Bloody Valentine
Chapter: 2
A/N: Well, I realized I forgot Deidara's 'un' habit too late, which is one of the things that make him SO sexy. SO this chapter will have it. Maybe not every sentence, but there I think necessary.
I actually kinda like CHouji, he's really sweet and everyone knows he likes Ino. I hope you don't mind Deidara's "I HATE CHOUJI!" In this fanfic Sorry Chouji fans, but in this fic, Chouji doesn't come out a winner.
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Summary: [AU [Dei/Ino/Chou Jealousy. A sign of love and affection, a motivator, a killer. Yet for two men who love the same woman, it's a battle. Hands bloody, rain falling, car lights flashing, a telephone rings - the battle over... Who shall emerge victorious?
Disclaimer: Naruto is own and copyrighted by Kishimoto. The song is Owned by Good Charlotte.
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Sasukeidiot: Thanks Deidara was a bit out of character though, I forgot his "un" habit, but other then that, yes I like everyone in character for the most part.
sammy08: I'm really glad you enjoyed it I hope you like this chapter as well.
Amarantis: Thank you I knew when I heard the song on my Ipod that I wanted it to be Ino/Dei/ Chou tribute. And I wanted it o be a chapter story if a lot of people liked it. And I like making song fics into chapter stories, it's fun for me.
Kittinz: Yes... lol, it was a bit creepy, but what can you expect from the bang master Deidara and his obsession with Ino?
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Chapter 1:
She nodded and wiped her eyes. "Yes... You're probably the only person that I can trust right now." She said, smiling at me slightly.
I smiled back at her and then kissed her forehead and then sighed and started the car and drove towards the coroner's office. When we arrived I held her close to me. I knew the condition of his body, but I didn't care. She was mine.
I held her close as they showed it to her on a t.v. screen. He was too beat up and bloody for her to see his body. She fell to her knees and then held onto me, crying hysterically. I rubbed her back and closed my eyes. I felt bad, in a way, but she was mine now, and that's all I wanted.
The best part was. No one would ever find his heart. I ripped it out. That's how I killed him after I stabbed his neck and ripped out his troat. Normally, bombs were my style, but this was so much easier. I liked knives now. An interesting way to put things.
How did I kill him you ask? Well that was an easy one...
He dropped Ino off outside her house and drove home. I followed him in my car and then followed him into his building. He didn't have a doorman so it was simple. I hid in the shadows as he walked. I found which apartment was his and then went outside, climbed up the fire escape to the tenth floor, and then I opened his window and went inside. And stood over him, I moved th knife. His eyes opened suddenly and filled with fear. He begged and pleaded me not to kill him, but I knew.
I knew I had to do it. I knew it because I'm so in love with you.
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"I'm glad you trust me, un." I told her as I kissed her cheek. "I'll help you through this Ino.. I know how it feels to loose someone close to you." I told her, holding her hands in mine. One of my hands licked her hand and then I smiled. To me, that was the best display of my affection, not that she knew that. I loved her.
She was my perfection, my everything, my beautiful angel. Her long blonde hair was messy and she seemed so upset. But it would pass right? She'd love me in no time flat. I figured I'd give her a week to love me again. Just a week, that was all she needed. I'd postpone my hard-core advanced seven days and no more. I knew she wouldn't need anymore, not with me around her.
Ino's sapphire eyes looked into my cerulean ones and I went weak again. She was so breath taking when she looked at you like she was. So sweetly, so innocently, with such love and caring, something only Ino had. These astonishing sapphire eyes were still full of tears as she continued to mourn the death or her fallen lover.
I smiled at her and took her hand. Her make up was running down her face, her hair was a mess, down on her back, an elastic pulled into a messy bun in less then 30 seconds, her face was red and puffy, her eyes were also red from crying, and she looked like she was dying on the inside. She wiped her eyes and her nose and then looked up at him, holding him close to her, trying to stop the pain in her heart that she had been feeling since the police called her two hours before. Her sweat pants were stained in the coffee she had been drinking and dropped on herself when she found out the news.
I just smiled down at her and kissed her cheek. "Ino you look so beautiful..." I told her as I wrapped my arms around her back. I meant every word I had said to her, and I always did. Nothing could make me think any less of her. I killed Chouji for her and I'd do it again. In a heart beat, without a second thought. If anyone else even so much as tried to touch her, I would 'take care' of them real quick.
Ino looked up at me and smiled. "Deidara, can you please bring me home?" She asked, taking my hands back into hers. "It would mean a lot to me." She said, trying to smile for me. She sighed and then closed her eyes.
