Hey 'Angelic Kitsune', I'm a Guy. And .angel.del.silencio. I'll try to follow your suggestion but could you tell me what does choppy mean?
I'm sorry; I forgot to introduce the characters to you. Here goes:
Lee- A dark guy who is intelligent and cunning.
Ray- A guy with short and spiked up hair (he loves chicken!) and also Lee's sidekick.
Tyson- Kai's best friend.
Max- Kai's second best friend.
And here we continue with 'Love Sucks':
Kai is a cunning guy, and with mysterious smile of his, nobody could understand what was going on in his head. NOBODY.
That's what people think.(Don't You?) But actually he is a very innocent guy with that sapphire-like eyes and the chubby skin, he was the most sober looking in the class, or should I say school?
He lived two lives- one with his friends and one with his family, but personally, he liked the friend life better.
At school next day:
Kai comes up to Max "What's up, dude?"
"Hi," said a gloomy Max.
"Hey, what's the matter?"
"My parents have taken my Gameboy and said that I can't have it until my exams are over."
"Cheer up. You can have mine. By the way you come to my house in the weekends. You can play with it then."
"Thanks"
"No problem. By the way here is a joke I heard the other day:
A couple of redneck hunters are out in the woods when one of them falls to the ground. He doesn't seem to be breathing and his eyes are rolled back in his head.The other redneck starts to panic, then whips out his cell phone and calls 911.He frantically blurts out to the operator, "O my gawd! Help! My friend just died. What can I do?" The operator, trying to calm him says, "Take it easy. I can help. Just listen to me and follow my instructions. First, let's make sure he's dead." There's a short pause, and then the operator hears a loud gun shot!!! The redneck comes back on the line and says, "OK, now what?"
Max had a problem with laughing. He just could not control it!!!
"Cool, where do you get these jokes?"
"Long live the internet! Let's go. Come."
As they were moving they saw Hilary with ...Ray!