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I sighed, this Grell person was becoming unbearable.
"And Bassie and I would be the perfect couple, but so would Will and I. Well, actually I would be a perfect couple with anyone really." Grell said blabbering on and on about his man troubles.
"I really couldn't care less Mister Sutcliff. As I have previously stated, the only reason why I am traveling with you is simply because you know they way, not for any other reason. I will be leaving you as soon as possible." I said trying to squash his annoyingly persistent good mood.
"Oh dear, you certainly are like your Father! I simply can't wait for when you're to be reunited. Maybe you can melt his heart of ice and he will finally realize his complete and utter love for me, and me alone! Oh and his fatherly love for you of course." He said, my harsh words seeming to have no effect on him.
If he is used to such treatment then I suppose he might be right about me being like my father.
I wonder if my father will teach me about this world, although I don't think that demons would have any bond with their kin.
It would serve no purpose for an experienced demon to be dragging around a mere baby, I might have to offer him something in exchange for his help.
"Speaking of not being able to wait for our arrival, when shall we arrive at the household of my father's master?" I asked more than slightly annoyed with Grell for taking so long.
"My my impatient one aren't you, but I can understand. You just can't wait to see your father!"
More like I can't wait to get away from you I thought.
"But we will be arriving in almost 2 minutes if you must know" Grell said sounding very pleased with himself.
"I thought it would have been faster," I say trying to bring down his ego, "you've been running this whole time dragging me behind you so we should have been there ages ago if you really are a grim reaper."
"You're so critical, just like your father! Oh it makes me excited just to think of my dear, dear Bassie!" Grell squealed.
Just then a large manor appeared around a bend the road.
"OH BASSIE I'M HOOOOOOOOOOOME" Grell yelled.
A darkly clad figure accompanied by a child exited the manor and started toward us.
Grell released his hold on my arm and ran to the figure, who was dressed in a suit with a tail coat.
I could tell at once that this must be the demon Sebastian Michaelis, I could feel his power radiating off him in waves.
He had pale skin, red eyes and hair as dark as night, he held up a white gloved hand out to stop the over enthusiastic Grell Sutcliff.
"Well hello Grell, I can't say it's a pleasure to see you." The demon said as Grell ran into his hand at full force, falling back word, blood running down his face.
"Oh Bassie as cruel as ever! But that's what I love about you!" Grell said flinging himself at the demon who just round house kicked him aside.
"Wait, Sebastian that idiots brought someone with him" my father's master said.
Sebastian looked up, then he stared at me in what seemed to be shock.
"My, My I didn't expect this" Sebastian said under his breath.
"Well Sebastian, who is it?" The young boy said impatiently.
"I am Sebastian's daughter." I said realizing that the young boy was also a demon, "And who might you be?"
"I am Ciel Phantomhive. I never knew you had a daughter Sebasitain." Ciel said.
"Neither did I Young Master. How long have you been alive?" my Father questioned.
"A couple months, but I've only been in this form for a little while." I then explained to them about the whole business with my mother.
"She is quite like you Sebastian, but I suppose that is to be expected since she is so closely related to you." Ciel said addressing Sebastian who I've figured out is his butler.
"May I ask why you have come here?" Sebastian asked addressing me.
"I know little about this world, or any other, I was hoping to learn more about it from you." I said hopefully.
"No offense but why would we help you. Demons aren't really the sentimental type so it's not like we are going to help you just because you and Sebastian are related," Ciel said coldly.
"I could help you. I may not be very powerful yet but my service would be better than any human" I said.
"You're in luck, I currently am working on a particularly complicated case. Sebastian will teach you all that he knows and in return you will help me whenever it is needed with the case," Ciel said. "Is that fine with you?"
I nodded relived that I would finally be less helpless.
Then the boy lifted his eye patch revealing what I took to be Sebastian's seal and he said, "Sebastian I order you to educate your daughter until she is almost as powerful as yourself."
"As you wish Young Master" Sebastian said bowing, "Come along madam," he said holding his gloved hand out to me.
I took his hand and we started to walk toward the manor.
"Bassie, wait for me!" Grell yelled springing up from where he had been sitting quietly and ran toward us.
Sebastian sighed and then called, "Pluto!"
I heard a rumbling and then a giant white dog bounded toward Grell and started to chase the grim reaper away.
"So his training has paid off," Ciel said, "Oh and I never learned your name." He said this time to me.
"I don't have one," I said.
I had never really accepted the name my mother gave me as my own, in fact I simply refused to be called by the title "Meredith"
"Well Sebastian she is you daughter why don't you name her" Ciel asked.
"She could be called Ravenna, is that acceptable to you Young Master?" Sebastian asked.
"It's fine with me, Ravenna. I like it. Is that alright with you?" Ciel asked me.
"Yes, I suppose its fine" I said, although I really didn't care.
"Okay Ravenna it is! Now you and Sebastian need to get to work. We need to start on the case as soon as possible!" Ciel stated.
Then Sebastian led me into the Phantomhive Manor.