Mayeevee~ Hello there, Mevy here with a newly revised chapter 2 of the Legendary heart series, okay well this one isn't as long as the revised chapter 1, sorry people but I hope around 3,226 along with AN is enough satisfy your tastes before chapter 3 comes, which hopefully, will be longer. Okay well I left my response to the original reviews of chapter 1 to show my thankfulness to the people who reviewed the original chapter, well here is the review response! A
SakuraettiMay~ thank you for your kind comment and I am sorry about the spelling and grammar mistake, I promise that I tried really hard not to do the same mistakes again, thank you for reading and being the first reviewer :)
Pinkcott123~ thank you so much for reading my story, again, I'm really grateful to you for letting me make a story based off of yours, thank you again and I hope you enjoy the story
Need-For-Sleep~ thank you for your nice review, I'm sorry for the late update and I hope that you enjoy the story
Mevy~ also for the song in the bottom it would be better if you listen to the song while reading the lyrics, it's only a suggestion you do not have to do it but it is highly recommended
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Chapter 2- Mysterious power
A girl stood there, she had beautiful golden eyes yet they were dulled by how emotionless they were, she wore a strapless dress which was wavy in the bottom, it reached just below her knees and was quite plain.
She had beautiful white dove wings, they were about 12 feet long casting a great shadow behind her, the Misty and the rest had no doubt that those wings would be able to fully wrap around the girl and leave no part uncovered.
The angel girl also had beautiful white hair and bangs that fell down to her eyes, her hair fell down to her back a little lower than her waist. Her skin was really pale but not slickly pale, her face like her eyes didn't show one bit of emotion, her mouth practically forming a straight line.
Misty hung her head in disappointment, "Principle Cynthia was right, we can't fix the pendants. Especially not May's" Misty then formed her hand into a fist and waved it up in the air.
"Damn them all now we have to deal with Angel of all people" she then started cursing at the sky like if it was its fault, all the girls except Misty and the now known Angel sweat dropped.
'She really has to control that anger of hers' they all thought in sync except again for Misty and Angel.
"Ugh, I guess we should take her home and tell the principle of what happened when we get there, but first we have to bring back May and send Angel to wherever the hell she resides" Dawn said hanging her head down thought her voice had a bit of anger in it on the last part that she had said, they all knew how the principle got when they broke one of their pendants, she went total diva on them, this was not going to be pretty.
It was also extremely difficult to deal with each other's 'legendary personalities' or 'inners' as they have dubbed them, the reason being that they found each other's legendary personalities quite annoying if not unsupportable..
They walked down the forest until they got to the forest's exit, Dawn's hand then shined an indigo purple light, suddenly a purple cloak appeared in her hand. "Here Angel, put the cloak over yourself, be sure not to let anyone get a look at your wings, fold them and cover them with the cloak as best as you can."
Angel did as she was told, she folded her wings and covered them with the cloak, making sure that they are not visible although it was quite hard seeing as that the wings were a little too big for the cloke, in the end Angel shrank her wings temporarily and covered the now around 4 feet wide wings.
When she finished covering herself she looked back at the girls with a look of indifference although the girls could practically feel the annoyance she was inwardly feeling, thanks to the small part of May that was still there.
Seeing as that she was finished and completely covered they made their way out of the forest and to the school's entrance/exit, not knowing that 4 figures were watching them go.
At the house Dawn closed the door and locked it, it just had to happen, seriously out of all of them why May, Dawn looked down, completely depressed 'This was not suppose to happen' she thought in annoyance.
It was an unknown secret that May, Leaf, Dawn, and Misty were 4 of the 5 diamonds. Dawn was Cresselia's trainer, Leaf was Virizion's trainer, Misty was Kyogre's trainer, and of course May was Arceus' trainer.
Fate made it so that Dawn and the rest had to go into hiding because of unfortunate circumstances and happenings. They had to choose a second partnering pokemon, Dawn and the rest chose eevees in the beginning but the eevees evolved all except May's.
Because they had to go into hiding they had a choice, either go into Silvermoon high school and act as students there, or stay with their parents and be under surveillance 24/7, of course the girls chose the latter.
Dawn was snapped out of her mental thinking by Leaf, she gave her an embarrassed smile as she made her way to a room next to May's bedroom.
Leaf opened the door while Dawn's eyes shone in excitement, it had been a long time since May ,or in this case Angel as she is now, played to them and she couldn't wait for the marvelousness of Angel's melody.
She had a big smile stuck in her lips, the girls all learned from Arceus and the rest of their legendaries that the only way for May and all the other girls at that, to be brought back from their 'sleep' as they called it was by doing their calling or special talent that they enjoyed, May's was art especially music, Dawn's was design and dance, Leaf's was sports, and Misty's was swimming and Martial Arts.
