I just realized that my first chapter was 666 words! Is that bad cause I'm laughing my ass off. Anyways, I'm going POV, third person is too hard.
fate this: Shu will only have voids that he had used himself and the Gundam thing actually got me thinking about Derf.
Disclaimer: See Ch 1
Chapter 2: Realization (REWRITEN)
Shu's POV
"I'm awake?" I started looking around to see where I was at. I saw a four poster bed, a desk, wardrobe, chairs, a table, and several lit candles. What struck me odd was that most of the stuff was made out of mostly wood and that there was no electric lighting around. Next I notice that the walls were made from stone.
I sat there trying to make sense of all of this. "Last thing I remembered was absorbing all of the Apocalypse Virus, which should have killed me. But I'm here and alive, I think."
Then the door open to reveal a small girl with what seems to be natural pink hair. "Could she be like Inori?" I wonder, "There are not many people with natural pink hair."
The girl then looked at me and spoke. She was speaking in some kind of language I didn't understand. "Is she French?" I wondered, basing that guess was based on what little knowledge I had of foreign languages.
"Do you speak Japanese?" I asked the girl once she was done speaking.
All the sudden she started to undress right in front of me! "Whoa what are you doing?!" I yelled out. Then the girl threw her clothes at me and started speaking again. Didn't she hear me or does she not understand Japanese?
"I already have someone else and besides, who are you?" I asked the strange girl. She then grabbed a wooden stick and pointed at me. Does she think that she is some kind of magician or something?
BOOM
"ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME OR SOMETHING!" I yelled very loudly at her. Explosions did lead to people dying in my experience.
"I was trying a translation spell!" I heard her say. Wait…I understood what she was saying! "Wait, I understood that!" Looks like she could understand what I was said too.
"What is your name?" she asked me.
"Isn't it more polite to give one's name before asking for someone else's?" I asked. For some odd reason, her face started to turn red.
"Stupid peasant! When a noble ask for your name you have to give it!"
Peasant and noble? What time period is she living in? "Ouma Shu" I said telling her my name.
"I am your master Louise Francoise Le Blanc de La Valliere and you are my familiar" Louise said in a high and mighty stuck up voice.
"Familiar?" I asked.
Scene Brake
"So I'm in the Kingdom of Tristein, this place is a magic school, and you're a student here."
"You are to call me master not 'you'" Louise said interrupting me.
Yeah right "And I'm a familiar that all magicians must summon and have near them." This sounds like a generic book plot for magic.
"Why did I get a peasant with only one arm." Louise wined, "I wanted something cool like a dragon or a griffon. Even something with all their limbs would be better."
I think that I should leave. I started running out the door. That girl is crazy, maybe even more as that one GHQ pilot. I rounded a corner and saw two more people with the same cape thing that girl had. Is everybody around here like this? They were talking like a couple and I caught some of their conversation, but I need to get pass them. Run!
Another corner and I saw the outside. Finally, an exit! What is with all that talk about magic anyways?
All the sudden I found myself floating and flying through the air. I don't have any voids out, why am I flying?! Then I looked up towards the sky.
What the, there are TWO MOONS! If I'm not dead then where the hell am I?
A/N time!
I know that Shu is OOC, but he is supposed to be dead in his mind set. He will be more badass later, like in the next chapter, the duel against Guiche.
(Rewrite): Hope I got Shu straighten out. Haven't watched Guilty Crown for a couple of years.
