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The cold roof kept him awake all night never letting him sleep for the fear that he will never again see day light even though he knows it will never happen especially in the summer but the roof itself was just to uncomfortable to even try and then their was the unbearable moans from those who are dead but walk with the living. He looks over the edge and does something utterly stupid he jumps into the window of the apartment under him and he bust the window open, that's when he hears them sprinting up the steps for his flesh his blood. He hides untill he sees a baseball bat and a small fire ax in the cupboard to his far right in the room. He stares at the door untill zombies flood the room looking for the noise it was like watching a mosh pit first it was a dozen pushing past eachother then 2 dozen and now the room is filled he had five round in his pistol he takes the baseball bat in his hand and fires the gun into the fire hydrant but it didn't explode but the dumb zombies where worried about the smoke comming out of it and he pops a round into two zombies heads with only a single shot he snickers and charges out of the room full forcse nocking down zombies in his path and he sees its only two stories down he takes a chance and jumps over the eadge his fall is broken by three zombies but he hurt his back but it only stings he is pleased with himself though for grabbing the ax on his way out he fires his remaning rounds into the zombies above ... the psycho in his eyes lets out as he grabes the ax in one hand the knife in the other and throwes the ax in the skull of a zombie, he is drooling over the excitment his last stand. He grabs another knife out of it's holster and he only has 4 knives left including the ones in his hands and he jumps into the crowed of zombies stabing one after the other in the head and killing them how he wishes them to die untill one bites his arm, and he drops his knife but he shoves his other knife in its head and tears his head straight off. Aaron laughs histerically, untill he is going to kill a zombie and a bullet goes strigh through its head and he ducks and laughs as he begins running under the zombies cutting off thier legs as he rushes under them with his knives soon he heard another shot go off untill he was out of the crowed he looked up and saw something he just couldn't believe his best friend and in fact a best friend with a dragunov svd sniper then a teenager who was a year older then me ... Ivan the mexican jumps out of a armored truck he yells my name
Ivan: yo bro come on hurry the fuck up
Orlando: get-tha-fuck-over-here
Aaron runs full speed to the truck and jumps on the back with Lando (Orlando if u leave off the o and r )and they leave without another kill.
Brittany crashes into Jordans room and throws him off his bed and does the same to Mekile and Jared yelling at them to get the fuck outa bed and go get Aaron and just when they are about to leave zombies crash into the window and the front doors of the mansion and they all get prepared for a fight but then suddently the zombies are shot down all at the same time when a bounch of people walk in slowly the men look around and Aaron pushes his way through the men and is jumped on by Brittany Kayla Joicelin Jared Jordan Victoria the little girl sera Mekile and Dante. Brittany looks at Aaron and says
Brittany: WTF HAPPIND?
Aaron slowly begins telling his fight off the roof and then he says he was saved and since they only had a 1 story house to live in he said they could live here and he pointed to his 2 best friends Orlando and Ivan then to Harley, Darbo, Ricardo, Pringle, Ronny, Rontavious, and Tally but Brittany only cared for Aaron and soon began tending to his wonds and while they did that night they all had a GREAT meal that night especially Aaron
later that night in Aarons bedroom
Aaron was sleeping well hoping his wounds would heal when his door creaked open. He pulls himself up from the covers and Brittany is standing their her shirt is to big and one sleave is hanging off her sholder and she is only wearing a thong he look at her and imeadently get a hard on
Aaron: hey Brit whats up
Brittany: oh i think u know
She slowly crawls over his covers and kisses him deeply he wraps his arms around her. She knew he slept naked and rubs his cock through the covers making his cock hurt a little she knew what she was doing and didn't care he rubbed her back and began playing with her ass and she slowly took off her shirt revealing her huge tits at him she had a freckle on her boob which he loved so much, he sucked her tits hard making her moan underneath her breath. He loved her moan she sounded so hot she took off her thong and then proceeded to take off his covers and rub his dick slowly she slowly kisses down his chest and abs untill reaches his cock. She kisses the head of his cock and licks all around it and puts it in her mouth taking in the head of his thick cock and she rubs his and and he puts a hand on her head and makes her deep throat him * sucking on his cock hard he loves it and makes her go faster as he looks down her body to her ass and smacks her ass making her moan and she stops sucking his cock to make out with him she slides her tongue over his and he slides a finger inside of her slowly pulling it in and out while she holds onto him loving it and he slides in another finger and begins to be evil and pins her on the bed and fingers her fast and hard making her moan his names while she squirmed and clawed his back he sucks hard on her tits leaving hicky marks on her tits and he slides in a third finger making her moans even louder but he makes out with her to keep her silent and keeps fingering her untill she almost orgasms and then he stops and pulls outa her and she moves up his body untill her pussy is in his face then he grabes her ass and pushes her pussy onto his face destroying her insides with his tongue making her grind his tongue and she orgasms quickly. Wanting more she turns around and shoves his cock in her mouth while he eats more of her pussy and she keeps sucking harder and he eats more and more untill she orgasms again and he cums down her throught and she is getting up off him and kisses him good night but he stopes her by the thigh pushing two fingers in her and brings her back to his bed and he pins her to the bed making out with her
Aaron: your not teasing me this time babe
She can only giggle as he slowly puts his cock inside her and she bites his lip softly and holds onto him only saying his name and oh yes and he slowly begins to fuck her making her cherry pop and blood gets onto his bed from her pussy and she moans more and he fucks her harder making her claw his back again making his back bleed a little he loved it his cock was so wet and he loved it making her pussy feel great and he picks her up and puts her on the wall holding her up and her fucks her more and more and then her body print is begging to be fucked into the wall until she is screaming in a moan and he's sucking her tits so hard they are raw and tender.
Aaron: oh shit babe im gonna cum where do you want it
Brittany: oh shit daddy cum inside me and all over my pussy make me dripping wet with your cum
He listened and made one last thrust and came deep inside her and pulled out and cummed all over her pussy and stomach. he let her down on his bed and she sucked the little bit of cum from his cock and smiled slowly picking up the cum with the tip of her finger and drinking it. He smiled and took her in his arms picking her up and taking her to the shower room and laying her on the concreat and tile florring turning on the water and pitting her and him inside he slowly washed her body and sucked her tits untill she bit her lip untill
Brittany: fuck me again daddy
He grinned and shoved his cock back inside her making her moan with lust and then made out with her flicking their tongues together and making her orgasm so much that he had to pre cum inside of her and she layed him down then rode his cock fast loving the feeling of her super tight virgin pussy making him moan and smacked and played with her ass. She loved it and scrached his chest untill it bleed on her fingers and he picked her up and fucked her in the air making her moan more
Brittany: i want you to cum all over my face daddy
This made him grin and pulled out of her and laid down and she began to suck his cock clean and dry of everything deepthroating him fast untill he came inside her mouth and she pulled out and he came all over her face she loved it and licked and washed all the sticky hot cum off her face and they got out the shower and headed to their seperate rooms. Aaron would get great sleep tonight