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XxJeterxX- I'm glad you liked, or loved my story. I appreciate that you're reading it, thanks. Please continue reviewing. Please continue reviewing - BR
Raven- Thanks for the advice, really. But I started chapter 1 like that, because I want something to be interesting and surprising in the future. If you continue to read then you will understand what im talking about. Thanks for reviewing. Please continue reviewing – BR
Dumbdude- Like I said in the previous reply, I want to make a story web and then end it at a breaking point. Please understand. Oh and Cyborg not believing is just a conspiracy. Thanks for reviewing. Please continue reviewing – BR
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BB luffer- Please don't kill me, I beg you. And this is not a one shot it's a whole book I think. Well Rae won't be alone but in some part of the story she and BB are going to fight. Don't kill me for that either. Well if I say anything more ill just spoil it. Thanks for reviewing. Please continue reviewing – BR
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Elliot- You know what? Im quiet a BB and Rae fan my self. That is why I write stuff like this. My determination is music. Yep…that's right…music. Well im glad you liked the story. Thanks fore reviewing. Please continue reviewing – BR
RavenOnline- Yes my name is Anton. Im pleased to meet you too but right now your name is unknown to me so I can't call you anything except by your ID name. As a mater of fact I really like this story you are writing, I think it's called. "Tales of the Closet" I really like it and it's very interesting, please update it soon. Oh and thanks for reviewing. Please continue reviewing – BR
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Dust-in- Yes I do presume that Beast Boy will be evil for a long part of the story but the feelings for the goth wont let him down. And there is going to be a fight but of who will it include I can't say. Oh and I agree with you, I don't like Robin much either but for the sake of the fans I still have to do it. Thanks for reviewing. Please continue reviewing – BR
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THOSE WHO READ BUT DIDN'T REVIEW. - Well I don't mind you not reviewing but it does hurt my feelings knowing that you read the story and didn't review. Well so far I hope you're liking it…or maybe not. Well please continue reading and next time please review. - BR
Chapter 2. An Eye for an Eye
He was running through the city as fast as he can. He had to run away. He had to forget this city, his past life as a Titan, and most important, her. There for his love for her would eat away at him and cause great pain. After he ran from the tower he arrived at the Jump City train station.
He looked around at the stands and found his destination. He stepped inline and waited.
'So if im not a Titan…who could I be? Raven probably hates me for doing that to her, Robin and Cyborg probably want to kill me, and Starfire will join them after she wakes up. Man my life sucks! He thought to him self. After a short moment the line ended and he was standing in front of the ticket booth.
"Can I help you young man?" asked the over sized lady in the cabinet. Beast Boy looked up at her and smiled.
"Uhh…Yes one ticket to Neon City please" he replied getting out his wallet. The lady handed him the ticket and took the money.
"Thank you" replied Beast Boy and before he turned away the woman called out to him.
"Hey…boy come back here" she cried out. The line behind Beast Boy looked at him in suspicion. He approached the ticket booth and looked at the woman with anger.
"Can I have your autograph?" she asked sliding a paper and pen to him. Beast Boy gulped and took the two. The woman watched Beast Boy sign it and slide it back to her. She looked at him from the corner of her eye.
"I know who you are so don't try to hide it" she said chuckling a bit at Beast Boys expression.
"Please don't tell anyone" said Beast Boy in a low tone. The women nodded and begun serving other costumers. Beast Boy walked towards the benches and sat down. He sighed heavily with distress and looked at the ticket as if it was a big diamond in his hand.
"I can't go back" he said to him self. "I have to go away; I have to forget her and this city"
That moment the GA system came on.
'ALL TRAVLERS FOR NEON CITY, PLEASE BOARD THE TRAIN!' the GA system turned of afterwards.
"That's my flight" murmured Best Boy to him self. He picked up the back pack and headed for the train. The thought of 'Raven' was killing him inside. He had to get as far as he can. And Neon City was the place. (A/N: In this story Neon City is like Las Vegas, a shit load of lights and beautiful buildings that's why I made up Neon City.)
"May I see your ticket please?" asked the man in the door way of the train. Beast Boy gave the man his ticket and the man accepted it.
"Have a nice day" said the man and let Beast Boy in to the train. He looked at the ticket and read 'Room 34. Compartment 8'
"Well better start walking" he said to him self and headed in the direction of his room.
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"Ungh…Where am I?" asked Starfire as she sat up on her bed. She felt better from the previous day and so she ran out of her room and in to the lounge.
Once she ran in there it was all quiet except the video game making gun shooting sounds and Robin with Cyborg cheering for their successions in the game.
"Friends!" exclaimed Starfire. That moment Cyborg and Robin jumped up and looked at her frightened.
