Second Chapter (just so you know it was still dark outside when Simon left the Ice Kingdom.)
I've also decided to start listing the ages of people in the story (but only the ones who will show up in the chapter.)
Marceline 1,008
Ice King 1062 (best guess)
Mark 5
Not sure if I need a disclaimer but I'm gonna put one in anyway. I do not own anything except for the parts that I made up and are my ideas.
As He flew quietly towards his destination Simon started to wonder about what he would say. He knew it would be difficult to convince them that he was not evil anymore but he knew he had to try.
Just then some light from the sun started to creep over the horizon revealing his destination. It was an old house built into a tree. He landed nearby and walked up to the door, feeling a little apprehensive he knocked within a minute a young boy answered the door. He appeared to be 5 or 6 years old his skin was a pale gray color he had short light black hair, dark green eyes and was wearing black shorts and a t-shirt with a picture of a stickman being hung on it.
"Hi," Simon started "is your Mom or Dad home?" he said more or less expecting what came next. "MOM THAT WEIRD BLUE GUY IS AT THE DOOR AGAIN!" the little boy suddenly shouted causing a crash followed by a string of cussing to be heard from upstairs "Damn it Mark you don't need to yell that loud," Marceline said as she floated down the stairs and then looked at the Ice King. "What the fuck are you doing here," she said causing him to flinch.
He was about to start explaining when Mark cut in "Mom, Dad said he didn't want you using words like that around me anymore." Marceline suddenly remembered that Mark was standing right there, "Oh uh sorry Mark don't tell your dad what I said."
"Raise my allowance?" Mark asked. "Wha oh fine now go upstairs." Marceline said sighing. After Mark had gone up the stairs Simon decided to break the silence "Cute kid," He said. This earned him a cold stare from Marceline who after sitting there for a second said "What do you want Ice King?"
He stood there for a second just looking at Marceline, sure he knew what she looked like from the Ice Kings memories but HE hadn't actually seen her since she was a little girl and now she looked like she was 18 or 19 though Simon knew she must have been much older. She was wearing her usual blue jeans with a t-shirt that had a crossed off cigarette on it she was also wearing long red boats that came halfway to her knees. "Well are you going to answer me?" she asked sounding a little exasperated, "Oh right" he said feeling slightly embarrassed, "Well I need help." He said.
"Help, you want help from us?" She said trying not to laugh "With what, being less pathetic?" with that she finally burst out laughing. "Marceline I'm being serious here," he said pausing before continuing, "I'm not the Ice King anymore." This caused Marceline to stop laughing and she looked at him with shock clearly showing on her face "I'm Simon again or I am for now at least," he said.
Marceline just kept looking at him in shock not sure whether what he was saying was the truth or not then she had an idea "Prove it," she said, "tell me something only Simon would know." He thought about this for a moment then he finally said, "When you were still a little girl I found you crying in the middle of what used to be a city and gave you a teddy bear."
Marceline looked like she was going to cry for a second but then she smiled, "It really is you Simon," she said, "but what do you need help with?" "Well," he started, "I think I'm going insane again and, if possible I'd like to prevent that from happening." Marceline just stared at him for a second not saying anything then she asked "why did you come to us for help?" "To be honest you were the only people I could think of asking," he said, "anyway is Finn home?"
"No," Marceline responded, "he's out on some adventure with Jake but he'll probably be home soon if you want to wait." "Ok," Simon said, "can I wait inside?" "Sure." Marceline responded, "but don't touch anything." And with that she opened the door all the way so that he could come in.
Alright ending there for now mostly cause I have a question I can't decide if I should make Finn a vampire or not,(if at this point you haven't figured out that Finn and Marceline are married and that Mark is their kid then I boo you sir) Anyway I've been trying to decide whether I should have it so that Marceline turned Finn into a vampire so they could stay together forever (kinda sounds creepy when you put it like that)well I can't make a decision so I decided to ask you(anyone who is reading this) please give me your opinion also any general advice for the story would be appreciated. I said I would make it longer and I did.
(Can't wait for more actiony chapters with fighting and that biz)
