Kim had to change her look. How do you do that though? How do you make someone want you? She looked in her closet. No, just no. After a long day of shopping she finally got some things. She bought makeup, shirts, jeans, shoes. The next day she was going to floor everyone. She then changed, and tried to fall asleep, and she couldn't. How could someone be so cruel? How could someone have hurt her so bad? Did they not have a heart? People were cruel, and that's another thing she learned. She just couldn't believe it. Someone who looked like an angel could have turned her into a bitch out for blood. She wondered if this was all worth it. She was nice, innocent, and hated people being hurt, she hated seeing people crying. But that's exactly what she's been through. Then she really did have no mercy. She was a bitch out for blood, and she didn't care.
The next day she woke up, she fixed her poofy hair, she put on light makeup but that would also make her look good, and clothes that outlined her perfect body. She looked in the mirror, and thought there was an improvement. She went to school, and Jack Brewer was the first person who saw her, he stopped midway into his sentence, and just stared. What the fuck? Is that Kim? he thought. He pushed away the crowd of people who were also staring at her. She open her locker and turned around, and then she smirked when seeing his face .
"Can I help you?" she said
"Kim?" he said. He knew it was Kim. He just didn't know what to say. That was Kim. And he could tell by looking into her eyes. That was his Kim. The girl he ever so had feelings for ,but didn't admit it. He was a bad ass, and Kim had also interested him, but he didn't want to admit it. Everyone hated her. So did he. He just didn't know what to think, he was interested in her, but he also bullied her, and was completely disgusted by her.
"Yeah?" she responded. He didn't know what to say.
"What happened to you?"
"Why?"
"You look different." As hot as she looked, he didn't like it. He wanted her innocent.
"Yeah?"
"You look even uglier than before. I didn't even think that was possible" Her heart just snapped right there. It wasn't working, it never would. What the hell was she thinking? She couldn't make anybody want her. She didn't say anything. She just walked away. People snickered they didn't want to admit it, because she did look hot, but they laughed along with Jack.
Throughout the day some of the girls complimented her. I like your shirt, I like your hair. Most of the mean girls, still made fun of her. She was wrong. She was always wrong. Jack Brewer however payed attention to her the whole day. She looked so pretty. But he made her feel like she was so ugly. She went home feeling worse then she usually does.
She was wrong.
I know it's short, and I'm sorry. But what do you think? I promise I won't quit this, I won't be that kinda author, but please give me ideas.