Okay I am sorry for publishing the same thing twice I am still new at this so you can not blam me and anyway I do not own anything except the idea some of the ideas belong to hollyleaf15 and I hope you enjoy it.
Ed woke up sometime later after he had been through the portal. When he woke up it was dark outside there where buildings and a lot of bright color full lights (he is in Travers town). Ed got up off the ground he was laying on. "Where am I and why couldn't I use my alchemy plus it felt like the black hand sucked out all of my strength and my ability to use alchemy" said ed. He started to walk around to see where he was and suddenly a bunch of heartless appeared with transmutation
Ed did not know if the heartless where friendly or not until one of the heartless jumped at him "i do not know what you guys are but what I do know is that you guys are not good " said ed and luckily he had his strength and his ability to use alchemy back. Ed put his hands together and his automail arm turned in to a knife. He hit the heartless in the transmutation circles and the heartless disappeared. Pretty soon all the heartless disappeared and Ed was very tiered from running around so he sat down to take a little break. But after ed took a little break a clocked figure came out of no wear and more heartless with transmutation circles on their stomaches appeared as well.
Ed got rid of the heartless again and the clocked figure waited untill ed got rid of all the heartless and then ran straight at ed with that black key blade that turned people in both a heartless and a nobody. But before they fought the figure waited untill ed transmuted a spear/sword and then they began to fight. After a little while of fighting the figure (i am not going to say clocked figure because you probably already know that by now and i can not spell that word very well) hit the spear/sword out of ed's hands and delivered a powerful blow to knock ed to the ground. then the figure hit/touched/pointed their key blade at ed's heart and ed disappeared to somewhere. Ed's heart floated up some where and the darkness in ed's heart made a heartless. But the heartless formed around the heart and then it opened its eyes.
meanwhile back with ed
Xemnes found ed and accepted him into the organization and the word Edward appeared and started to spin around ed. Xemnes then drew an X and putted it in the spinning letters they stopped and the new word said...
Well that is all you get for this chapter/page but I still need help with ed's name and his little description thingy for the name tell me which name do you like the best? Warddex or Dexward ? Oh and tell me if I should change/add/put anything in this chapter/page or the next chapter/page. Any way I hoped you enjoyed it and some of the ideas belong to hollyleaf15 who is awesome and you should go check her out. Oh and by the way ed's element thing will be metal and before he gets a key blade he will use his alchemy the abilities he has is alchemy, physical attacks, and transmuted weapons also the ability to use a key blade will be added and tell me when you want me to give him a key blade.