Red Dawn: Rewrite

New OC named Sara

Chapter 2: the invasion

I was cuddled close to Jed's chest fast asleep his arm was around me. My arm was around his chest saw his tattoo of USMC, I began to kiss his neck; I felt something rumble I thought it was his chest with a groan of pleasure then I felt the floor move I got up and pulled on my skirt as matt came down stairs as Jed begin to stir.

"WHAT'S GOING ON!?" matt asked as he rushed out with me as matt and I rushed out to see the sky filled with planes like fighter jets. I looked up in horror and screamed as I rushed into the house as a plane explodes and landed in the house next door.

"JED!"I yelled as I ran into the living he got up and pulled on a sweatshirt. He grabbed my hand and we went to the front door I was scarred he pulled me close I grabbed my shoes and an old jacket of matts.

"MATT! RAVEN GET IN THE TRUCK! WE GOTTA FIND DAD AND YOUR BROTHER!" he yelled as he handed matt his shoes as he grabbed my hand and pushed me inside the truck.

"Shit I don't get any reception." Matt said as he tried to get his phone to work.

"I'll try the radio." I said and came across the emergency alert system and it was scrambled I got that sinking pit in my stomach. I was worried about my big brother.

"Jed swing by my house I have to check on john. " I said as matt looked out and yelled

"STOP, JED! ERICA! ERICA!" he yelled for he Jed ran out and tackled his brother I stayed in the truck as John was up the street.

"John! We're over here!" I yelled toward him as Jed pushed matt into the truck as their dad pulled up and three other people jumped in the flatbed

"Raven are you guys ok?" John asked as he jumped into the back

"Yeah we're fine. What's going on? Johnny what's happening?" I asked

He shook his head, "I don't know." He said as Tom came up in the police car

"Stay on my ass!" tom yelled for us to do. We followed tom across town as we did; I clung to Jed's free arm. He looked at me and saw me shake in terror with free his free arm wrapped around me and hugged me close.

"It's ok, Raven. We're going to get out of here." He said I nodded john was still in the truck flatbed with Robert, Daryl, and Walter. We got f followed by the army of North Koreans and we cut across the park and hit a Military car my brother got thrown out with creed both were killed on the impact john landed on a solider and killed him I looked in pure terror and shock at my brothers limp body.

"JOHN NO! JOHN!" I yelled and jumped over Jed and over to the suv. Jed grabbed me by my waist as I reached for my brother John Allerdyce who had died right in front of me.

"Raven, baby he's gone. He's gone." He said and held me as his dad got out of the cop car and rush over to us,

"Raven! Get back there with matt and Jed. Get them to the cabin." Tom told Jed. He was holding onto me for dear life I clung to his shirt I felt like I went numb. Jed picked me up and sat me in the front as we drove off matt looked back to his dad in the rearview mirror to see many others join the Sargent in the fight. We got to the cabin Jed had to hold me up right as this skinny kid walked up to us.

"The names Pete." He said he had a red shirt blue jeans and a navy blue sweatshirt.

"I'm Jed, this Raven Allerdyce, and my younger brother matt." He said I nodded and as I felt my legs go to jello Jed caught me. "Scout the camper, matt come inside with me help me take of her." He said and carried me into the house and took me to living room and sat me on the couch.

"How are you holding up, Rave?'' Matt asked me. I looked at him

"How the hell do you think? I just saw my brother get killed in front of my eyes with him gone I guess I am truly alone." I said my anger going up.

"Matt go and see if you can find dad's old guns and some ammo." He said I sat at the far end of the couch he sat next to me. He tried to pull me close to him I backed away as I looked at him and slapped across the face

"WHY!? WHY DID YOU LET ME LEAVE MY BIG BROTHER BEHIND I COULD HAVE SAVED HIM!" I yelled at Jed; I pounded his chest with my fists. He pulled me into a hug I tried to push away he kept me close as the others came in. They saw us matt came down. We must have been a sight

"Guys, come help salvage the food." Matt said the others followed him. Robert came up to me as well as Dyrel

"Raven we're sorry for your loss. John was a good man." Robert said

"Yeah not to mention his thing for pranks." Dryel told and they both went into the kitchen. I hugged Jed he hugged me back.

