REDONE
Ch.2 ANGEL WINGS
"RATHHH!!!!! GIVE THAT BACK!!!" Thatz screamed. Rath, meanwhile, was hanging upside down on a birch branch (with his shirt tucked in of course), singing who-knows-what with Thatz's gold for sword practice. He gave a war cry and scattered Thatz's precious treasure. "NOOO!!!" Thatz panicked, trying to catch as many gold pieces as he could.
Rath jumped off the birch, (very dizzy) and walked toward Rune trying to find something else to cut with. Rune looked up, jumped back and covered his belongings with his body. (He did this very fast).
"Rune...Don't you trust me?" Rath said with his puppy innocent face A sweatdrop occupied the space next to Rune's head. "Of course I don't." he replied, eyeing Rath's sword which was too close for comfort. Rath smiled. "That's cool!! Then I can cut something with my sword!!" Rath said in his sing-song voice. Rune shrank back. "Don't YOU DARE!!!" He screamed.
Rath paid no attention and swung the sword. Rune screamed bloody murder and scrambled out of the way. Instead of slicing Rune's head off, Rath's sword came into contact with Rune's book (Meditation for Dummies) and hacked it into itty bitty pieces. Rune stood up, a blood vessel bulging.
He grabbed his sword and fought with Rath who became freaked out by the demented elf's actions. Thatz soon joined the fight (only because Rath stepped on his carefully gathered gold pieces ruining Thatz's hard work). The clashes and clanging of swords rang throughout the camp.
Kiko gasped. WHAT IN THE DUSIS IS GOING ON??? MAN!!! MY HEART'S GONNA EXPLODE!!! HELP!!! AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Kiko fell off her cot, landing on the cold stone floor. She let out a blood-curdling scream, clutching her heart.
Kharl, meanwhile heard the scream, put down his juicebox and hurried toward the dungeon with Garfakcey running after him. Kharl undid the twenty locks and opened the door.
Black fog covered the whole room. Garfakcey waved off the smoke to reveal Kiko in a black tunic. Her eyes were a dark blood red color and two black angel wings soared touching the dungeon walls wingtip to wingtip. Kharl paused, surveying his creation complete. "Hello, Ms.Replica..." He smiled yet again in his creepy way. Kiko's eyes narrowed. "What do you want...master?"