5 Stages of Grief
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Omega Ultra: Thanks for the critique. The reason that the prologue is italicized is because it's a flashback. I should've write that. Sorry.
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Guest 1: Thank you! And like I said, I will continue!
Guest 2: Thanks for the critique. I was thinking about the Green Goblin from Spider-Man, and that's how i got the prologue. Speaking of which, the reason it's rushed because I wasn't planning the prologue from the start. And i'm working on Dipper's death. Again, thanks!
Dipper recalled the past event. He died for Mabel and woke up in a field of nothingness. Literally.
It was white all around. He can't even see what he's standing on. He was confused.
"Where am i?" He asked no one.
"WELCOME TO THE WAITING ROOM OF THE DEAD, PINE TREE!" A voice tells him.
Dipper was startled. He knew that voice anywhere.
Bill Cipher, the Dream Demon, arrived. He is a yellow triangle with an eye, bowtie, and a top hat. He constantly terrorize the Pines Family, from Ford, to Stan, and now, he's visiting his favorite person to "play" with (NO BILLDIP), Pine Tree. Or as every other human calls him "Dipper Pines".
"HEYA PINE TREE! DIDN'T SEE YOUR DEATH COMIN'. I WISH I CAN CONTROL THE TIME BABY, SO I CAN REWATCH THAT DEATH OVER AND OVER AGAIN! HAHAHAHAHA!" Bill laughed.
"What do you want, man?!" Dipper shouted.
"WHOA, THERE. DON'T BE SO ANGRY, PINE TREE. UNLESS THAT YOU WANT TO BE AS GRUMPY AS YOUR GREAT UNCLE FORD. MAN, THAT GUY CAN BE LOUD!" Bill joked. "I'M JUST HERE TO ASK YOU A QUESTION." He continued, "CARE FOR A DEAL?"
He's asking me for a deal? What? He thought.
"YES, I AM ASKING YOU A DEAL. A ONE LAST VISIT TO YOUR FRIENDS AND FAMILIES!" Bill said.
"What's the catch? What's in it for you?" Dipper asked. He knows that Bill likes to play games and tricking people, but he's doing a deal to help him? "Are you going to make me a zombie and attack my family? Or using my body for something evil? Or….or-"
"WHOA THERE KID. I'M NOT THAT EVIL, AT THE TIME" The yellow triangle said. "AS TO ANSWER YOUR QUESTION, LET'S JUST SAY I HAVE A…. PROJECT, OF SOME SORT." He continued "I HAVE TO GATHER GOOD DEEDS (BLEH. DISGUSTING) SO I CAN TRADE IT WITH SOME SORT OF KARMA GOD." He said.
Karma points? Sounds like something from a PS3/PS4 exclusive video game. Dipper thought.
"I WILL LEND A TINY BIT OF MY POWERS TO YOU, SO YOU CAN GO TO ANYONE'S DREAMS!" Bill said.
That's great! But the boy thought again. "How do I know you're not tricking me?" Dipper said.
"WE DON'T HAVE TIME FOR LEGITIMACY! C'MON PINE TREE, WORK WITH ME!" Bill said.
Dipper was surprised at the triangle's change of tone. Is he… begging? Wow, the mighty dream demon is desperate~ the boy mentally smirked
"I CAN HEAR YOUR THOUGHT'S, YOU KNOW?" the dorito-like creature said.
Dipper thought. He had a plan. "No. Why would I trust you, Bill? Unless you can… confirm that you're not lying?" He said.
Bill knew Dipper's plan, and he doesn't have other choices. "FINE." Bill said. He lit his hand on blue fire and raised it. "I SWEAR ON MY COLLECTION OF BLOODY DEER TEETHS-" Dipper shuddered at the thought. "-THAT I WILL NOT LIE AND/OR TRICK YOU." The dream demon said.
The pine tree hat boy grinned. Bill held up his hand, and Dipper took it.
"JUST REMEMBER, YOU HAVE A CERTAIN TIME LIMIT!" Bill said, as he send Dipper into Gravity Falls one more time.
How'd you like it? I'd pick a really bad time to publish this story (RIGHT before a week of Exams). BTW did you guys like Dipper and Mabel VS. The Future? I like it, except how they made Ford in the episode. I like the guy, but man, I'm tellin' ya, It's gonna be Pearl in StevenBomb 3 all over again.
Anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing and goodbye!