"I'm sorry for slapping you. I guess it was a bitch move." I apologized to him.

"Don't worry I got worse in the service besides for a girl you hit pretty hard." He said as he kissed my forehead. We heard someone come up the road

"Jed did any one follow us up here?" I asked he looked out the window

"Matt, raven stay in here keep the others in here as well." He said and rushed out

"What's going on?" Pete asked as he saw Jed walk out with the rifle in hand. Pete walked out with the small hand gun and he fired it.

"Matt, you thinking what I'm thinking. " I asked we looked at Pete as he went out closer to Jed

"Yea, let's go." He said

"Matt what were you thinking." Jed asked his brother I got in between the two, my hand on Jed's chest. "You could have taken my head off."

"Jed it was me I thought they got past ya." Pete said. I rolled my eyes as 5 people got out

"Hey you guys have any food and water." She asked her name was Sara. She had long red hair and emerald green eye. "Raven thank god you made it. John said you stayed with the Jed last night and he went looking for you. Where is he that fire manic of a brother of yours?" she asked. Sara was my brother's girlfriend I didn't think I could tell her that john had dies. Jed grabbed my shoulder and squeezed it gently. I took a breathe and shook a little bit

"It's ok baby you can do it." Jed told me in a whisper.

"Sara….John is dead." I said she looked at me then to Jed who nodded

"It can't be. Not my john."

"Yeah I saw it with my own eyes my brother is dead."

She looked at me in sadness

"Who are they?" Jed asked stepping forward towards the group,

"Julie and Greg are from out of town they just saw their dad get killed." She said as Robert came up with his backpack and other stuff. "I don't know about the other two, they just kids."

"Robert where do you think you're going?" Daryl asked him I looked at Jed then to Sara, She was with the other two I saw on ha d a wound,

"Robert Morris?" she asked

"Yeah and I'm going back for my parents."

"Robert you parents are dead. I'm sorry I saw it happen, them and about 10 others" she said as he stopped dead in his tracks, "I 'm sorry Robert. But you are needed here and not in the morgue."

"Come on in Raven here can treat some wounds and we can get some food in you." Jed said. We all went into the house. Robert and Daryl tried to make the TV work. I clung close to Jed after I had patched the other two they weren't going to make it so we left them in Matt's old room. Jed looked at me and sighed and hugged me.

"Baby how are you holding up?" He asked

"Ok, I guess, but those two upstairs aren't going to make it." I said he held me to his chest. "I'm going to take a shower later join me please I don't trust the Pete and his pal." Robert and Daryl were trying to get the TV to work or a signal anyway

"Hold it there that's good." He said as a TV reporter came on

"Hey we got something." Robert said

"If you're watching this you no longer live in the United States of America. It means that the U.S.A is no longer a free nation—"Jed shut the TV off and got mad he pulled me close and said to the group

"This is bullshit."

"Babe, what do you mean?"

"Their ling their asses off."

"Of course tact the first rule of a war, distract the place you evade with lies." Robert said as he watched as I got up to go take a bath. Jed followed me with his eyes I smiled at him he walked up behind me and hugged me. I turned around to see Pete

"Hey hot stuff." He said he was smiling like Walter creed

"Back the fuck off. Jed can you guard the door to the bathroom?" I asked down the stairs, Pete looked at me and snarled

"You aren't going to have him join us. You are going to be mine." He said and pinned me to the wall screamed but he covered my mouth with his and started to kiss me he had one hand pinned my wrists the wall as the other snaked its way under my skirt.

"What a pretty little thing but he hasn't had the guts to take you all the way like I can." He said as I kicked him in the legs he just got mad. I tried to fight I screamed

"JED! HELP ME, JED!" I heard the floor creek and Pete looked behind him

"Let my girl go. Raven get behind me quickly." He said Pete didn't let go till I kicked in between his legs he dropped his arms I rushed behind Jed he kissed my forehead, "What were you thinking attacking my girl?"

