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Kai: she's evil
Me: how dare you!
Kai: well you said it yourself
Me: so what?
Chapter 2 What a day ***Kai/Tyson*** You have a sister? Tyson asked eyes growing larger by the second, you actually have a sister and you didn't tell us! He repeated his tone incredulous.
Yes, Kai admitted, But I've only seen some secret signs that she leaves for me in the past 8 years -We'll help find her the team promised after Tyson tattletaled. They started to discuss how to find her.
Kai groaned, this would be a long day.
*****Kaira*****
Kaira stealthily approached Hiwatari Mansion. Then she remembered, it
might not be safe to go inside yet. She hid in the shadows and behind a
bush until she saw a blue haired boy walk out-he was cute! It wasn't Kai
but she recognized him as Tyson one of Kai's teammates.
*****Tyson***
I said goodbye to Kai and started to walk home. When all of a sudden my
arm is grabbed and I am pulled into a bush. I scream but a hand covers my
mouth.
-It's okay, I'll remove my hand if you promise to by quiet, a voice
whispered- it was defiantly female.
I nodded my head and the hand came off. I moved into a sort of sitting
position.
Who are you? I asked.
I am, she broke off and lunged forward to pull up his sleeve she checked it apparently relieved. I am Kai's sister.
Tyson eyes growing wide not for the first time that day Tyson said
-Kai told us about you
-Really? She said her tone indicating she didn't believe him
Yeah but only today because I kinda pestered it out of him. Just asking but why did you check my arm like that it was freaky!?
To see if you were a spy from Biovolt she said sighing as if it was the most obvious thing in the world.
Well then.. I should bring you to see Kai and how do I know you're really his sister? He said instantly alarmed at the thought.
Tell Kai the name Kairiana and he shall know and be able to tell you, she said with confidence. Also tell him Biovolt is spying on his house and therefore I can't come yet.
She heard footsteps and checked her watch. In a hurried tone she said
quickly Bring him to the forest- he will know which at 3 in the morning and there shall your answers be, I must go now. See you Tyson!
With that she walked quickly off.
Tyson watched in amazement. Kai has one pretty, cool and knowledgeable
sister.
He made his way back to Kai's Mansion.
***Kai***
The team left to slowly for my liking. The butler knocked just when I
was going to take a rest with some peace and quiet. It was Tyson. Not
again my mind moaned. Outside I just said
-Show him in
Tyson came in and rushed to my side. His breath indicated he had been in
a rush or he had been running or something.
-What is it Tyson? I said that being my normal greeting.
His next word made me sit up very very straight.
-Kai I saw your sister! The boy said.
-Where is she? I asked fighting to keep control of the emotion I felt
welling up in me.
-I don't know but she said to tell you that Biovolt is spying on your
house and to go to the forest- she said you knew which one at 3am to find
out the answers to your questions. How do you know she is my sister? Kai interrogated She told me to tell you the name Kairiana
Kai's face lit up with surprise unable to be hidden.
-That's my sister's name! Yes it must be her!
Hey people More cliffhangers aren't I evil? What's going to happen?
Kai: I can always mask my emotions and I don't have any or a sister
Kaira: Kai I am your sister how can you be so creul
Kai: I never knew about you
Kaira: Yes you did you just don't want to admit it!
Kai(turning red): Hmmphh
I will try to make my chappy's longer
Bffimagine you made your review way long and call me would ya?
Thanks to everyone who reviews my story!
Kai: she's evil
Me: how dare you!
Kai: well you said it yourself
Me: so what?
Chapter 2 What a day ***Kai/Tyson*** You have a sister? Tyson asked eyes growing larger by the second, you actually have a sister and you didn't tell us! He repeated his tone incredulous.
Yes, Kai admitted, But I've only seen some secret signs that she leaves for me in the past 8 years -We'll help find her the team promised after Tyson tattletaled. They started to discuss how to find her.
Kai groaned, this would be a long day.
*****Kaira*****
Kaira stealthily approached Hiwatari Mansion. Then she remembered, it
might not be safe to go inside yet. She hid in the shadows and behind a
bush until she saw a blue haired boy walk out-he was cute! It wasn't Kai
but she recognized him as Tyson one of Kai's teammates.
*****Tyson***
I said goodbye to Kai and started to walk home. When all of a sudden my
arm is grabbed and I am pulled into a bush. I scream but a hand covers my
mouth.
-It's okay, I'll remove my hand if you promise to by quiet, a voice
whispered- it was defiantly female.
I nodded my head and the hand came off. I moved into a sort of sitting
position.
Who are you? I asked.
I am, she broke off and lunged forward to pull up his sleeve she checked it apparently relieved. I am Kai's sister.
Tyson eyes growing wide not for the first time that day Tyson said
-Kai told us about you
-Really? She said her tone indicating she didn't believe him
Yeah but only today because I kinda pestered it out of him. Just asking but why did you check my arm like that it was freaky!?
To see if you were a spy from Biovolt she said sighing as if it was the most obvious thing in the world.
Well then.. I should bring you to see Kai and how do I know you're really his sister? He said instantly alarmed at the thought.
Tell Kai the name Kairiana and he shall know and be able to tell you, she said with confidence. Also tell him Biovolt is spying on his house and therefore I can't come yet.
She heard footsteps and checked her watch. In a hurried tone she said
quickly Bring him to the forest- he will know which at 3 in the morning and there shall your answers be, I must go now. See you Tyson!
With that she walked quickly off.
Tyson watched in amazement. Kai has one pretty, cool and knowledgeable
sister.
He made his way back to Kai's Mansion.
***Kai***
The team left to slowly for my liking. The butler knocked just when I
was going to take a rest with some peace and quiet. It was Tyson. Not
again my mind moaned. Outside I just said
-Show him in
Tyson came in and rushed to my side. His breath indicated he had been in
a rush or he had been running or something.
-What is it Tyson? I said that being my normal greeting.
His next word made me sit up very very straight.
-Kai I saw your sister! The boy said.
-Where is she? I asked fighting to keep control of the emotion I felt
welling up in me.
-I don't know but she said to tell you that Biovolt is spying on your
house and to go to the forest- she said you knew which one at 3am to find
out the answers to your questions. How do you know she is my sister? Kai interrogated She told me to tell you the name Kairiana
Kai's face lit up with surprise unable to be hidden.
-That's my sister's name! Yes it must be her!
Hey people More cliffhangers aren't I evil? What's going to happen?
Kai: I can always mask my emotions and I don't have any or a sister
Kaira: Kai I am your sister how can you be so creul
Kai: I never knew about you
Kaira: Yes you did you just don't want to admit it!
Kai(turning red): Hmmphh