Sup everyone! I'm back, actually I don't think it was that long... maybe I'll just update every other month...
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CloudBloodbane: It's from an anime called Madan no Ou to Vanadis (Really Good Show in my opinion)
I'll think about the 7 swords of the 7 Swordsmen in the Mist, but I already have plans for the Kusanagi
If you didn't read the rewrite of Ch. 1 it basically erases the existence of Reiner, and Rai... well that's basically it.
I think I got everything...
Warnings: OP MC, OCCness, OCs that will show up later, Genderbend, Harem, AU, and Slow Plot.
Previously
"My name is Grayfia Lucifuge I'll be the referee of this unofficial Ratings Game…. The Ratings Game between Phenex-sama and Otsutsuki-sama will now begin!"
Now: Chapter 2
Naruto heard but didn't move from the building they assigned him, the old school building.
"Here they are." Naruto smirked as he felt all of Raiser's peerage surrounding the building. "Ready Partner?"
"Of course, Naru-chan, but i don't even think that you'll need me, after all these kids aren't even at the overgrown lizard's level… Great Red? Err something like that."
'... Maybe, but you can't be sure.' He heard her scoff inside his head, and he smiled. Suddenly his eyes hardened and his smile faded.
He heard a "Raiser-sama will praise me if I kill him!" and the wall in front of him broke to pieces. The person smirked seeing her target before he disappeared from her sight and she heard footsteps from behind, before she could turn around she felt excruciating pain as blood spurted out from her torso.
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"What just happened?" Isane Hyoudou had asked in amazement.
"Naruto-sama did train with Touhou Fuhai, one of the Dark Lords. That was one of the moves he learnt called Hougetsu Jigen-Tou. It allows Naruto-sama to postpone the dimension in which they exist in."
"It's like a saw moving back and forth between dimensions." Isane just stared at the newcomers with confusion.
"Who are you guys?"
Naoki looked at Isane with an emotionless expression and introduced herself, "Naoki"
Konan was next, she had introduced herself in a similar manner to Naoki. "Konan"
"I'm Yako!" She sounded the most enthusiastic out of the others. "You can say that we're Naru-chan's caretakers."
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Naruto didn't need to turn around in order to know that she had been called out. "Raiser-sama's [Rook] retired"
Naruto grinned maliciously and continued walking ignoring the blood dripping from his hand. "~Who's next~ ku ku ku~" His voice mixing with Kaguya's. He slowly walked out of the building the grin still on his face.
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"Whoa, talk about creepy, what's with his voice?" The majority of the group facepalmed at her bluntness.
"... That was Naruto-kun's voice mixing with… his tenant."
"Tenant? What does that mean?" Naoki sighed, she was getting tired of hearing the questions.
"Just... ask Naruto-kun later."
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Naruto kept walking as one of Raiser's [Knights] ran up to him, as she stuck out her sword, and as she swung down. The [Knight] scoffed as she 'killed' him very easily. She waited until she heard the announcement from Grayfia… but it never came.
Slowly she looked back, before she jumped back, as Naruto was standing in front of her with a now sadistic grin. He stuck his hand forward into her stoma-... Her stomach?! She looked down and was surprised to not see blood… it was like he just reached his hand into nothing.
That was until she felt pain and blood spurt from the wound, she could only yell out in pain as he pulled out his hand slowly, very slowly. Finally she retired, the pain being too much for her to bear. "Raiser-sama's [Knight] has retired."
Suddenly Naruto frowned, "This is taking to long. All of these trees are blocking my way… what to do?"
"Get rid of them." Naruto paused to think before nodded at his tenant's advice before he put his hand under his chin.
'Yeah but with what?' There was a pause before she answered.
"... Does it really matter? Just use a Shinra Tensei." Naruto nodded before breaking the light barrier to the middle of the school.
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Naruto made it in record time, and he wasn't even out winded! Naruto stood straight and closed his eyes. He raised his hands up one at a time, and waited a couple seconds before he opened them flashing his purple ringed eyes and whispered, "~Shinra Tensei~"
The effect was instantaneous, everything standing was crushed and the obstacles were all gone… basically all that was left was a gigantic crater.
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"Holy crap! What the hell was that!" Konan sweatdropped as she looked into Isane's sparkling eyes. Her only thought was...
'Devils can have the weirdest expressions.'
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Raiser's peerage somewhat survived… well the [Queen] survived, the others retired. "... A-All of R-Raiser-sama's [Pawns], his [Bishop], his [Rook] and his [Knight], retired."
Naruto looked at the remaining and grinned both Raiser and his [Queen] were in the sky, 'Probably how they survived.' "Ku ku ku ku~ Since you all survived, let me give you the pleasure of knowing my name~" He paused and bowed his head slightly before bringing it up revealing a sadistic grin and his closed eyes, "My name is Uzumaki Naruto~ The Guardian of Bijuu and their Jinchuuriki." He opened his eyes and narrowed them.