"Come on that piece of ass I was going to tap that."

"Raven you okay?" Matt asked coming up the stairs

"Matt, take Raven to moms and dads old room I'll be there in a minute." He said and was looking at Pete with a look that could kill.

"Jed please." I pleaded with him his deep blues were growing red. He snarled at Pete

"Stay away from my girl or you lose your head and keep your hands off any woman that shows her face here at this house." He walked over and pulled me close. Matt walked out and closed the door. Jed pulled me tight to his chest "Jed take a shower with me, please?" I asked as he kissed my forehead I leaned up into him

"Raven you sure a-" I cut him off with a kiss to the lips he smiled into the kiss and pulled off my sweat shirt. I let if drop to the floor he wrapped his arms around my waist and asked for entrance into my mouth. He slid his tongue into my mouth. I wrapped my around around his neck he traced the inside of my mouth. He rubs my side as he slides to the side of my neck. He began to suck on my neck and started to leave a hickey on my neck. I started to moan I pulled off his sweatshirt he let it hit the floor and her pulled me off my shirt and he kissed my neck I raced up his shirt and pulled it off. He picked me up and set me against the wall.

"Raven you have any change of clothes?" he asked I kissed his lips

"No, I left the house in a rush and we couldn't swing be my place." I said and kissed his neck.

"Raven, where are you?" Sara asked

"Sara what is it?" I asked though the door she put my black back pack in the door

"John said 'pack raven a bag in case you find her. With any luck Jed has her safe.' That's when he went to look for you." She said I grabbed my backpack and looked in it. John had some clothes packed and a box of condoms

"Thanks Sara and thank you john." I said and pulled out a towel in the closet. "Well you gonna join me in the shower or do I have to take on by myself." I said as I undress in front of him the way he looked at me it was almost predator. I left my underwear on. He looked at me and saw the bulge in his jeans grow harder

"Only if let me take those off before we get in the shower." He said I walked in the shower and stated it he stripped down as fast as he could

"Leave those boxers on if you take my underway off I getta take yours off." I said he stopped and looked at me as he stood in his boxers. I walked out and slide my hand down his boxers to play with his hardening member he gripped the door frame and I sipped down and played with him and massaged his member. He moaned and I pulled away I stepped into the shower he followed he stopped at the edge I slide his boxers down to his legs he stepped in. He pulled my thong down and sat it on top of his boxers he pulled me close and I slide my hands down to his ass and gripped it he wall tightly I got on my knees and licked his member as he groaned in pleasure. I licked the head of his member and slide his member in my mouth he tried to buck against my mouth he let his head roll back and the water flow over us he tried to buck into my mouth. I pushed his hips back he moaned and leaned against the wall of the shower. I moaned against his shaft and he shook with pleasure as I bobbed up and down on his member. He released with a cry of pleasure.

"Raven, that was great. You ready I wanna try something. It's a new position to us." I stood up and looked at him.

"Well is it what I think I it is." I said he nodded yes. "First can I clean up a little bit?"

"Of course my sweet I can even wash your back."

"Great if you wash mine can I wash yours'?"

"Yes" he said. He leaned towards my neck and started to kiss it I moaned and place my hand on his hip and the other raced through his hair he moaned and pulled away and slide his hand to my entrance and slide a finger in me. I moaned and shook against him as he pumped in and out of me. I moaned and rolled my hips he used his thumb to rub my clit I moaned and gripped his shoulders as he put his arm behind my back

"Jed where did you learn to do this?" I asked he looked at me.

"The guys in the unit I was in told me some tips." He said as I arched my back and moaned. He smiled at me and pulled me close. I moaned as I came over his hand. He pulled his fingers out and licked his fingers clean and smiled at me "You taste good." He shut the water off and picked me up and throw me over his shoulder

"Jed what about the shower?" I asked he smack me ass and kissed my thigh.