"Good evening Star" said Cyborg. Starfire approached the two and sat on the sofa.
"Where are our other friends?" she asked with a joyous smile playing on her lips. Robin and Cyborg looked at her putting on sad faces. Starfire didn't like the look of this.
"Friends where is Beast Boy and Raven?" she asked again. Robin walked up to Cyborg.
"I think we should tell her" he whispered. Cyborg looked at him with wide eyes.
"Hell no man, I think you can tell her your self" he replied and ran out the other door.
"Tell me what?" asked Starfire getting worried. Robin took her hand and they both sat down on the sofa.
"Star"
"Yes Robin, what is it you wish to tell me?"
"Beast Boy…passed away" he finished. That moment Starfire jumped to her feet and tears begun forming in her eyes.
"He's dead?" she asked.
"Yes" he lied. In a second her tears broke loose and she began to cry. Robin stood up of the sofa and embraced her in a tight hug.
"Its going to be alright Star, I promise" he said putting on an expression of worry.
"I wish to see his grave" said Starfire between sobs. Robin became pale from her words and he raised her head.
"Star, his whole body got loose and there was nothing we could of have done-"he was cut of by the sound of the doors opening. That moment the two Titans turned only to see and angry Raven in the door way.
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After a long walk through the train Beast Boy has found his compartment and claimed it. He slid the door open and went inside; closing the door after him he tossed the dark yellow back pack on the upper bunk of the train bed and sat down on the couch by the window.
"Ill return one day" he said to him self. He looked at the city as the sun set behind it covering the tall buildings with darkness. The sun set was one of his favorite parts of the day. He use to enjoy watching it from the roof top of Titans Tower, but it was slightly different now.
A tear attacked his green cheek as old memories came to him. He could have seen every image in his head but it rejected in the window. Mere flashbacks caused him to cry harder.
Flashbacks:
"Two words, breath mints"
"You think your alone Raven, but your not"
"How about just some herbal tea"
"Having the thing inside does not make you an animal, knowing when to let it out is what makes you a man"
"You're just jealous because I sound like a rock star"
"It did happen; we have to face the truth, no matter how much we dislike it"
"Maybe you should call me Beast Man from now on"
End Flashbacks:
The face of Raven played in his mind. He couldn't forget about her, but he had to.
That moment there was a knock on the door of his room.
"Yes?"
"Mr. Logan we need to check your ticket" said the man from behind the door. Beast Boy took out the ticket from his pocket and approached the door. Opening it he handed the man his ticket and looked at the puzzled man.
"What's wrong?" he asked.
"Oh nothing. Just approving our passengers" replied the man and handed Beast Boy his ticket. "Here you go Mr. Logan. Have a nice trip"
"Thanks" replied Beast Boy and closed the door. He walked up to the window and looked at the sun set again. It was the most beautiful he has ever seen. The water of the city bay rejected the sun light and the wind played with the extraordinary feeling of light bliss. From such beauty a tear rolled down his cheek.
"Ill miss you Rae" he said to him self as the train started moving. With every passing second the train moved faster gaining speed. In a few moments the city was furthering in the horizon as the sun light illuminated the sky.
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"ROBIN!" exclaimed Raven barging in to the room. Robin quickly jumped up and gained combat position.
"What?" he replied with a thin smile on his face. That moment Raven let out a big amount of energy and the room became black.
"WHY DID YOU FORCE BEAST BOY OF THE TEAM?" she yelled as her eyes got red and the cloak turned completely 'black'. Starfire faced Robin with disgust.
"Robin what is Raven talking about?" she asked. Robin gulped hard and looked at her.
"Star Be-"he was cut of. There for Raven used her powers and launched a kitchen chair at him. Robin hit the wall hard and barely rose to his knees.
"Rave stop!" Starfire exclaimed. But Raven didn't stop. She picked up Robin with her powers and dragged him up the wall. The black aura started chocking him and he begun struggling for air.
"Raven STOP!" Starfire exclaimed again. Suddenly the whole room became normal and Robin dropped to the floor out cold. Starfire looked confused.
"Raven what has happened?" she asked. Raven buried her head in the hood of her white cloak and walked out.
"Ask boy blunder over there" she replied before the doors closed behind her.
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Raven was standing on the roof top looking at the last bits of the sun set. She never did tell it to any body but she loved the sun set as much as Beast Boy did. A small tear ran down her pale cheek from the memories of her true love. She never got around to telling him and now it was too late. He was gone from her.
"I must find him" she said to her self and took of flying towards the city.
A/N: Ok readers sorry if this chapter is too small. I am ashamed of my self: there for this is the SHORTEST CHAPTER IVE EVER WRITTEN! Well what can I say; it's really fun here in Japan. HAHAHAHA. Thanks again to all those who reviewed.
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