New chappy i feel a bit better today hopefully will be better. I hope you enjoy it.

Josh: She owns nothing

Aaron:Everything goes to Steven Moffat and Russel T Davies

Daniel: Except the idea!

Me: Hai! Allons-y!

Chapter 2 : Run!

Louise's P.O.V

It raised its claw ready to strike when suddenly a hand latched onto mine and i heard someone whisper, "Run!" I quickly grabbed Josh's hand who grabbed Daniel's, who then grabbed Aaron's as i began to be dragged through the arndale. We ran for a few minutes until we came to cineworld and hid in the old bingo place.

I turned and finally got a look at our saviour. "JOHN?!" We all shouted at the same time. "Yes? Oh right you probably want an explanation, well that's obvious. Oh and my names not John it's The Doctor." He said really quickly. "Ok. 1st who call's themselves the Doctor?" Josh asked. "I do." The Doctor answered. "2nd what's going on?" I then asked. "Well that thing you just saw. It was a Slitheen, and alien from the planet Raxacoricofallapatorius." He said confidently." "And you know that how?" Aaron asked. "I'm alien too." He said with a smile. "What?" We shouted simutanlesly. "Yep. Now if you want to live stick close to me, listen to everything i say and DON'T WANDER OFF." He warned. Everyone nodded.

"Ok. Now i need vinegar and water guns." The Doctor said. "Well, i think Mcdonalds have vinegar." Josh said. "Yeah nut Burger king is closer." i suggested. "Ok. Daniel, Aaron you got to burger king get some vinegar." Josh ordered. The Doctor tossed a small container to them. "Be careful if you see the Slitheen. Run!" They both nodded and began to walk out. "Hold on. Your going to need this." The Doctor tossed a silver cylinder with a blue tip at them. They caught it then ran out.

"Now. Water guns." I said rubbing my hands together. "Ermm. We could try wilkisons." Josh suggested. "Yeah or the pound shop." Josh nodded. "Ok you two go to the shops. I'm going to find the Slitheen." The Doctor said. "Why?" "To talk to them of course." He then slauntered out of the shop. "He's weird." "He's alien." Myself and Josh then split up to go to find some water guns.

Louise...

I went up to the outside and saw the padlock. It was unlocked. Stupid idiots!

Josh...

When i got up to wilkisons i tried the door. Unlocked awesome! Fucking idiots!

Daniel and Aaron...

They got outside Buger king and took out the thing the Doctor gave them. "Errm. I think you press the button." Aaron suggested. Daniel nodded and pressed the button. The tip lit up and the door clicked. When Daniel checked it, it was unlocked. "Cool." He said. He and Aaron went inside and went into the kitchen. "A-ha! Got it!" Aaron said screwing th elid on the contanier.

They head out and ran back to gala. "hmmm no one's here." Aaron observed. "Must be getting the guns." Daniel shrugged.

The Doctor...

The Doctor walked around looking for his green friends. "Heellloooo! Slitheen?! The Doctor will see you now!" He continued walking until he heard a voice. "The almighty Doctor?" A green figure stepped out of the shadows. "Helllo. What's your name?" He asked with excitment. "Rangness." "Lovely name. So what do you wan with this planet?"

Josh...

I walked out of the store empty handed. Godamnit! Fucking Wilkinsons.

The Doctor...

"Oh. So the same old story then? You want money. You really are a greedy bunch you know that?" The Doctor complained. "We need it to survive. Just like humans." "I won't let you! I WON'T LET YOU BLOW UP THIS PLANET!"

Louise...

I walked around until i came across some guns. Yes i grabbed 5 then head back to gala. When i go there i saw no one there. Must still be out. but wait ther's vinegar. The must of went looking for us. Better go get them. I put down the guns then headed out again. I walked into the entrance and saw something out of the corner of my eye. I turned and screamed.

Josh...

"Kyyyyaaaaaaaaaa~" LOUISE!

Daniel and Aaron

"Kyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaa~" They both gasped. "LOUISE!"

The Doctor...

"Kyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaa~" "LOUiSE! What have you done to her." The Doctor shouted. "Ahhh, a human just what we needed." "What?" His question was short lived when Rangess teleported out. The Doctor ran his hands through his hair. What now?

Well another end.

Josh: awwwwww it was getting good!

Me: Tehheeeeeheeee.

Daniel: Why don't i talk?

Me: You will

Aaron: See you next time!