A/N- Wassup? It be TOBN here with a new chapter of No One Survives!
So I am very excited for this because I finally get to write some deadly sins, which everyone but me started to do, since I started with a prologue. Of course, I don't mind, so I am just gonna start! Jokes!
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P.S- I researched all this stuff. The punishments were found thanks to Yahoo Answers, and I changed them up a bit. But I learned a lot...jokes...
No One Survives: Chapter 2: Wrath Of A Vampire
Satan watched as the gang entered the gates of his world. The underworld. Ethan, who was chained up onto a wall, smirked.
"I told you." He said, his scarred face itching a bit as the burn marks on his skin throbbed. "My friends would never abandon me. Even if it takes going to the darkest place on earth with the most dangers that anyone could ever face." He said with confidence. "What I am trying to say, is that my friends will beat you. We did it once. We can do it again."
Satan was outraged with this, and he whipped Ethan once more. Ethan let out an animalistic roar, a ferocious and painful scream ripped from his throat. Satan did this three more times before pulling Ethan's ear close to his twisted smile. He grinned.
"You be careful what you say, Seer. Your friends won't last a minute in this place. And it won't be me who kills them. It'll be them who kill each other." He said evilly, watching them all walk through hell and into the first gate. Ethan gulped; what did Satan have in store for his friends?
Erica, Benny, Rory, Sarah, Jane and Della walked through the fiery sidewalks of hell, their feet aching as if they were already walking a million miles. Jane groaned.
"How much farther?" She moaned, wanting to collapse on the spot. Sarah sighed as she looked at the younger girl. "I don't know Jane. But it is obvious that we aren't going to have an easy trip. Did you see the sign? We are walking straight into the territory of punished souls." She said, mostly to the spellmaster now. Benny nodded.
"That's good. Grandma told me to go this way, and after encountering six gates, Satan's castle, and that is where Satan punishes the last souls. You know what it's based off?" The whole gang shook their heads, and Benny's eyes glimmered with small excitement.
"They are the seven deadly sins." He said with slight enthusiasm. "Why are you excited for this?" Erica asked annoyingly. Benny shrugged. "I don't actually know. I suppose we all need a little happiness after what is going to happen in the next few visits." Della frowned.
"So how exactly does this work?" She asked. Benny looked at her with a straight face.
"Well, according to Grandma and some old books I found in the attic, Hell's torturing territory is where they punish all the souls who had commit the seven deadly sins. They each have a punishment, and the souls there have to do it forever. But for us, since we are just walking through, we will experience the seven deadly sins and the punishment would only be until we get to the end of the gate." Benny explained. Rory gulped.
"So we are basically going to be punished based on which sin haunts us?" He asked. Benny was met with steel gates; the first gate. Benny nodded slowly.
"Yup. And we are at the first one; Wrath." He said. Sarah stopped everyone before Benny could lead them in.
"Wait!" She said. Everyone looked at the brunette vampire as she gulped slowly. "Can we all promise that despite whatever happens in there, we won't hold grudges, okay?" Della nodded. "That only sounds fair." She said. Jane took a breath.
"Let's go in."
And with that, Benny pushed the steel doors open as he was met to smoke. He coughed a bit as the gang beside him did as well. He frowned.
"The punishment is walking in an acrid smoke. It is supposed to smell bad and just annoy you. They have to walk through that forever, just because they are experiencing that wrath can make you blind to everything." He explained. Erica suddenly snapped.
"Thanks for the info dork. Let's just get through here." She said in a slight frustrated matter, storming off to be in the front. Rory gulped; he could already see what was happening. He was about to go up before Benny stopped him.
"No. Let me. I think this is a job for Benny." He said proudly, walking up to the vampire. He touched her back softly.
"Erica. Erica, are you okay?" He asked. Erica snapped towards him, flashing her fangs as her eyes glowed a fiery red. He gulped. "Not okay." He said with worry, sensing the blonde's sudden rage. She growled at him.
"Do you think I am okay?!" She yelled. "We are in hell, it is hot, and you ARE STANDING RIGHT BESIDE ME!" She yelled. Benny backed away slowly, bumping into the wall of people behind him. It was his friends.
