Reviews:
XMistressChaosx- Thanks~! :D Hope you can enjoy this part too~!
HighOffOfSouthPark- Temporarily? Noooo! Damn, I would never even tempt to try and write like her again, if I were you. I've already done it once or twice and that's enough for me. Not a fail, very good review is what I saw :D I highly doubt she cuts cause she's probably too afraid to do it. If I'm going to be honest, I really hope she doesn't cut. Cause even though she writes terrible, I wouldn't wish for anyone to die from suicide. Cheers :D Oh yes, definitely. I watch Naruto only for the amazing green colour that is the trees. I know, it makes you wonder where it comes from 0.0 Okey, dokey~! :3 Something along xxxbloodyristsxxx. Try that~! I don't even know how I found it in the first place XD Okay then~! C:
2lazy2thinkofaname- I figured she would kind of keep to Harry Potter but no, she has to ruin everything I like by going onto Naruto as well. I swear, if she moves onto South Park, there's no hope for us left. I know, I was shocked that Sasuke didn't even spring forth an emotion other than to find it cute :O Sent it already ;) Check your PM~!
Cupcake Queen Liz- I know, I know -_- I wish she would leave everything I like alone. She can touch Twilight, she can touch 90210 and she can touch Shugo Chara but if she even dares to go near South Park, Family Guy or Spongebob (I doubt she would but I'm just saying), there will be hell to pay.
ThexScribe- Ooh, sounds like I could be provided well. Okay, I'll carry on~! :D
A/N: Here's another chapter. I have had a terrible cold since a week ago and it's clearing up now slightly so I haven't been having the best week ever. But without further ado, here is the commentary.
AN: fangs 4 all da good reviews!
You…got good reviews? …
WHAT?
u rock goffs1!1! glad 2 c da prepz r not flamming now!1! FUK U RAVEN!11! GIVE ME BAK DAT MCR ALBUMN U STOOLE!1!
Jesus, you have a bad temper. Have you ever thought that she lost it and…Actually, you know what? I'm not even going to reason your friend out of this one. She agreed to be your friend, she suffers the consequences.
after walking around for a wile i found the hokages office. i went in nd explained my situashun to sunaday.
Sunday? Do you mean 'Tsunade'?
"that is impossible you nitwit buffoon!" she yelled at me and had some jonin come in and ite me up. dey put me in a white jacket
Which is definitely reasonable.
wit no sleeeves. i struggled to get out den my built chakra built up nd i did a giant wind jutsu dat nocked everyone out and blew the coat of my body!1!1!
Ooh, you got out of jacket. Look at how brilliant you are, you little star.
i dug in my poket and got my cell fone out. "see? this stuff is commn where i come from."
Um…I hate to burst your bubble (Who am I kidding, this is going to be fun) but…they're not going to be that excited to see a phone. I mean, they don't have them, true, but they have walky-talky's and they have TV's. They don't need anything else electronic so…yeah.
"r u from da future?" soonaday asked
"no u idiot im from another universe like i keep saying"
Hey, you have no right to speak to the Hokage like that!
"ok then there is an apartment down the street wit a fridge and stuff so u can move in there"
D: …Sure, why not? I mean, Naruto gets yelled at constantly when he calls Tsunade granny but you…You can get away with it, obviously. What was I thinking? –Rolls eyes-
i frowned "am i going 2 pay 4 it?"
"not until u pass ur genin test nd start doing misions"
Actually, Naruto had to always pay for his apartment, you know, because you have to pay for it as soon as you move in.
"ok" i walked down da street nd opened the door 2 my apartment.
Is your apartment just right outside her bloody office? Eh, whatever… -Sighs-
i opened da fridge nd saw it was stocked wit yummy food like ramen nd pocky (AN: cuz she's in japan so dat's wut dey eat ther)
Ah, yes, in Japan they eat nothing but Pocky and Ramen. They never eat anything like Sushi, Onigiri, Domburi and Fried rice. Nope, not at all.
nd there were a lot of ninja scrolls n da booksehvles. i read some so i culd be a ninja nd do justu (AN: the wind jutsu was an acident cuz she's super powerful)
Like, cha. What were you thinking? That she was just a regular ninja who actually had to learn her powers? Pfft, that's crazy.
and then i took a shower. i changed into a blak plaid mini, a strechy tight t-shrit with mcr ritten across the front, riped red fishnets, black boots wit red roses on dem, nd rist cuffs wit spikes on them. i brushed out ma hair nd put a hair clip made out of an oldleather jacket and it's zippper in it.
i went out in front of ma apartment nd waited 4 sauskue to pick me up.
I hope Sasuke has changed his mind by now and figured "Nah, she's a crazy bitch, I'mma go sex Naruto up". I mean, that's just my thought.
A/N: And because, as always, this chapter was short, I'm just gonna go and put another two chapters into this one.
U PREPZ QUIT FLAMINGD DA STORY K!11! DNT SEND ME STUPID PMS IF U DONT HAVE NYTHING GOOD 2 SAY ND DONT REVIEW WIT A FALME K!
Huh…So, ever considered anger management classes?
raven im soooo sorry i found da mcr album under ma bed PLEASE FORGIVE ME PLEASE?
Yeah, you were judgemental. That's what happens when you're an uncontrolled bitch.
Ill put u bak in da story i prmise!11!
Oh, so, you accuse her of thievery and your apology is putting her back in this? Yeah, if I were Raven, I would ask for a car…
neway DIS CHAPTER NDEALS WIT RLLY HARD ND DEEP SUBJECTS DONT READ IF U DNT LIKE 2 DEALK WIT ISSUES.
