Hey guys. I have decided to continiue with my story after getting reveiws for it. It still belongs to my friend and the plot line is hers but I am going to take over all of it soon. I am also trying to focuss on capital letterrs and grammer (thanks for letting me know Peace3000). By the way the last chapter was all in Nina's POV too.
NINA POV
"You can plan it for tomorrow night because it is a bit late by the time you get out tonight."
"That's a wonderful idea!" joy piped up.
"Whoa joy, I didn't notice you were here because you were so quiet!" mick exclaimed, sitting right next to her.
"Well do you notice me now babe?" joy said smirking as she kissed her boyfriend hard.
"no" mick said plainly once they broke apart,
" joy? Where are you babes?" mick said smirking.
" you cheeky *mumble mumble* you". Joy huffed under her breath.
I thought this was very interesting and so turned to Fabian and he was trying to hold in laughs but failed as they came through his lips quite easily, by this amber was already laughing and Jerome and Alfie thought this was absolutely hilarious and were laughing like hyenas.
Mara obviously didn't get what was so funny so instead tried calming Jerome, only to fail and have him fall off his seat and drag her with him.
This was funny to everyone else and once we all calmed down Jerome and Mara were on the floor still, her legs still draped over the seat, Patricia and Eddie had gone to his room, Alfie was waiting for amber on the love seat while she was taking pictures of Jerome and Mara on the ground and mick and joy enjoying yet another snogging session (as amber calls it).
Fabian and I were talking about date night tomorrow and he said that he had an idea that I wasn't allowed to know so I pouted and pleaded and he wouldn't tell me. I huffed and he got all sweet and kissed me.
He snaked his arms around my thin waist and up my back. I traced my arms up his chest and then around his neck as he grazed my bottom lip asking for the entrance I always granted. We were interrupted by amber.
" FABINA SNOGGING!" this caused us to blush and pull away as per usual as she turned to Alfie and walked over to him, sitting on the love seat next to him as he snaked an arm around her waist.
And after all that HE STILL WOULDN'T TELL ME!
EDDIE POV
I lead Patricia out of the room in all that chaos and laughter, I doubt anyone noticed until they stopped laughing, which took quite a long time, we could hear them from mick, Fabian and i's room.
I opened the door and we both stopped laughing suddenly. We looked into each other's eyes for a few seconds and quickly crashed our lips together. They melted perfectly together.
Oh god I sound like such a sap now but I can't help it, the girl (Patricia) really gets me going... I now sound like Fabian in his sleep when he is mumbling and moaning Nina's name and how he loves her and never wants to let her go and all his lovey sighs and UUUGGGGHHHH!
Back to reality, Patricia's hands were snakeing up my chest under my shirt, she already knew I had a six pack, that was no problem, most of the girls, and guys for that matter, knew that I did.
Her fingers were gently tracing over the defined muscles while my hands were around her waist struggling to pull her shirt from her tight skirt. She pulled back for air and giggled at my frustration and untucked her shirt with ease.
'Thanks' I mumbled, a little bit embarrassed I couldn't do it that quickly. She just firmly told me to shut up and fiercely pressed her lips to mine again, I liked it that way.
Instead of snaking her hands up my shirt, she tangled them around my neck and into my hair, as she was gently tugging at it I let out a small moan and she pulled apart and smirked.
She gently pressed her lips to mine teasing me.
She then ferociously pulled me towards her and I began working at the buttons on her shirt. At the same time I gently grazed her bottom lip asking for the entrance she granted me.
She began working at my buttons and by the time she had my shirt off hers was only half done because of her crazy Goth style zips and buttons everywhere until I realised they were only for decoration and you just pull it over your head.
She giggled at my expression of annoyance and stupidity when I figured it out.
She pulled it over her head and traced her fingers over my six pack again this time without the shirt and kiss blinding her, she was enjoying the sight of it as much as how I felt so ripped.
She pushed my back onto my bed for dominance just as her phone started ringing, the first time she declined it, the second time she looked at it and I told her to decline it but she didn't.
'decline it again' I said between deep breaths, trying to catch up.' I can't, it's piper, she doesn't call me unless it's an emergency or she hasn't talked to me in ages. Anyway she doesn't get much time to call at her fancy music school.'
she said berating normally, how does she do that, I swear she never runs out of breath.' it's okay then, go, talk to her' I said with clear disappointment in my voice.
'Love you slime ball' she said walking out of my room with her phone to her ear and her shirt in her hand.
Okay guys thats it from me now, will update later. I hope that I am getting better at refining and writing the story.