"Remember that position I wanted to try? Well I wanna do it on the bed since last night we did it on the floor." He said

"Ok why do I have a feeling that I'm going to be face down with my ass in the air-oh Jed, you dog." I said and he laid me on the bed he pulled the sheet from under us. I smiled he rolled me over on my hands and knees and he pulled out a bottle of lotion and lubed up his member he sat himself at my read entrance and started to go in. I bite the pillow and felt him go in slowly and i got used to his size

"Jed you can move now." I said and leaned up he started to move he went slow but got faster as I moved my hips in time with his. He moaned and leaned on the bed and intertwined my hand with his. He went in deeper than I thought he could

"Raven, let me play with you." He said I set my head back and lend up against his chest. He wrapped me up in his arms and snaked his way into between my legs and found and found my clit and began to play with it and made moan higher than before. He griped my hips and dug his nails into my hips and drew up small crimson beads. He pounded into me.

"Jed, I'm cumming, baby. Go faster Jed; I want to come with you." I pleaded with him

"Raven don't worry you will come with me I'm too close." He said and pounded a few more time and we came together I arched my back and fell on the bed. Jed was trying not to fall on top of me.

"Jed, it's okay." I said and rolled over. He looked at me and collapsed on top of me trying not to put all of his weight on top of me. I kissed the top of his head and massaged his head. "Raven that was great you are the most amazing woman I ever met."

"Oh Jed." I said and looked out the window and saw that it was dark outside. Jed laid next to me and pulled the sheet over us and put his arm across my chest and pulled me close. I heard something in the kitchen. "Jed what the hell was that?" I asked he heard it too. I pulled on his shirt and walked up behind him. He pulled on his pants and walked out with the 22 rifle

"Raven stay here." He said I looked at him with a look of 'you telling me to stay?' "You're right you don't like to listen when you're worried. Just stay behind me."

"Ok. Don't worry I doubt I would want to be anywhere else right now," We walked out I saw Pete with that friend of his talking to each other by the food. Jed looked at me I looked at him and grabbed a knife from his back pocket. I lingered a little bit.

"Like what you're feeling?" he asked me. I smiled at him my sexy smile

"Of course, I missed you these six years." I said and kissed his check. He chuckled and looked at me

"Come on it looks like he isn't going to pull nothing let's get some sleep, Babe." He said and we walked back into his parents I grabbed my bag and saw John even packed me some pjs I pulled of Jed's shirt I looked to Jed; he was watching me with his deep blue eyes. I pulled on my underwear he sighed as I put them on I pulled out an old shirt of his. He recognized it and smiled

"Is that the shirt I wore on our last night together?" he asked

"Yeah, I asked your dad if I could have it he said yes." I laid on the bed and patted the spot next to him. We got into bed and cuddled together and sleep overtook us.

"Raven get up we have to get out of here." He said, "Get dressed." He said he was pissed. I pulled on a red tank top and black skinny jeans and red boots

"Jed what happened?" I asked as I pulled on a jacket and grabbed my backpack.

"Pete. That friend and him took all the food and bailed that means he could lead hem right to us." He said as he woke the other we grabbed our stuff I was holding Jed's hand he kept me close. We hide in the woods behind a log as they bought the Mayor Daryl's dad and tom. We all saw that snake Pete

"Pete that son of a bitch." Jed said. I looked at him and felt that feeling I had with my brother

"Jed, Matt. It's your dad." I said and grabbed Jed's shoulder he looked at me worry in his eyes. The mayor spoke but I drowned it out till I heard tom's speech well a certain part of it.

"Boys, raven. Don't let this piece of shit get away with it. Avenge me! Do what I would and raven you brother this was the man that killed your brother." He said as the Korean as he pulled out a gun and fired point blank into toms head and set a flamethrower on the house. Jed held matt back form rushing out I held Jed's head and kissed his forehead I saw him cry both of them cry I cried at the last part he said I wanted that North Korean dead. We walked back as soon as the night fall. Jed was holding me close I hugged his waist.

"Jed, what do we do now?" I asked him he looked at me and the rest of the group

"We fight baby." He said

END