The reason they needed to do their calling or talent was because when their pendants were taken off they would be switched by their 'legendary personalities' as they called them. When that happened the girls would be put into a deep sleep in their inner consciousness and will give control to their inner personalities or the 'true' Diamonds who, to their distress, had personalities polar opposites to their own.
When their legendary inners take over Dawn went from loudmouth jokester into serious and silent all about business girl, May went from a total bipolar bomb into an emotionless iceblock, Misty became form confident and courageous lion to shy and timid kitty, Leaf became from serious and deadpan slightly no fooling around girl into bubbly and teasing clown.
It was like their emotions became the total opposite of what they were like, the only way to get their control back was by doing their talent.
Leaf looked at Angel with shining eyes, she really did miss having Angel or May play for them, "You know what to do Angel" Leaf said with a smile directed to the passive white haired girl.
The room was filled with instruments and art material of all kinds could be seen placed around the room in an unordinary manner.
Many paintings hanged from the walls as canvases along with sheets filled with song lyrics or drawings littered the floor, Leaf sighted, May rarely cleaned in the room to the point where it looked as if a hurricane blew inside it.
Angel walked up to the big piano, which was one of her most favorite instruments, that was located in the right far corner of the huge room, she proceeded to sit down, she then flexed her fingers ever so slightly getting ready to play the needed chores, then she proceeded to play the beginning notes of the song.
(Sorry guys but it is against site rules to put in lyrics from songs)
Angel then started to sing the song that she held close to her heart, it was a song that she had written for her. In actuality it was written for May but in reality May as her were the same person and so naturally the song was also made for her.
She played and played, her voice growing stronger and softer at the right moments of her song. She sang about mornings and stars and just living life, a normal life that she craved but could never have.
Angel played the last few cords, her golden eyes were closed, she sighted in content as she felt herself gradually slipping away with every last cord, golden eyes opened at the end of the instrumental ending, the cold emotionless gaze that was there a few minutes ago was gone, the eyes now held warmth as the owner of those eyes pulled her lips into a smile the other girls were happy to have back.
"Yay, thank god it worked we got May back" squealed Dawn as she pulled the newly 'brought back' May into a bone crushing hug, all the girls smiled, no matter how many times they have done this it still hasn't gotten old, they were just relieved it stilled work after so many years of doing the same thing to get their control back from their legendary personalities.
"Okay, I think we should call the principle now so that she can tell us when we can get another crystal amulet for May" all the girls shiver with the now newly included May.
Dawn was pretty sure that they were all equally afraid of principe Cynthia, but she was sure that she was the most frightened seeing as that Cynthia was her aunt so she was even more aware of how truly scary she was when pissed.
May sighed, why couldn't Arceus have any pity on her poor soul, mostly seeing as that he was supposedly her Pokemon and partner, what good that does to her.
She then looked at the girls with cautious eyes that held a great amount of fear in their depths. "We should maybe call her sooner rather than later" all the girls nodded solemnly in agreement, still not wanting to face their principal's well known temper.
They headed to their living room where a plasma tv was up against the wall. May went up to the tv and connected her phone on the tv while typing in the number of their beloved principal.
May stood back and then turned on the tv, it blinked to life as a phone symbol that was vibrating came to life. The phone symbol was soon replaced by a young looking woman's face.
"Why hello there girls, What can I do for you?" The woman spoke with a strong yet lyrical voice, she had long beautiful blond hair that shone with looked quite young, looking around her early 20s while in reality she was older but certainly not old.
She looked at the girls, eyes narrowing slightly at their squirming figures. "Well you see, hahaha" Misty started speaking but ended up laughing nervously in the end "We have a little dilemma" Misty continued, squirming at the older woman's narrow eyed stare.
"And what, may I ask, is this dilemma you are speaking about " Cynthia demanded rather than asked, her silver-grey colored eyes now narrowed to the point where her pupils were practically slits.
"Ummm... May get over here" all the girls except May said in unison. "Oh fine" May then said grumbling incoherent things at the girls and just how great they were, throwing her to the lion as they did.
May then stepped in front of the plasma tv, in full view for Cynthia to see. "Well shit" Cynthia cursed, fingers rubbing her temples. "May AGAIN!, Seriously!?, this has to be that six time this MONTH" You could practically feel the agitation in her voice as she glared at May with blazing silver eyes.
"It was not my fault!, he was the one who started it, it's his freaking fault" May grumbled in her defense, saying a few curse words afterwards. "So it was a he, hm interesting, so who's the lucky fellow?" Cynthia said teasingly. "Oh no no no NO, don't even go there" May said furiously.
"His name's Drew Hayden" Dawn added in ever the so helpful angel, or devil in this case, said. "Thanks a lot Dawn, you are so helpful" May said grumbling things something in the line of 'Paul', 'right' and 'troublesome'.