"Erica, just calm down." Jane reassured, wanting this to end as fast as it started. Erica looked at the girl and growled. "Don't you tell me what to do Mini Morgan." She said with a glare, shutting Jane up in an instant. Benny stepped forward once more.
"Erica, just tell us what is wrong." Erica smiled sarcastically as she growled at the emerald eyed boy.
"You know what?! I DON'T NEED ANYTHING FROM YOU!" She yelled, wrath and fury building up inside of her slowly. She was feeling a wrath towards her friends, a hungry lust for violence and destruction; especially towards Benny. "Erica! Calm down. Seriously!" He scolded. "Don't let them get to you." He added, his voice merely a whisper.
She slapped Benny right on the spot, her fury blinding her from her sense of knowledge.
"YOU ARE JUST A PUNY SPELLMASTER, WHO DOESN'T KNOW HOW TO DO ANYTHING RIGHT! SO LEAVE ME ALONE!" She yelled. Benny looked at hurt sincerely, feeling hurt from what the blonde vampire just said. Della tried to pull the two apart, but Erica wasn't going to let anyone stop her from hurting that spellmaster. Wrath blinded her from seeing her wrongdoing, Jane realizing what was happening to the blonde.
"Wrath...the feeling of the need to want to physically hurt someone. How fury and vindictive anger can easily result in a deadly violence...we need to stop her before she hurts Benny!" She exclaimed, the gang running towards the infuriated blonde. Erica just growled at them, flashing her fangs as she looked at the spellmaster with violence in her heart. She smiled devilishly as she pinned Benny onto a sharp wall of thorns. He yelped, feeling small thorns piercing at his back. Erica growled.
"You're dead." She growled. She suddenly drew her fangs into Benny's neck, sucking some of his blood. Benny cringed in pain as he dropped to the ground, unconscious. Sarah gasped as she pulled her friend back away from the unconscious spellmaster. Jane whispered a healing spell on the emerald eyed boy, as Erica got up to her senses. She gasped as she ran up to Benny, crying.
"Oh my gosh...Benny...Benny I am so sorry." Benny said nothing as he stood up and led the gang to the next gate, his mind already clouded with the sense of hurt and despair. Suddenly, a green and smelly mist surrounded Erica in an instant. She coughed, hating the smell of the smoke. Rory looked at it in awe as he stepped away, Erica blindly waving her hands.
"Guys! Guys I can't see in this smoke!" Della shook her head. "That's the point Erica. You aren't supposed to see in there. It teaches you that wrath makes you blind to the people around you, and you need to step away from it to cure yourself." She recited, as if it were a book. Erica looked ahead of the mist to see the shape of a tall boy, the boy she hurt.
She wasn't physically blind right now.
She was mentally blind as well.
She obviously cared for the spellmaster, and he with her, so it was obvious that she really hurt the boy. Her wrath had taken over her, and she realized her faults. It was completely accidental, at the same time it was how she actually felt.
Erica always had a soft spot for Benny Weir, but sometimes his annoying demeanor that got her mad at him, and she had to control it. But she knew, when she walked into the gates of Wrath, that this sin would overcome her. So why didn't she try to stop it?
Erica thought about all this as she walked blindly through the annoying smoke, coughing a bit as she finally reached the gate that ended the section of wrath. The smoke cleared as Erica coughed, the stench of the smoke lingering. Great. Now she was going to have to walk this out.
"Benny?" She whispered, voice barely audible. The spellmaster looked at her and said nothing, walking away fast. He knew it was just a sin that plagued her, but he did know that she could stop it. And that she meant every single word of what she said.
So Benny continued to say nothing as the gang walked on, into the fires of hell, passing on to one more gate. Rory sighed.
"The next sin." He whispered.
A/N- And that was that! Such a shame; tension is spreading faster than from a vampire running from bees!
So what happens now? That is up for me to choose. I forgot what sin I had planned next (It is probably in my notebook, all planned out, and I am too lazy to get it), so in the meanwhile, you would have to wait!
As I mentioned, all info I put into the stories [Well, mostly the punishments], were found on Yahoo Answers, and the people who answered probably found their info on a major information source like Wikipedia. But nevertheless, none of the info came from my mind. Just the plot.
Anywhoo, drop a review, and thanks for being you! [That rhymes ish! Lol...]
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