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blame my internet I HATE YOU ... you won't let me save my doc ... I'm so sad


"I'll stop whenever you stop trying to run away" he said huskily he took her back to the cellar where he kept her, "now keep quiet and just stay there, you don't want me to chain you again do you? Quit trying to escape, you haven't learned the slightest thing. If you want to see your family again, do as I say and yo'll be free in no time."

"But you promised you'd keep me without the chains I'm sorry please don't chain me PLEASE!"

Here pleads were vain, he had her ankle chained to the middle of a room, he was a cold hearted assassin.

"Quiet down" said another voice, in the room was another girl, she looked a lot like the first one, clear eyes and long dark hair "I'm Marcy, don't bother telling me your name, just tell it to the new bunch of girls that come after you. Tonight will be the night I'm finally free, thanks to you, and don't worry I'll pray from heaven that you don't suffer the same destiny I had, the destiny we all have had." Marcy said with a sad smile

"What do you mean?" the girl said

"He's known as 'The Collector', he is 25, but he has killed around 50 girls, that I know of, he uses some trickery for us to fall for him, it's rare when he brings just one girl home, I know it's crazy, he kills 3 each time, but leaves 1 alive to tell the new pack to tell the story, he had kept me here for a year and 4 months, I guess he doesn't really know who's new and he just takes them away and kills them, I can't sleep from the fear of him taking me away, but now it's my turn to finally rest at peace." Marcy said calmly

"I don't want to know your story... he swore he wouldn't do anything to me, he said I'm different from all the other girls"

"What was it, that you touched on the living room?" Marcy asked softly

"I ... wha..?"

"Well, me and my friends, Valery and Sonia, came here and .."

"I didn't touch anything" the girl interrupted "he returned almost inmediatly, he took me to the garden and he kissed me, he was trying to go beyond the kisses, and I shove him away, he then placed my hands over my head and resumed with his activities, the grass was itching my skin, he was on top of me, it felt ... nice ... I begged him to stop, and then he brought me here"

"It looks like you were having a good time then" Marcy said smiling "It wasn't like with me, that he beat me, it's a shame he took you down here"

"It's the first time I see someone at the cellar" the girl said "I've been with him for over 5 years"

"You ... so you know his name"

"I didn't know he kept hunting, he promised he'd stop his hunting after I was his"

"I ..." Marcy said "... you've known him for 5 years?"

"So for what you said" said the girl still ignoring her questions "he brings 3 at the time and he brings new ones every 3 months, that makes 36 dead girls every year, 180 for the last 5 years, Oh my poor prince, why have you killed so many girls?"

"Poor prince you say?" Marcy asked flabbergasted

"Well yes, he has been feeling so lonely, he spends that much time with you girls and all because I broke his heart and I haven't been giving him the love he needs"

"You are nuts" Marcy said "but it's understandable, you've been kidnapped for the last 5 years and he is the only one you can talk to"

"I love him so much, you wouldn't believe if i told you, he is a nice guy, he may lose his temper easily, but I'll always love him."

"How can you love a monster like that?" Marcy asked just above a whisper "he has killed near 200 girls, he keeps you chained to the walls and inside the rooms"

"You wouldn't understand" the girl said softly

A few hours later

Both girls were already asleep, Marcy was

was sleeping by the window covering with a small blanket, and the other girl was right where he had left her, he came near the latest and unchained her, leaning close to her ear he whispered "I'm sorry darling, I love you so much, I need you so much, please forgive me Kuki"


mmm so almost 700 words that's all for chapter 2, I'll upload sooner I promise, oh and Erzibeth-Malfoy here is the early update :D I hope you like it.

thanks everyone for reading this, now I've revealed the identity of the girl that was pleading in chap 1 and who is madly inlove with her kidnapper, can you guess who is he?

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