Alright, thanks for the reviews and information on what you want to know. I'll try to squeeze it in. I'd like to take a moment, though and just thank my two good friends Bebbe5 and rockevergod. I would never gotten this far without all your support and help in what I should do. Thanks.
Alright, so you know the drill R&R and I'll try to hurry and write as fast as I can, but take it slow. Anyone who has been in my place understands that term.
The giant rat stalked in, his nephew, Redeye, having escaping from the clock tower with Ratigan before, right behind him. Ridget followed also. There was quite a resemblance between him and Fidget, except for him having an eye patch and no peg leg, while his brother had a peg leg and a crippled wing.
"Isn't it ironic how you and your little friends just happen to be in the same place as my new device." He said, walking over and patting the lazer while pretending to talk to Liz in a friendly way voice.
"Oh, isn't it?" Said Liz, glaring at the rat. Redeye stared at the children, well teens, being about fifteen years of age, in the room. Ratigan saw Olivia and Remy sitting by Liz.
"Oh, and who are these. Oh, that's Olivia. Now, what about this young man." He said, eyeing Remy. "Let's see... brown hair, blue eyes. the round nose. You must be a Flaversham also." Said Ratigan.
"Holy shit! Hell, no wonder you seem to get away so many times. You knew that just by looking at me?" Said Remy, seeming way more friendly then he should have been to this murderer and thief.
"Remy, come on..." started Liz, but she was cut off.
"Remy! What an unusual name. Where are you from?" Said Ratigan. Remy opened his mouth to speak. Liz cut in.
"None of your buisness!" She said. She glared at him intently. He glared right back, and Redeye, being almost as big as his uncle, and almost looking like him, except for the red left eye, of course, glared at Mr. Demont who looked as if he was ready to run out of the room as fast as he could, but was too scared, probably because he knew he wasn't the fastest mouse in the world and that he would get caught.
"Alright, kids!" Shouted Redeye.
"We want you all in an orderly line against the wall." Said Ratigan. They all just sat there staring at them. Redeye pulled out a gun.
"I'd get busy." He said, raising it. Almost at once, most of the mice moved against the wall. All except for the Flaversham cousins, and Liz. She still had her eyes fixed on Ratigan in a glare.
She looked over to Olivia, Olivia just nodded. Of course, Remy didn't know this routine of theirs, not hanging around a bunch of girls all the time.
"Are you denying my order?" Said Redeye.
"I don't take orders from sewer rats." Said Liz, glaring at him.
"Now!" Shouted Olivia, jumping over, and pushing Ratigan out into the hallway. Liz jumped on top of Redeye, and they rolled all around the front of the room.
"Mr. Demont!" Shouted Liz. "Go get... Principal Le'mouse." She huffed, while she tried to get Redeye off of her, after he pinned her to the floor. Mr. Demont ran out into the hallway.
Once he got out there, he was hit by a flying Olivia. Ratigan had thrown her off of him, and she hit Mr. Demont, knocking Mr. Demont out, and herself, hurt very badly.
Ratigan walked in the room just as Liz got thrown against the wall by Redeye. At about that moment, the hot air balloon dropped a ball through the skylight, which just ironically, happened to be in their room. Ridget had got the hot air balloon after the two rats started fighting the girls that resisted.
"Come on! Hurry." Said Ridget, gliding down, being able to fly better than his brother. He had lowered a platform. Ratigan and Redeye lifted the machine onto the platform. They almost got to the ladder when Remy appeared.
"Don't move!" He said, holding up a meter stick. Ratigan and Redeye laughed and Remy hit them both with the long meter stick.
"You think I'm kidding!" More serious than he had ever been in his entire life.
"No, I think he is though." Said Ratigan pointing upwards. Ridget had a meter stick also, and whacked Remy over the head with it. Remy fell to the ground, uncautious.
"Remy!" shouted Olivia from the entrance.
"Come on, we'll take the kid. He could prove useful." Said Redeye, grabbing Remy and climbing up the ladder. Ratigan followed. The balloon started to lift away. Olivia got up, and though it hurt, she ran and jumped for the ladder. She missed, unfortunately, and fell to the ground. It hurt so much, she just laid there, wondering what would become of her beloved cousin.
The principal ran in right behind Mr. Demont. He looked at the knocked over desks, the broken skylight, and the big hole in the ground where the ball had been dropped. All the students were lined up against the wall, staring in horror. Only three were not lined up, and two were noticeable in the debris. One, however, was not.
"Where's Remy?"
Alright, that's it for chapter two. I'm not sure What they use Remy for... yet. I just thought that it would add to the suspense, plus I couldn't have him kidnap Liz again, because then it would be more like a series, where something always happens to the girl, and the father has to rescue her. So, I hope I'm not as predictable as my friends think I am, and well read on, fellow readers, read on!
