Seperated this because it got so long there...
Wait. Before you get any ideas, I'm telling you with all my soul, I am NOT a Lavi basher. I am neither a hater nor a fan of his. So why this plotless torturing Lavi story you ask? Simply out of whim. I was planning this since last late December, with all the things and all, I only got to finish it now.
I don't know if some of you may have noticed… I suppose in the middle part down to the end… it kind of went downhill from there. As you can also see, I think I may have confused many verbs with the past and present tense. (Is too lazy to hunt and correct) Woe. :[
And… I didn't really explain the feelings quite enough…the pain and all… I can't really. Since I've never experienced it at first hand, but I hope I gave you the imagery quite clearly to see what's really happening. Sorry if they're OOC, I really tried.
I am planning on a sequel,...though. About what the others will think when they see what happened to Lavi. But anyway... if you want it, that is. XD I don't really mind.
Also, I wouldn't mind if you point out mistakes that I made here and there…
And if some of you may wonder, no, this is not how Tyki expresses his sick love for Lavi. D:
Seriously. No. This was not intended to have any bit of romance or anything at all related to it.
But if your mind wishes to accept that fact, feel free to do so and may God bless your soul.
But to top it all off, I am not a shounen ai fan. No offense btw.
Song used : The Virus of Life by Slipknot
I would also like to thank Nagu-san for helping me with this fic... (even though she hates the thought of that really happening to Lavi)
Thanks for reading!
Critiques, comments and corrections are greatly appreciated. Then again, please do review, I want to know what you think.
Trivia (because I'm bored) about # of used.
I's : 257
My's : 159
Me's : 113
Hear : 33
Could's : 23
Feel's : 23
Boy's : 13