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"Uzumaki?! What the hell! Wasn't his name Otsutsuki?!"
"That's Naruto-sama's alias. Uzumaki is his real surname." They nodded understanding, but a select few were pissed about not knowing his real name.
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"No one cares about your name peasant! Just because you beat my other trash doesn't mean you'll win!" Naruto's eyes were shadowed by his hair and his grin turned into a frown.
"You're startin' to piss me off, heh you know… you remind me a lot of a… mutt at my old village always going on and on about being the 'alpha'... if he wasn't a clan heir I would have killed him the first time he spoke to me." Just as Raiser was about to retort Naruto appeared next to him grabbing Raiser's throat.
When his [Queen] rushed at Naruto in hopes to get her master back, but before she could reach them Naruto snapped and she fell asleep. "~Can't have her ruining my fun~ Now where were we? Oh yeah…" Naruto's eyes turned into a Mangekyō Sharingan, and when Raiser looked into his eyes he fell under a Tsukuyomi.
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Yako burst out laughing, while Konan and Naoki had to stifle their snickering. "Oh wow, how long do you think it'll be until he stops fearing sunsets?"
"1 year!"
"... 5 years, that's how long it took for the last guy.."
_0 Tsukuyomi World 0_
"W-Where am I?!" Raiser was crucified on a cross in the middle of nowhere. The moon was red giving the appearance of the cloudy sky being red and to Raiser, he saw everything in an inverted grey scale.
"You're in my world now~ I can do anything here~" To prove his point Naruto stabbed him in his stomach and when he pulled out his hand Raiser didn't heal. Naruto grinned and snapped, suddenly there stood Gai and Lee, with their trademark green jumpsuit and orange legwarmers.
"Wha-What are you doing!" Raiser could only watch in horror as they ran into the sunset calling out their names. Raiser found that he couldn't close his eyes, and was forced to watch the horror.
"LEE!"
"GAI-SENSEI!"
"LEE!"
"GAI-SENSEI!"
"LEE!" This had continued for three days until they finally reached each other and cried as they hugged each other.
_0 In Reality 0_
Naruto dropped Raiser on the floor and burst out laughing only stopping once to clutch his left eye when blood started leaking, before continuing again. He didn't stop laughing until Grayfia called the match.
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The first thing Naruto heard was from Yako "Nice one Naru-chan! You used that one right?"
"Of course Yako-chan~ what did you expect? 'Sunset' is the best kind of torture for people that piss me off~"
"I agree Naruto-kun, 'Sunset' definitely is the best." Naruto turned to his left and saw Naoki with the others.
Naruto was about to reply when Rias suddenly jumped up and kissed him. Everyone could only watch in shock, and when they snapped out of it Rias had stopped kissing his and was just hugging him. When Naruto realized that she was crying he hugged back while rubbing her back in circles, the females of the group could only glare at Rias wanting to be in that situation.
"T-Thank you Naruto-kun (sniff) Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!"
"It's fine Gremory-san, just let it all out." He started patting her head when he heard soft snoring, he smiled and looked at Grayfia, "Lucifuge-san right?" He saw her nod slightly and he continued, "Can you take her? It seems she fell asleep." Grayfia nodded and held Rias in a bridal carry.
Naruto was then approached by Sona and her peerage, she seemed to be… annoyed. "Otsutsuki-Shachou, or is it Uzumaki-Shachou now?"
Naruto laughed slightly which only served to anger the ravenette even more, "Call me whatever you want Kaichou, I don't really mind."
"Fine… I'll just call you Otsutsuki-Shachou, there's no point of changing it now." Naruto grinned at her response when Naoki and Yako yawned. "It's pretty late. We should call it a day, if you have any questions just visit my house tomorrow, after all tomorrow is Saturday."
"Of course Otsutsuki-Shachou, it has been a long day. I'll see you tomorrow." Naruto nodded and watched as she and her [Queen] teleported away.
"We will see you tomorrow as well, Uzumaki-san." They watched as the others left leaving Naruto and the Ame Orphans.
"Let's get home minna." They nodded before they each burst home leaving four foot sized craters.
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They had arrived within a minute and they headed straight to their respective rooms. When Naruto stepped in his room he went to his closet where he took out a plain white kimono, with a red swirl on the shoulders, and the Otsutsuki crest on the back.
After getting the kimono Naruto walked into his bathroom and after stripping he took a shower. When he was finished Naruto slowly went into the bath and soaked in the water, enjoying the heat.
When he checked his internal clock he stood up and left, he threw on his clothes, and left to make dinner.
Rolling up his sleeves Naruto looked into the rice cooker and sighed, he took out the pot and dumped its contents into a big bowl. Seemingly have decided on what to make, Naruto began making six onigiri.
