking
Disclaimer: hey yeah I forgot this last time so I don't own Naruto I do however own Akaken and all other OC's
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"Oh stop sulking already." A voice rumbled in the fog of the aether. Here Akaken could loosely make out the form of the owner of the voice, it was tall and vaguely humanoid with the exception of spiky appendages protruding from his shoulders and knees.
"How would you know? You never had anyone you considered a friend, only playthings that amused you before you killed them." Came the sharp reply however his tears took the edge of his words.
"Yes friends, people you have fun with and whose company you enjoy if anything I had more friends than you and I never put a wall of earth between us." The figure replied his head tilted to one side as if confused as to why his friends were different to Akaken's friends. "Anyway this is beside the point you have had to leave thousands of worlds behind all of them equally painful why does this one bother you so much? The only good I can see of it is that you have successfully proven that you can actually cry when you are nothing more than a spirit."
Akaken wiped the tears from his eyes and said "The difference is she died never knowing how he felt about her but I suppose you wouldn't understand that. Still I suppose your right what's done is done and if I dwell on it you will simply enjoy it all the more." He sighed and for the first time in his one hundred years of existence looked tired.
"Oh I don't enjoy it."His voice took on an almost primal glee and Akaken could practically see him grinning. "I live for it. Anyway as delightfully tasty as your self-piety is I came to tell you someone managed to summon one of the primordial beings."
Akaken was visibly shaken, "What that's not possible, if it were one of the gods or at least Lord Death would know." He paused for a thought. "And you would be dad and I"
"Would have been dead over a century ago, where is the point in that?"
"Maybe, but I would have died with my wife and seen my child born" he smiled at the memory of his wife. "Anyway lets go there its not like there's anywhere better" and maybe I can kill him for good. Akaken smiled at the thought of his freedom.
"Agreed if we go straight to the location there's less chance that the technique will be lost." And if I can get out he will never be able to seal me before I can get away.
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"Why me? Why must this always happen to me?" Naruto thought as he ran down the streets of Konoha. Since being thrown out of the orphanage two years ago this had become a regular occurrence and Naruto had quickly learnt the best escape routes from the mob. The Mob was larger than usual this had happened last year as well actually now that he thought about it, it had been exactly one year ago. As he was finishing the thought he felt a bottle narrowly miss his left cheek.
"At least it wasn't one of those weird knifey things" was Naruto's only reaction to it, he had learnt years ago that if he recoiled the mob would get closer and through more things eventually leading up to a thorough beating when the mob finally caught up to him.
"Finally" He thought as he turned left sharply narrowly missing a fragment of glass which had smashed on the corner next to him. He had managed to figure this one out just a few weeks ago, the third slat from the right was supported on the other side enough that it could support his weight if he ran round the corner fast enough he could jump of the wall with enough height to throw himself over the fence.
"Now I've just got to find somewhere to hide" After the jump Naruto had pressed his back against the fence he could hear the whisperings of the crowd.
"He cant have gone over"
"Nah not even he would be that stupid"
"Shouldn't we check?"
"In there house? Are you mad?"
"They'll kill him, cold as there eyes that lot"
Silently Naruto began creeping round the fence, deciding that if the mob were more afraid of these people than they wanted to kill him he probably shouldn't be here.
"mhph mhph" Naruto broke out into sprint after hearing this afraid sounds meant people, people meant pain. He broke into a clearing just before a gate the sounds were coming closer he hid in the nearby tree.
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"Ready?" The figure was starting to recede into the fog of the aether.
"As I ever will be." "Finally I can get rid of him" as soon as the words were out of my mouth a huge tear in the aether formed a black fire along its edges but instead of destroying the space around the rip it was slowly working into the rip. Akaken stepped through it.
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In a burst of fire a man appeared in front of the gate from where Naruto was hiding he could see he was wearing a black mesh shirt with long sleeves with a pair of black ninja style shorts. His hair was a dark brown and tied back in a ponytail his eyes were a sky blue but held such knowledge and pain that after seeing them Naruto could no longer believe he was merely the fifteen years he looked.
He had begun to look towards Naruto's location when a large man looking about thirty five rushed into the clearing carrying a large sack on his shoulder.
He swore leapt to one side and swiftly placed the sack on the floor.
"You might as well just stand there boy" he directed his voice at the man who had just stepped out of the flames "It'll be quicker that way" he said with a confidant grin.
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Akaken stood there bemused for a moment then began to laugh.
"hahahaha you think haha you can take me? Oh this is too perfect. I sorry I just watched one of my friends die then a mere kidnapper turns up to challenge me." "dammit that kid had better take the hint an get that girl out the bag"
"A MERE kidnapper? I am the great and mighty Shuurai I"
"Lightening strike? Gimme a break a slug could run faster than you. Even carrying the girl but since I could use a punch bag" He hit his chest with his fist. "Then give it you best shot" a mocking smirk appeared on his lips.
With a growl Shuurai flashed through a set of hand seals. "Lightning Release: Lightening Beast" A wolf about the height of a mans waist appeared and guided by lighting connected to Shuurai's hand ran at Akaken.
"Hm" Akaken said in a bored tone "You call that a Lightening Beast? Here let me show you how its done." He held out his hand and as the wolf jumped the lightening connecting it to Shuurai disappeared the wolf stopped turned and with a mocking grin grew and transformed into a huge dragon which playfully snapped at him. "But like I said I'm in desperate need of a punch bag."
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On hearing the mans need of a punch bag Naruto quickly glanced round worried he meant him.
No. He was safe. "Wait a minute why did he look at me each time he mentioned the..."
He jumped quickly to the right and hid again just in time to see the Cloud Nin fly through the tree barely conscious.
"Shit I best grab that sack before he decides to use me!" Naruto ran for the sack.
"He's going for the girl. I cant let him have her the wall was damaged in the last attack a Flash Step might give me enough time to take her eyes then Besshi can get them back to Kumo. But first…" He flashed through some hand seals.
"Lightening Release: Five bullets" from his hand five flashes of lightening appeared and instantly shot of towards Naruto's back.
"That hurt" the man was standing at his back.
"What the… I didn't hear him move I'm slipping I gotta practice the villagers will actually hit me next time." Naruto finally reached the sack when…
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