What's up? I've fixed some of the first chapter for proper grammar and proofreading reasons. I've also added some features: POVs and disclaimers. Also, please review! I need the critique!
Until next time,
Emienne xx
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN KICKIN' IT. I ONLY OWN THE OCs.
Kat's POV
The bell rang for Maths to end, and for break to start. Finally, this class was the most boring one during Middle School, and it's never ever going to be. Since when was Maths interesting anyway? Exactly. I got my butt of my seat, pushed my chair in, grabbed my stuff of the table and flew past the classroom door. I walked to my locker, unaware of my surroundings. I was clearly not watching where I was going, because I bumped into someone. I backed off, then I saw the person I bumped. She was tall, but she looked my age. She had long, straight blonde hair tied up into a fishtail braid. She had blue eyes. She wore a strapless short, a really short skirt and a pair of 6 inch high heels. She looked like she was a popular snotty girl that's pretty dumb, no offense.
"Do I not hear an apology? You just bumped into me, and all you do is not say a word?" She complained. Signature popular girl voice. Why now, why?
"Who are you to say that?" I asked in rhetorical question.
"Amanda Miller. Now the most popular girl in our grade, almost everyone knows me." She replied, obviously not knowing what a rhetorical question is. I looked around to see some guys from my grade literally drooling over her. What was up with those people? "You look so ugly. If you wanna look hot like me, you should totally put some make-up on." Then she laughed. Typical rich, snooty and popular wannabe who wants to rule the school.
"Okay," I replied, rolling my eyes. Then she strutted away. Thanks a lot, Miller.
I walked away, now being more careful of my surroundings. That's when I realized how creepy this got. The story of Kim's first day at Seaford High, of Donna and Kim's first meeting. It was getting creepier and creepier. I wonder if Miller is Tobin's daughter? I don't know.
Once I approached my locker, opened it and put my stuff in, I grabbed my backpack. I opened it, and I found a picture of me with all my 'Warrior Cousins', we all took during the summer. I stuck the picture on my locker door, put my backpack in my locker, closed it and locked it. Which reminded me, I had to meet them all the cafeteria for some 'gathering'. I ran all the way to the cafeteria doors. When I reached there, I saw Sam casually walking there. I decided to stop and talk.
"Looks like you're coming along Kat to the Gathering." Sam figured.
"They really want something from us." I predicted. I can only wonder, right. I opened the cafeteria doors, knowing how Sam won't open it considering how lazy he was.
"Like what?" He asked, before we saw Liz and the other 'Cousins' gathering around a table. Liz was lounging around, looking around places, Cornelius, Milton and Julie's son who is in senior year, was on a laptop and Emily and Jayden, Eddie's daughter and Jerry's daughter respectively, were gossiping as usual. They were 16 and they were juniors. You could tell they were BFF's. Sam and I picked seats next to Liz.
"I just made a new enemy. Yay." I told Liz sarcastically, then I shuddered. "Amanda Miller. Seems like the Donna Tobin from the story of her and mum's first meeting. She really needs her head checked. Heck, she even looks like Donna Tobin.
"That's creepy." Liz reacted. "Spill."
"So I was walking down a hallway and I just bumped into her. I backed off and she's like all like why didn't you apologize and you should get straight hair on me." I told her.
"That really is creepy. It really sounds like the Donna and Kim story, I have to agree." Liz agreed with me. Thankfully she agrees with me in like everything. "Signing up for pep squad?"
"Totally!" I answered. I don't want to become a snobby cheerleader, I'm just there for the acrobatics. Which I'm good at.
"Guys, I'm loading it up." Cornelius stated clearly.
"What's up with Neil?" Sam asked.
"He's loading up some security camera footage from 24 years ago. He hacked into the security system and looked at some of the archives. I thought it might concern you and Kat." Emily answered. She's smarter than Jayden, she got A- and B+'s and Jayden's average grade was a D-. Jayden certainly inherited her dad when it came to grades.
"100% loaded up. Starting from now." Cornelius interrupted everyone's conversations. Everyone gathered around his computer screen, and he clicked something to play the footage.
Jack walked up to the lunch lady, Marge on his first day. He was a little hungry.
"Hi, I'm new. What would you recommend?" he asked.
"Not any of this stuff, I don't know what half of it is!" She exclaimed in answer. Kim, meanwhile, was tossing an apple. She tossed it out of reach, and because of his fast reflexes due to training by his grandfather, Jack was able to turn around and caught the apple. He tossed it with his foot to his hand.
I was personally shocked at how young they looked. I looked so much like mum looked like in the video; the only thing that could tell us apart was a mole on the side of my face. I knew the whole story, it's just that it was so different actually watching how it happened.
"Okay, that was almost cool. I'm Kim." Kim introduced herself.
"I'm Jack, I'm new." Jack replied. They stared into each other's eyes for a moment.
"Um, can I have my apple back?" Kim asked. It took a second for Jack to process it before he replied.
"Oh, sorry. I guess I'll see you around Kim." He answered.
"Maybe you will." Kim replied and bit her lip. She turned around to proceed to the table where she was sitting. Jack picked his food cautiously when she left.
Cornelius fast forwarded the footage to a part where dad was facing a Black Dragon he told us in his stories. His name was Frank.
"You've got a problem or something?" He asked, and then did a whole bunch of karate moves.
"I didn't come here to fight man." Jack replied, and then casually walked away.
"Wah-jaa!" Frank shouted and tried to punch Jack. Luckily for Jack, he caught Frank's fist before he could do any damage.
"You probably shouldn't have done that." Jack told Frank, before he twisted his arm and kicked him away. Soon, a fight ensued with the other Black Dragons. He dodged and kicked, and then grabbed a chair. Knowing a strategy that would get the better of one of the Black Dragons, he kicked it in front of one. Jack positioned himself in a fighting stance while that Black Dragon jumped in front of it. The Black Dragon charged forward, but Jack kicked him into the chair, making the chair fall, and the Black Dragon fell with it. He continued fighting and fighting, and jumped on top of Kim's table. Another Black Dragon charged to slide on the table and knock Jack out, but Jack simply jumped while he crashed on the other side of the table on the floor. Kim waved at Jack, and he turned around and smiled back, then flipped sideways from the table, and got back on his feet. He fought yet another Black Dragon. He twisted his arm, and then dunked his head into a bowl of chocolate pudding.
"Enjoy your pudding!" Jack taunted him. He raised the Black Dragon's face out of the bowl, but Jack was still in control of the Black Dragon. Jack used the Black Dragon to protect himself from Frank. He kicked Frank using the Black Dragon's left leg, prepared him for takeoff, and threw him into the recycling bin. Jack then kicked up a plate of meatballs, and then kicked them into Frank's face. Two of them hit his eyes, and one landed in his mouth. Frank, scared, ran away. After looking around, Jack ran away too, knowing how much trouble he could get in.
"Thanks Cornelius! Anyone agree that was better than a cheesy romantic movie?" I asked.
"Totally!" Jayden replied.
"100%." Emily spoke.
"One trillion times better." Liz answered.
This was a better break than I thought. At least it wasn't a trying disaster, like I thought it would be.
