Chapter One.
Hey guys. So I'm starting to rewrite this story but for now all i have for this chapter is this authors note. Anyways so I've been wanting to write my creepypasta story but this story is going to take longer to write than I thought. So yeah. I don't know when the creepypasta story will be out but... hopefully before I turn fourteen and if it's not out by then- which is a long ways away- hopefully I will get started on it around that age and I'll be the same age outside the first story as I am inside the story... but anyways... hope you enjoy the rewrite of this story. :)
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It was a dark night. All but the moon where out in the sky that night. It was a silent night. Nothing made a sound except for the prey that would come out at night... but all that silence was broken by a wail of a pregnant cat in the Thunderclan nursery.
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A cat ran towards a cave in the rock wall. He burst through the brambles waking up the cat that slept there.
"RAVENFUR!" the tom screamed.
"Huh... what?" the black she-cat asked.
"Brambletail... what's going on?"
"It's Leafclaw! The kits are coming!"
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Brambletail paced outside the nursery. He would sit down a couple of times but his back left leg started tapping the ground and then he would start pacing again.
"Brambletail.. she's going to be fine." a golden fluffy she-cat said.
"How do you know Goldenfeather!" he screamed at his sister.
Goldenfeather didn't say anything and Brambletail went back to pacing.
There were other two toms there. One was a white tom with brown eyes. His name was Snowcloud. The other tom was a dark brown tom with orange patches and blues. He was the brother of Leafclaw. His name was Lostflight- he was also a cat who liked his own gender. The mate of Snowcloud would have been sitting with him... but the pink she-cat - Cherrypit- was expecting her own kits in three moons and was helping out the medicine cat. A couple kits sat outside the nursery with their mothers, who left the nursery so it wouldn't be crowded, along with two young warriors. The two young warriors were the daughter and son of Leafclaw. The half siblings of the new-born kits. The ten kits where one moon older and the other kit was two moons older than the ones being born.
"Is everything all right?" asked a blue she kit sitting next to her mother.
"I don't know Stonekit." said the she-cat.
Stonekit looked over at her adopted sister- Shadowkit- who was watching the nursery with curious eyes. Shadowkit was from Shadowclan.
"Spottedkit!" Ravenfur screamed from inside the nursery at the two moons older kit.
"Yes, Ravenfur?" the tortoiseshell black she-kit asked.
"Get me some poppy seeds. They're.."
"In the storage space. I know what they look like!" she said as she ran off.
"Lilly. Wild." said a rogue she-cat. "What are you doing! Get back here!"
Lilly and Wild were trying to get inside the nursery to get a look on whats going on. They walked back to their mother.
"You know.."
"What Spottedfur." the she-cat said angrily.
"You should stay in the clan... you and your kits."
"No. We're getting leaving in the morning. I'm tired of living in this clan."
The dark she-cat went back to looking angrily to her right and grumbled pulling all but Lilly and Wild close to her with her tail.
Spottedkit came back and entered the nursery.
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"Brambletail. You can come in know." Ravenfur said.
Brambletail entered to see Leafclaw looking lovingly at the five kits.
"There beautiful." He said sitting down next to the kits.
"I'm thinking of naming this one Rabbitkit." Leafclaw said pointing with her tail at the brown/ white tom with black paws. This kit would probably become a strong warrior for he was the biggest of the kits.
"This one should be called Redkit." Brambletail said pointing at the red kit with black tipped ears and muzzle.
The other tom was named Pinekit for his deep forest green eyes. He was a black furred tom. The other tom was named Nightkit for his fur was the color of the sky at night and his eyes were black with flecks of grey.
"What should we name her?" Leafclaw asked.
Brambletail looked at the small kit. She had creamed colored fur with lighter cream strips along her back. Her snout was the same color as her stripes, along with her ears, chest, paws, and tail. She also had brown on the tips of her ears and her tail. She also had the same colored green eyes as her dad.
"I don't know... but.. she's so small."
"She'll be lucky enough to make it through winter." Ravenfur said.
"What do you mean lucky! She WILL make it through winter."
"Brambletail.." Leafclaw started.
"It's not my fault that she's this small."
"I think you should leave." Before the medicine cat could protest she was shoved out of the nursery.
"Brambletail... you don't have to be so mean."
"She insulted our kit, Leafclaw."
Leafclaw just sighs.
"What should we call her?" Brambletail asks.
The kits and queens started to feed back through the entrance. Everyone fell asleep except for Stonekit, Shadowkit, Lilly, Wild, Spottedkit, and the three other tom's who just sat in their nest and watched.
"What are their names?" Stonekit asked.
"Well this ones Rabbitkit, Redkit, Pinekit, and Nightkit."
"What about the small one?" Wild asked.
"Um... we haven't figured out a name yet."
All four kits thought what name would fit the small kit will Shadowkit studied the kit with interest. Then a name came to mind.
"Wolf.." she said.
"What?" Leafclaw asked.
"Wolfkit. She should be called Wolfkit."
"Why should she be called that?" a brown tom asked. He was one of the toms who watched them. "She should be called Smallkit... or Runtkit."
"You shut your mouth flee pelt!" Shadowkit said getting up in his face. "You weren't apart of this."
"Hey I'm just trying to be helpful."
Shadowkit would have snapped his neck if she could... but she didn't... mostly because Stonekit held her back.
"Hawkkit you should just go back to your nest." Stonekit said.
"Whatever you say." Hawkkit liked to tease Stonekit by flirting... but she never let him annoy her- which annoyed Hawkkit himself.
"That's a great name." Leafclaw said falling asleep.
Brambeltail looked at the kit who would be teased none stop for her blood line.
"My little Wolfkit." Brambeltail liked the top of her head and left leaving everyone to sleep.
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Ravenfur slept in her den when she was pulled into a dream from Starclan.
"Ravenfur." someone whispered but the she-cat didn't stir.
"Ravenfur." the voice spoke up, but all she did was roll over and mumble.
"RAVENFUR!" Ravenfur jumped up at the sound of the voice and found herself in a black void full of stars.
"What? What's going on?" She asks thinking Starclan was messing with her. Her mentor always did like to pull pranks on her.
"Earth shall crumble underneath paws..." a voice whispers.
"What?" Ravenfur looks around
"Air shall tear us apart..."
Ravenfur looks behind her. "Hello?!"
"Water shall pull us under..."
"This isn't funny Oakfur!" Ravenfur screams.
"And Fire... shall burn us down!"
"NO!"
Ravenfur finally stops to find four shadowed warriors standing in front of her. One glowed in an aurora of white. The one standing next to this cat glowed in an aurora of green. The other glowed in blue. But the last one glowed in an orange light. This one gave Ravenfur chills.
Then she started to get smacked with harsh winds and she had to dig her claws into the black floor beneath her... which didn't work. She was then being drenched by tons of water. The ground beneath her started to shake... and the last thing scarred her most. She was surrounded by fire... all four cats surrounded her... and her eyes landed on the one glowing in orange... then everything went black.
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Ravenfur woke up gasping for air.
"I got to tell Stormstar." Ravenfur said and walked to the high rock.
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Hey guys. So there's the first chapter of the rewrite of Fire, Water, Earth, and Air. Hope you guys liked and please comment and tell me what you thought of the rewrite. I tried my hardest writing this. Thanks for reading! :)