Thank you :D for the fallow and favorite, I did not expect that. So as promised I will upload a second chapter. If there is anything that you want to suggest including OC's I will read and most likely respond to you or respond to the comment in my notes before or after the story. Review and constructive criticism is allowed and encouraged.

Chapter 2: Gems?

(Lapis's prov)

(why wont he let go of me, I don't even know him. Is he doing this out of kindness?) Her thoughts were put to a halt there as she fell to the sand. Upon looking up she saw that Shadow had been picked up by the chest by Jasper, and had tossed her the ground.

(Shadow's prov)

"Ruuun ... ahhhhaa" Shadow screams out in pain. The orange woman had squeezed his chest and blood started to leak out of his mouth. He couldn't breath anymore, he was attempting to gasp for air but couldn't.

(Jasper/The orange woman's)

"Awww, whats wrong cant breath? Foolish human you'll need to do much better to slow me down.",Jasper laughingly asks, "Cant let you die yet. Lets see, lets let go of the chest and go the arms.". and so she did and started to bend them backwards until "CRACK".

(Shadow's prov)

(My arms, she broke them) He stopped thinking when he felt the pain. "AAAAAHHHHHHH -cough- AHH AHHHHHH AAAHHHHH, -choking- RUN! Plea- CRACK. AHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH" Shadow screeches as loud as possible with tears running down his face,as the orange woman brakes his legs, "don't -cough- make my pain for nothing, RUN." he let out just as the orange woman brakes his back and throws him.

(Steven's prov)

" Garnet why are we not helping, I mean we could stop this all now" Steven argues ageist garnet. (this is happening on my 16th birthday when I invited someone and now he's getting beaten senselessly)

"Okay now, go she let him go." Garnet replied and the gems ran to jasper but she made hast to the warp portal to escape and makes it.

(Shadow's prov)

(whats happening I cant move, I'm so cold, and everything is getting darker. Crying? is that the blue girl? Wait why did I even help her?) Shadow's thoughts slowly fade as his eyes close and darkness is complete. Until a warm light wakes him. He opens his eyes and asks " Wait what happened? Or better yet who are you?" only for Pearl, Garnet, and Amethyst to answer with "we are the Crystal gems."

Okay sorry for the sort chapter I know I said I would make them longer and I will, but to day my scoliosis really bothered me and i still had to do school, Plus I only had about 2 hours to write this.. I Know this sound like an excuse but I promise that I will upload one tomorrow and it will be around 800 to 1000 words. Most likely/ I hope.