I walked outside with her, leaving the police around them looking slightly suspicious. I brought her out to the car and opened her door, watched her get in and then closed it. I walked around the convertible and then got into the car. The top was up, of course. It was raining harder then before. What was the big deal? I killed him, why was the sky mourning his death along side Ino? Oh well, doesn't matter now!
I drove her towards her house silently. I knew she wasn't going to be able to cook or anything and she was already thin enough, I wanted her to eat something. "Ino.. Do you want me to buy you somethign to eat? I mean I know it's not something you want to do, bu you need to eat something." I told her out of concern. Not that she was anorexic or anything, but I knew she could forget to eat when she was upset, and they told her pretty quickly. A neighbor had called th police, I had just barely made it out in time. I smirked to myself. But I was smarter then her, I was smarter then any other man. Ino was mine, and it was a great crime...
.Flashback.
"No please..." He begged putting his hands up. He didn't know me. But I knew him. Oh yes, I knew him. I knew his girlfriend. I loved her... I was doing this for her.
"I'll give you anything you want!" he pleaded, not getting up from his bed. "Anything... Just please!" he sniveled. "Don't kill me!" He said, putting his hands together as if praying.
"What I want you can never give." I told him as I raised the blade and drove it down into his chest.
He screamed out as the knife passed over his chest. I smirked and then cut his throat open, blood spraying on my face like a warm shower. He reached up and grabbed my head, pulling some of my golden hair. He punched me away and tried to get to the phone.
I hated knives. No style, no artistic capabilities, but hey, it was a weapon I could use to advert capture and discovery.
He couldn't scream now, his throat was spilling blood all over himself, his hand was on it, trying to cover it. He picked up the phone to find a dead line. I'm not stupid... I had already cut the line to make things easier. I couldn't help but smile as I ran towards him again. Perhaps a knife did have some style, but not too much, right? I laughed and stabbed him in the fat stomach that made him so hideous and unfit for my dearest Ino. No woman deserved a man as fat as this one.
He grabbed a lamp and I bit my tongue as he hit me in the head. He fell back and then stabbed him in the chest once more. He screamed again. What a sissy.. I pushed him into his bed and then started to stab him over and over again, letting the blood spray over me.
I heard sirens suddenly and I knew his screaming had woken up the feeble old woman next door. Ok fine... I admit it. I stalked him for a week or so before I killed him. I had gotten to know his neighbors to know what I was dealing with. I wanted to now everything. I mean sure, I didn't know which apartment he lived him, but I knew the building; and that was good enough, until tonight. I should have kept him quieter. I cursed and jumped down the fire escape where I came in. It was in the back fo the building and they were in the front.
I just escaped as they came around the other way. I was using a rented car. I didn't want them tracing his blood into my car. I was wearing black leather gloves as I drove to eliminate finger prints. I wasn't stupid and this wasn't the first time I had committed a crime. It was the first time I killed someone. Well.. The first time I stalked someone to murder them...
I yawned as I drove and got back to my apartment. I washed out the car, getting rid of the blood in the driveway I had. I was prepared. I had bleach to wash out the black seat. I had ever bought a cover for the seat to use for this night. I pulled it off and brought it inside. I got the knife and ran upstairs with the bleach and knife. I had all the knives in the sink and threw the other on it and filled the sink up with bleach to wash it. If they did catch me, they'll never know which knife I used.
I smirked to myself and started to strip as I ran towards the bathroom...
.End Flashback.
"Ino?" I asked, trying to get her attention again. She was staring out the window, not paying any attention to me anymore. "Migoto?" I asked, my nickname for her. And she was so much more then that. Migoto meant splendid, stunning, beautiful. She was so much more than beautiful. She was my angel.
Ino looked over at me and smiled. "You're really sweet, but I don't think I look beautiful right now." She said, pulling down the visor that was over the passenger seat and looked in the mirror at her face. "Do you have a tissue?" She asked.
I knew she didn't hear my question about her eating, so I just sighed and took out a tissue. I knew she'd need one. Right now, I was driving my car. My beautiful red car. It was just like my art. Red, the color of blood, and the color of the fleeting moment before the explosion happened.
She took it and started to wipe off the eyeliner and mascara that had run down her face. She had been up late that night trying to finish a term paper and didn't get to take off her make up from her classes that day. I knew her routine, and I knew all about her classes. I went to the same collage. She was a freshman, and I was going to be a senior, but I had failed English, so I needed to take a few classes to become a senior. My English professor had been the first to go...
I looked over at her and repeated my inquisition, "Ino, are you hungry? I want you to eat something, I know how you can forget to eat when your stressed."
She smiled and then nodded. "Yeah... as sick as I feel I think food would help me a bit."
