Refarding my writing i said this before and I'll say it again... English is not my main language... arabic is... so don't expect a lot out of me.

And its Ramadan, I haven't eaten since i woke up so cut me some slack ok :P

liam bullock
if you got something to say, just say it and use your acount if you have one

ri100014

thanks for the advice but yes its not a race, i just get bored from writing a lot :p

also,

Its not a race, if anything the only thing your getting from posting your work here or anywhere is personal pride. So let your pride flourish and take your time.

I am not an expert but i know thats not right... right:P

chapter 2

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Ron got into the gym in Drakkens hide out.

"We don't have time for this" Drakken shouted with frustration... " We need to defeat Kim Possible so that i can rule the world "

"Dude... chill" Ron responded as he prepared for a sparing match with the training dummy "I need to be ready... so does your partner... " pointing at Shego "Kim is a tough girl... i need to be at my best when i face her"

"So how long will this take?" Shego asked as Ron started to hit the dummy with weak punches.

After a couple of punches Ron hit the dummy with an axe kick buriing it in the floor. That earned a gasp from Shego... "Not much"

"Ok how the hell did you do that?" Shego asked still stunned from what she saw.

"Gift I guess" Ron responded... "Ok lets have a sparing match" Ron challanged Shego.

Both of them got into a circle drawn on the ground.

"Attack me" Ron invited... Shego was quick to respond

"With pleasure" she unleashed several bolts at Ron which he ofcourse dodged with ease

"Common" Ron mocked... this frustrated Shego even more

"Ah" she ran towards Ron and threw a lot of punches and kicks at him

Ron swiftly dodged every single one of them and retaliated with a kick to her stomach knocking the air out of her.

She fell to her feet gasping for air.

"This is a waste of my time... "Ron spoke disappointed... "I expected more from you... oh well" Ron hit Shego with a butterfly kick sending her into Drakken which led to both of them hitting the wall leaving some cracks in it. They both fell unconcious.

"Time to pay Kimmie-cub a little visit" Ron smiled

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At BN,

"Where is that boy?" Kim spoke as she started toying with her fork.

"Hello Kim" Brick approached Kim... "Is this seat taken" he asked as he pointed at Ron's usual seat

"actually ye.." Kim was interrupted by Ron

"Hi Kimberly Ann" Ron spoke ... "Eh..." he looked at Brick... "Can you move a bit Kim and I have something to talk about?"

"Not now you loser I am in the middle of something" Brick responded

"I am warning you men... get out of my way" Ron's voice started to show a sign of frustration.

"Fuck off shit head" Brick responded

"or what?" Ron challanged him

The captain of the football team turned around and looked at Ron "what?"

"or what?" Ron repeated

"This" Brick hit Ron with a punch sending him a couple of feet back

"Brick please don't do this" Kim asked

"Its ok Kimberly Ann I got this" Ron straightined up

"Kimberly Ann?" Kim asked her self confused

Brick went for another punch which Ron caught in mid air ... Brick yelled in pain as Ron started to twist his hand... "That wasn't nice you know" Ron spoke as he twisted brick's hand some more... "too boring" Ron hit Brick with a swift kick to the chest sending him over Kim's table straight through the glass and on the street.

Kim's jaw dropped because of what happened infront of her.. "Ron?" she looked at his eyes and noticed something was indeed different about him

"Kimberly Ann now we can get back to that thing I wanted to talk to you a... "Ron stopped and went for a kick trying to surprise Kim.. but she dodged it

Landing swiftly on her feet... "Ok... i think Zorpax is back" Kim spoke remembering that Zorpax called her Kimberly Ann

"What makes you think I am not Ron?" Ron asked with laughter

"Eh.. hello Ron isn't evil" Kim got into a fighting position "what did Drakken do to you this time?" she asked

"A great favor... he helped me realize my potential... I was always this fucked up sidekick of yours... i was going to going to do this in time any way but Drakken fastened up the operation... now i can do what i always wanted to do" Ron had an evil smirk on his face

"Wha..?" Kim was interrupted with a kick to her stomach

"Kick your ass" Ron jumped towards Kim and tried to kick her with another kick which she dodged.

Kim kicked Ron's feet forcing him to fall on the ground "Ron stop this"

Ron did a hand spring and jumped on his feet "Finally a worthy opponent" ... ignoring what she said he went for another kick which she blocked with her hand

"Ah" she yelled in pain as Ron's kick hit her hand... she didn't know was this powerful or this skilled for that matter... she got back on her feet "i am sorry Ron"

"For what?" Ron mocked

"This" she kicked him in the face sending him into a table

"hehehe" Ron stood up and ran towards Kim... he threw one punch two three four ... it wasn't working Kim dodged all of them... she kicked him in the stomach and then in the head

"Give it up" Kim spoke as Ron fell on his knees

"Well no one said this has to be a fair fight" Ron spoke as he stood up

"What?" Kim raised an eyebrow

Ron's body had a bluish glow all over it earning gasp from Kim... "eat this" Ron threw a blue bolt at Kim which she barely dodged

The strength of the explosion sent her a couple of meters in the air... 'whats wrong with Ron' she thought... she wasn't able to think more beacause of a bolt next to her that sent her through the window Brick broke.

She quickly got up and got on a roof using her grabbling hook.

Ron got out of BN and scanned the area... he saw Kim trying to catch her breath on the roof.. "ah little Kimmie wants to play hide and seak"... Ron ran his feet flashed blue as he stepped on the concrete leaving a small hole in it ... Ron's jump got him all the way on to the roof.

Kim noticed this and tried to stand up... she ignored her body's cries to stay down and stood up 'i have to help Ron' was the only thought in her mind

Ron approached her and started punching her... she wasn't able to block any... "hehehe" Ron was toying with her punching her in the face , kicking her in the stomach hitting her in every part of her body.

She fell barely concious on the ground.

"I guess I am going to kill you now" Ron started approaching her.

But 5 of GJ robots intercepted him

Ron looked at the sky and noticed GJ helicopter with Dr.Directer in it... "surrender now" she yelled in the speaker

"Kiss my ass" Ron responded (:P)

The robots jumped him sending him to ground and held him

"Please" Ron spoke as he tore the robots apart and stood up... he looked where Kim was laying to find only blood drops ... he looked at the helicopter and saw Kim with a couple of medics checking her condition... "Ahhh" he threw a blue bolt with frustration... the helicopter dodged it..

"Get us out of here" Dr.Directer ordered the pilot

"yes mem" the pilot responded

The helicopter got away quickly

"look like GJ needs to be shown not to interfere in my buisness" Ron spoke as he settled his mind on his next target.. GJ

to be continued

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I hope his is a little better

R&R