Teeloganroryflan – thank you for your kind review on my beginning chapter xx
So the first chapter wasn't much really it was just getting it started its hopefully (if all goes to plan) going to get better from here if your reading this then thank you xx
"Ethan she's waking up" Robyn told him
"Right thank you Robyn" – Ethan said smiling
Ethan looked down at the women
The women quickly snapped open her eyes and looked around
"Hello my names Robyn do you know where you are" – Robyn asked
"Hospital, I remember a split second but then it went all dark"– she said
"Hello, I'm Ethan I'm a doctor" Ethan told her "Can you tell me your name "
"Kate"- she replied
Ethan's mind went straight to Kate at the café he would love to see her again he loved that moment with Cal and his mom and… Ethan cut himself off he had to forget it
"Ok Kate , well you collapsed its nothing to worry about but we need to see what's been happening and why that happened." Ethan said
"There's no need doctor" – she said
"It's these tablets I've got. I have a stress related condition and I have to take these tablets for a bit until it gets better but tablets don't like my body so I sometimes collapse because of them" – she said
"Ok well I may have a solution can I see your tablets"- Ethan said
She gave him the tablets
"Ok well I can get you some tablets that you put into a drink and they dissolve and you just drink the drink normally ,it can help a lot as your not taking the tablet all in one" – Ethan said
"Oh that would be great" – she smiled
"But I was wondering If I could have a look at this rash first it seems to be turning purple I guess" he said
"Oh em okay"- she said
Ethan started to have a look
"Have you been on holiday anywhere" – Robyn asked
I went to Australia for a month to work with animals – she said
"Oh that is so cool I wanted to be a vet but I love animals I would just probably take them all home so I went to nursing where I don't think I would take anyone home" Robyn laughed
"If that's the reason you a nurse then I'm kind of worried" – Ethan laughed
"Don't worry Dr Hardy I'm the least of your worries" Robyn laughed
"Ok so Kate I've done research and I can't find anything to do with the rash so I'll go collect your meds and your free to go "Ethan told her
"So what were you doing in the hospital then" – Robyn asked
"Oh my mom is on a ward somewhere but I don't know where to go so I was going to ask" Kate replied
"Ok well once your discharged ill happily show you the way "Robyn said
"Ok great thank you" – she said
I'll be right back – Robyn said
Ethan had the discharge form ready and the tablets to give to her.
He opened the curtain expecting to see her there but instead she was fitting
"Cal! Robyn!" - He shouted
They both ran over in order to assist
"What happened" – Cal said
"I don't know I was going to discharge her but she was fitting " Ethan replied
Soon the fitting stopped
"She's lost output"- Cal said –"we need to shock her now"
Ethan start chest compressions
"Ok all clear" – Cal said
"Clear" – Robyn and Ethan said together
"Clear, shocking" Cal warned
As the electric force went through Kates body nothing changed
They repeated the process 6 times but still nothing
Ethan was still doing chest compressions
"Ethan stop!" – Cal said
Ethan carried on not listening
"Ethan"– Robyn said
"Ethan I said stop!" – Cal shouted
"But how she was fine" – Ethan said shouting
"I know mate just stop"- cal said
Soon he stopped
Time of death 15:23 – Robyn said
So that was a longer chapter. I felt bad killing kate off but it had to happen for the story, sorry everyone you will understand later. I know these are on the same day but I couldn't leave the first there it had no sense to what the story is
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