I nodded and looked towards a nice take out place. I knew she didn't want to go in looking like she did. I knew her favorite food; mini tomatoes. He had already ordered the food earlier and he knew it would be ready by now. He got her a caesar salad with extra cherry tomatoes. He got himself a chicken club with fries. He loved fries. He smirked and went inside. He paid for it and walked outside. He got a bag of cherry tomatoes from the kitchen and then walked over to her and got into the car.
He handed her the tomatoes and then smiled. "You need some comfort food." He said, smiling at her.
Ino smiled and started to eat them. "How did you know I liked tomatoes?" She asked, glad he did. She really needed some.
Deidara laughed. "You told me when we talked on the phone a few nights ago, remember?" he asked, smiling at her.
Ino nodded. "Oh yeah. Sorry." She said, smiling. She remembered slightly, but they had talked until 1 am and they both had class the next morning. They talked about anything and everything, and she loved that she could say anything to him.
We got back to her place and I followed her upstairs. We sat down in the living room, the t.v. off. We talked as we ate and I shared my fries with her. She was the only one I would share my fries with. They where my favorite food. And only the woman I loved could get some. Only her...
We talked for hours on end and I finally got the chance to do something I always wanted. I was holding her, laying down on the couch, my arms around her waist. I yawned and slowly started to drift off to sleep.
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I woke up the next morning, to a very loud knocking on the door. He groaned and wiped his face. He got up, careful not to wake up Ino. He unlocked the door and then pulled it open. He saw a pink blur and then felt something hug him. "Um..." he said, unsure of how to reach.
Sakura let him go and backed up. "You!?" She yelled. "What the hell are you doing here?!"
Deidara raised an eyebrow. "Comforting Ino, what the hell are you doing here?!"
"I came to see her! Chouji's dead!"
"No shit pinky, she called me last night. I came over to comfort her because she couldn't call you." I told her in annoyance. She was ruining my plans.
Ino groaned from the couch and woke up. She looked over at me and smiled.
"Ino are you ok, un?" I asked, smiling at her. "Please say yes?" I asked, pleadingly.
Ino nodded and walked over to Sakura and I, wiping her own eyes. "Sakura?" She asked, smiling at her and then hugging her. She burst into tears once in the arms of her best friend and went into hysterical crying. "Chou- Chouji!" She said, pained. "He- He's dead!" She cried, her eyes watering more and more, her sapphire eyes starting to become puffy again.
I sighed and backed up away from the two fo them. This was no longer my place, not that she had Sakura she had forgotten about me. Why? Why was she so blind that she didn't see me? She saw my just fine last night, and I loved that in her.
Sakura rubbed her back and smiled. "I know Ino, I know... it was on the news this morning... I had my phone off, I didn't mean not to call you. I'm so sorry..."
Ino looked up at her and smiled. "Thank you Sakura, but why was it off? You're phone is always on..."
Sakura bit her lip. She couldn't tell Ino what happened the night before.
.Flashback.
"Um.. Sasuke?" Sakura asked, biting her cheek. "I um... Need to go home soon." She said, knowing she didn't want to stay over night at his house, nor did he want her to, or at least in her eyes.
SAsuke shrugged. "You can stay the night, I could careless. We have the same first class anyway. I just need you to help me out with this, ok? I suck at memorization, and you're really good at it, just help me." He said, smiling at her. "I'll buy us dinner if you stay." he said, smirking. "Please?"
Sakura blushed and then nodded. "Fine... I'll help you." she said, taking out footnotes for the Shakespearian play they where learning; Romeo and Juliet.
He ordered the food and then walked back over to her and smiled. He ordered pizza and chicken. He got tomatoes on the pizza and then sat beside and kissed her forehead.
She started to teach him until Sasuke put his head down on the book. "Sakura I give up.." He said, sighing. "I really do. I will never get this." he told her. "We have a final o it tomorrow... I don't understand Shakespeare..."
Sakura leaned closer to him. "Sasuke..." She said, putting her and on his back.
Sasuke looked up at her and then kissed her suddenly. Sakura's eyes widened and she made a small noise. She wrapped her arms around him and then kissed him again.
He pushed her down on the bed and kept kissing her.
.End Flashback.
Sakura bit her lip. What could she say to Ino now? She didn't tell her and she didn't want to. She smiled and then remembered what it said on they news. "Oh my god! Ino!" She said, grabbing her arms.
"The news said that the police know who killed Chouji..." She told her, watching Ino's eyes light up.
"Who was it?!" Ino demanded.
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A/n: Haha! A cliff hanger. I love this story. It's so fun to write and the character's personalities just come so naturally, I love it! Hope you enjoyed it! Don't forget to Review!