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By the time the three Akatsuki members came out the onigiri were finished and plated in front of their respective seats.
They eagerly sat down and started to eat after saying 'itadakimasu' "How is it?"
"Ish Wewishios (It's delicious)!" Konan smacked Yako on her head when she started talking with his mouth full, but Naruto didn't mind, in fact he just grinned.
"Mah~ mah~ it's fine, thanks for the compliment Yako-chan~ so what did you think of the fight?"
After gulping the food in her mouth Yako answered "Not enough action! You got lazy halfway through didn't you~"
"But they were like roaches, scattering around I was getting a little~ pissed off, well he did remind me of Konoha."
Wanting to get off the subject Konan spoke, "Naruto-sama… are you not going to eat?"
"I still have a day before the lack of food will affect me I'll be fine Konan-chan."
"Naruto-kun you need to eat… here you can have one." She handed him an onigiri and not being one to disappoint Naruto took it and ate it, after thanking Naoki.
"Well, we've gotta catch some sleep. Ja ne~ and I know you've already slept for the week but don't wear yourself out Naru-chan."
"Hai~ hai~ just go to sleep already." Yako 'tch'ed and walked away with Naoki and Konan following.
"Now… come out Kuro-chan~" From the backyard came a black cat, with a bell around its neck. "I saw your sister today, although I'm sure you heard."
The cat only meowed in response. Naruto walked towards it and picked it up, not noticing the pink tint on its snout.
"Let's go for a walk Kuro-chan~" The was cat still in his arms as he walked into his backyard… more like a small park given the size it was and the amount of nature it had in it. "Like it? I designed it myself… the use of seals are infinite."
The cat purred and snuggled into Naruto who started petting the black cat, while ignoring the voice in his head saying, "Bad luck will come in black cats with golden eyes and a bell on it's collar" He slightly snorted at the exact description of Kuro-chan.
"So Kuro-chan how's Ophis doin'? Still brooding about Baka-Red?" He felt the cat nod
and he grinned. "Tomorrow I'll be meeting with the Devils, let's hope nothing goes wrong."
Naruto walked back to the house and put 'Kuro-chan' down. "You should get some sleep, I'll just be in the basement, training." The cat meowed before it pranced away.
_0 Next Day 0_
Konan woke up to her internal alarm at 6 in the morning. She did her daily routine (showering, brushing her teeth, breakfast) and then she went to the basement to tell Naruto, who no doubt got lost in training, to take a shower.
When she reached the basement she couldn't help but look amazed no matter how many times she had seen it before. It was an exact of the Forest of Death in Konoha, she sweatdropped a little at the fallen trees, and decided to follow the destruction.
There he was in the middle of the destruction meditating with purple marks on his eyelids a lot like purple eyeshadow. When he opened his eyes she saw his snake-like pupils before it vanished with the markings.
"... Ah, Konan-chan, is it morning already?" A simple nod was her only answer, "Mataku~ gomen gomen, I got lost in training. Let's go!" Naruto got up and followed behind Konan.
"How has your training been going Naruto-sama?" Naruto hummed in thought.
"... I guess you could say I improved, Kaguya-hime said something about me being able to beat her on a full on battle… like that could happen, I guess I can fight Baka-Red in a spar."
Konan swat dropped slightly, 'If Kaguya-sama said you can beat her I think you can… Great Red is a bit weaker than Kaguya-sama…'
"So Konan-chan have you three been training?" Konan nodded and just as she was about to comment, they realized that they were already out of the basement… huh, what do you know.
"You should take a shower Naruto-sama," he nodded and waved her goodbye as he went to his room.
Konan sighed, before composing herself as the intercom had been rung. She put on her heels and walked out, internally smirking as she could tell the people behind the gates, were most definitely irritated.
When she opened the gate, she was greeted by Grayfia, Sona, Tsubaki, Rias, Isane, Yuki, Koneko, and Asia.
"Sorry for the wait, I had to retrieve Naruto-sama so he could get ready for the meeting. I must ask you if you could be quiet when entering the house?" Seeing their confused gaze she explained, "Yako and Naoki can get a little grumpy when they are woken up before the wake up naturally."
"We understand Konan-san, we will try to be as quiet as possible."
_0 Later 0_
The guests were given a helping of tea that Konan had made at the moment, and were sipping it when Naruto came out with a black yukata, loosely tied, so it showed his chest and was currently sliding off his shoulder, he had a towel around his neck and everyone watched as water dripped from his hair.
"Sorry for the wait Ko-" Naruto cut himself off when he saw the audience.
"..."
"..."
"... Well… this is awkward."
... and that's a wrap!
You now know how strong Naruto is... OP right, I know, but he'll be holding back...a lot.
I'll try to add more details on the fight scenes in the future!
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Next I'll be working on "Shinso in Kuoh" See ya' later!
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