Ooh, I don't know if I can handle this, guys. It sounds like it's going to be full of deep and scarring issues that are dealt with in real life and just remember: This is Tara talking about this. I am so scared right now.
sauke grinned wen he saw me "u look hot"
No, Sasuke, remember what we talked about. Only Naruto's ass gets that compliment, not skanky girls who try to get your attention every single day.
"thanks" i smiled at him
we walked 2 da concert nd talked about mcr and stuff. he told me he likes green dya nd evanescene and good charlotte too.
Yeah, cause in a land full of ninja's, this is exactly the kind of stuff they get to listen to.
at the concert we moshed and dancied to our favrite songs by mcr. then during kill all ur friends (AN: i don't own dat song)
Thank God…
he kissed me! i kissed hi m back nd den we held hands for the rest of da concert.
Aww, how utterly puke worthy.
when he drpped me off he kissed me again nd it was so romantic. i culd feel his teeth nd they were very sharp like mine. i got suspicious.
And so, the plot deepens. We're starting to learn the back story to Sasuke's teeth. Isn't it just so interesting?
"sasuike is there something u want to tell me?
"like what?" he asked
"like you being a vampire?" i said
Wow…That was almost as easy as it was for Bella to realize that Edward was a vampire.
"how could u tell?"
"well cause ur teeth are sharp like mine r" then i clamped my hand over my mouth.
"ur a vampire too?" he asked "well why didn't YOU tell ME?"
Because she feared it would make everyone think of her as a Mary-sue even more!
i started to cry "im sorry sauske i thought you wouldn't like me"
Oh…Never mind my excuse then.
"well maybe i don't u lier!" he yelled and ran away
Yay~! Sasuke has a brain again~!
i went in crying and got a knife 2 slit my rwrists.
Oh, I see. This is the deep issues we were warned about at the beginning. So much to handle right here.
i was so fukin sad cause sasuke didn't like me anymore. i finally went to bed and ccried myself t sleep.
He's a boy. This happens to girls and boys all the time. Point being: Get. Over. It.
A/N: Fun fact of the day: Pigs are horny animals.
AN: glad 2 c non of da prepz r flamin again!1! ty 4 da good reviews goffs!11!
What is the world coming to…
and raven if u dont like my stroy den DUN READ IT K! dun yell at ma just cuz i wwanted 2 put u in ma story 4 na APOLOGY!1111!
Is it just me or is Raven becoming awesome? She refuses to be in this story and she's constantly saying how bad this is. That sounds pretty cool to me. And why wouldn't she refuse to be in this piece of shit?
da next morning i woek up nd looked at the calande i saw that there was class at the academy today. i jumped up and raan to get dresed. i put on a shrt black mini dress with red lace nd fishnet stocknings nd black high heeld sandals. i put on black lip stick nad black glittre eye shadow den some pale white foundation. i teased my hair out and put some gel in my bangs to make tehm spikey.
Ugh, these are always the things that I hate. The descriptions that she puts into block paragraphs. I hate that. I'd rather read about an outfit when it comes out randomly in different sentences rather than just one sentence.
i wlaked down to da academy and sat down next to a hot goth guy. i smellewd at him "whats ur name?"
You…smelled him? Well, good first impressions do count.
"naroto" he mutered .
No.
his spiky black hiar fell over his eyes.
N-no…
he wore a blak t shirt with a spiral desine n it nad black cargo pants.
You didn't…
he had spiky cuffs on his wirtss over fishnet glves.
Noooooo! Not my favourite character in the series! Not Naruto! Anybody but him! I couldn't care less if you made Hinata a bitch or some weird Gothic chick that kills bunnies but please, leave Naruto out of this.
"hi naruito… i'm albalaters but u can call me aba" i groande and went to sleep out of bordom. ikruka came out. "since we have a uneven class this year 1 team will have 4 ppl on it!" i blinked susprised. "first eam! naruito uzoomakee! sakura haroono! alabasert smith!
Stay the hell away from Naruto!
nd… sasuiek oochiha!" i gasped nad ran out crying.
Aw…Yeah, that's about as much sympathy as you'll get from me. In fact, I have felt more sorrow for my toilet brush.
narutio ran out to me. "r u ok aba?"
"sasuek is a bithc! he broke up wit me!" i sobbed sexily
Um, no, Sasuke can be a bitch but you are a bitch.
he hugge d me. "he broke up wit me, too. he's a jerk."
Oh, silly Naruto, Sasuke never broke up with you. What have you been drinking lately?
"oms really?" i yelped.
"yah" he frowned.
"lets torture him" i grinned eviky
Okay, this I will support cause I've never really liked Sasuke that much.
"yeeeaaah" nairuto grinned "lets sabotage his repyoutation"
Oh no, Sasuke's repyoutation, it will be crushed!
we walked back in nad i got my ninja headbandd and tied it non my arm.
Iruka, what the hell? Have you come off your meds again or something? Don't they have to do some sort of training or whatever that lesson was-
naroto tied his on his arm too. we started ploting the best prank ever.
Fine, whatever, it's your class. It's your problem if you're going to let Ebony-Oops, I mean, Aba in your class.
A/N: I am so stricken by sorrow over Naruto being tortured in this T_T Please don't let her get to Sakura and Ino now. Oh, God, what if she gets to Choji or Lee? Or Ten-Ten? Oh no…