Okay so here is the first remade chapter of Episode 0, I'm switching to third person because it's so much easier to do right now, then first person. Anyways I hope you enjoy this remake of the original chapter. And this Kuro is an original character of mine, and has nothing to do with the character in Lost Song.
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The sun had just started to set, painting the sky in hues of red and orange. It gave off a melancholic feel. The fading sunlight shone through a window, into a white hospital room. The steady beat of a heart monitor can be heard, and hooked up to that machine was a young girl laying on the bed. Her long black hair was out all around her. In a chair next to the bed was an older girl. Her long black hair was tied in a ponytail, and silver eyes stare at the girl.
She sighed brushing her hand gently through the younger girl's hair. Her silver eyes shone with a sadness. "You're going to run out of money, if you don't accept any of my jobs Kuro." A female voice said. The older girl turned to find a woman who looked to be the age of twenty five.
Short black hair was clipped neatly and amber color eyes stare at her. A smug smile was on her face. She wore a deep red business suit that looked to be expensive. The girl sitting in the chair is Kuro Asagami, a famous hacker, whose been known to hack into several data bases of the governments. Kuro grit her teeth glaring at the woman.
"Do you have a job or not Rachel?" She questioned. The woman in the business suit is Rachel Moor, a distant relative that came from America. She was an arms dealer supplying several governments, rebel groups, terrorist cells, and gangs. Normally she needed a skilled hacker which is where Kuro came in. She would pay Kuro well, enough for her to live and to pay for her sister's medical bill.
Rachel gave her an amused smirk, sitting on a chair the opposite of where Kuro sat. "Actually I do. Do you know what a VRMMORPG is?" She questioned. Kuro raised an eyebrow. She wasn't really interested in games, having to take care of her younger sister. She did know the VRMMORPG used very advance technology.
"Not much why? Does this have to do with the job you're about to give me?" She questioned. A smirk goes across Rachel's lips.
"It has everything to do with the job actually." She replied absolutely smug about it. "You see I want you to test out a new product that I had recently developed. It's a modified version of the NerveGear, but specialized just for you." She began to explain. Kuro raises an eyebrow again. She knew that Rachel always had an alterative motive for everything she does. "It functions the same as a regular NerveGear, but it's meant to allow you to hack into the system with ease. You see I want you to learn everything you can about the system. While you're in there I'll pay for all hospital expanses. We've already made your avatar, and have leveled them up accordingly."
Kuro sighed, turning to look out the window. "Why do you want the data?" She questioned. The smirk on Rachel's face grew even larger.
"Oh, it's because this has a lot of potential for military usage as a training program. If I can modify the base code, and some of the data then I can sell it." She stated.
Kuro turns back to look at her sister, her silver eyes staring at her sickly form under the white sheets of the hospital bed. Finally she looks at Rachel. "Fine I'll do it, but I'll do it here in this hospital." She tells her. Rachel nods, handing over the modified NerveGear. Little did she know how that one decision would change everything around her. And that she would met a group that would help give her hope.