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Holly Short had always been yearning to get into Commander Root's favorite list. However little did she have the idea about the fact that she had already earned herself that position decades back. Not that her commander was showing that. It was always "do is", "do that", "wear your dress properly" and mostly "what time is this". All of these comments were of course said in his "beetroot" face. Thinking about him she chuckled for a moment despite of knowing how serious the mission was. She regained her seriousness within a moment, but it was not fast enough. She gulped and tried to ignore her ears.
"SHORT. Have you lost it? Do you even have any idea about how important this mission is? This demonstration could change that lives of all fairies. I do not want this meeting to be disturbed by anyone, especially your Fowl friend."
Until that point Holly had been taking it usually until it reached the Fowl point. The only reason Artemis had stolen from the people was for his father. He certainly would not do it again, would he? No she decided. They were now friends weren't they? Besides how was Fowl supposed to know about it? There were only about ten computers in the world containing about this meeting and Artemis' computer was not one of them plus he was at school and every single device in the building is monitored regularly by the genius centaur Foaly.
Holly had no idea how wrong she had been as getting the machine was the primary goal Artemis wanted to have in his hands at the moment…