"Don't even go there Hakura" Dawn said threateningly at May, hissing her last name to add affect. "Make me Hikari" May said back with equal malice.
Cynthia sighed and looked guiltily at the girls. "You guys do know not to get attached, as you may already know, it's your parent's choice to choose who you will marry" all the girls tensed at that.
How could they forget, their parents will be the ones choosing who may be their groom, they won't even get to meet their future grooms a month after their parents have made their choice, in the opinions of their parents them choosing their daughter['s groom was 'honorable' and went with 'tradition'.
All of that was fudging bullshit in the girl's opinion, true they weren't the type to believe in happily ever after and finding prince charming and shit like that but they wanted to atleast have the choice of who they were going to spend the rest of their freaking life together.
Actually if it was their choice there will be no wedding period, it would certainly save all the headache it caused to poor, suffering girls .
It was surprisingly Dawn who broke the silence, head inclined she murmured "Don't worry Cynthia, they are just some boys at school who can't seem to leave us alone, we will not get attached".
All the girls looked sadly at Dawn, the news about the engagement came down the hardest for her seeing as she had a sweetheart in middle school and Freshman along with junior year, she had to end their relation because of the announcement seeing as that the poor guy was a mere civilian and not from a prominent family.
The poor boy then moved to accomplishing his dream and in quote 'become someone worthy of Dawn's love, someone who her parents will accept' Dawn hasn't heard of him again since then.
"Well anyways, I am sorry to say May that I don't really have any crystals left" Cynthia said, wisely changing topics.
"WHAT!" May screamed in both shock along with a hint of agitation "How am I supposed to go to school like THIS" she then waved her hands up and down her body to add affect, her wings flapping roughly in her back showing her growing panic at the news.
"Just absorb your wings like we have practiced and put an illusion over yourself" Cynthia responded looking at her expectantly.
"Fine, when are you going to get more crystals?, Everyone here knows that I can hold control over my body for so long before Angel gains her rightful control back" May grumbled clearly not at all pleased about the news, voice laced in worry at the last part that she had said.
"I will get new crystals in about a week or two from now" Cynthia responded.
"I hate my life" May groaned agitatedly inclining her head while wrapping her huge wings around her small frame for self comfort.
"Anyways, I have just received a report from Soul, Lugia and her will be here in about two days from their mission"
At the news all the girls quickly perked up squealed in happiness, they had missed their sister dearly to the point where it hurt. They couldn't wait to have her back and safely in their arms, they hated the day she was assigned that stupid mission, effectively taking her away from her sisters.
"Well now that that's been said I will see all you girls tomorrow, ja ne (goodbye)" the screen went black and all the girls stood there watching the screen with a look of bewilderment in all of their faces.
"Wow... That went better than last time" Leaf said, all the girls nodded in usion looking wide eyed at the screen.
"Well I'm going out on a fly" May said flapping her wings back and forth.
"Do you think that is wise" Dawn asked, doubt lacing her voice.
"Sure, anyway everyone already knows about the great and powerful Angel of the Diamond group, the worst that could happen is get my picture taken, and that will only have one in a million of coming clear with my speed" May said matter-of-factly.
"Fine fine, go now before it gets too late, we still have school tomorrow" Leaf said exasperated knowing nothing will convince May not to go.
"Okay bye"
With that May left in a huge gust of wind going out the door in a matter of seconds.
"That girl is going to be the end of us" Leaf said shaking her head fondly.
All the girls nodded their heads with equal fondness.
"You said it sister" Dawn said and all the girls laughed and went to their 'special' room next to their bedrooms, working more on their talents.
Mevy- and done, sorry again for the long wait and for how short it is (bows in apology) also the song that May sang was My soul your beat by Lia, its the opening from this anime called Angel beats and I really thought that the song went well with this story, I advise that you hear this song while reading this chapter along with the following chaps though its in japanese
I hope you guys liked this newly revised chap of legendary heart ^.^
Dawn- I still can't believe you brought up-
Mevy- (covering Dawn's mouth) now now Dawn you wouldn't want to spoil the name of your childhood sweetheart to the readers would you (smiling evilly)
Dawn- (shakes head and shivers in fear)
Mevy- okay :D, hope you guys enjoyed the chap and can't wait to see you soon~
May- (thinking) 'this girl's really bipolar' (sweatdrops as she sees Mevy carrying Dawn into an unknown place) 'and scary' (shudders and runs for her life)
Mevy- (comes back from wherever she went with Dawn) I almost forgot, please review about the shipping you would like to see more if, okay know, Bye~
PS also considering the Sweetheart thing if people that have already read the story is re-reading you guys can be the first to know that I have decided that more than one person will be allowed to win the prize, Guests have to also leave some way for me to be able to give them the prize, one way is if you are part of Lake Valor give me your username and I'll pm you there
Only up to 5 people or less will be able to win
~Mevy