hello shakespeare's entourage here.
i've been encouraged to add in my own comments. well, near the end of this chapter you see the first manifestation of "the predator", (I will note that fox will speak or shout but "the predator" will always snarl or growl.) and here begins his mental battle. thank you timid vulpine for the review! read on for excitement, mystery and a lot of kinda cheesy writing.
Chapter two: the morning after
Fox awoke with a cold sweat upon his troubled brow. This was a daunting omen, surely he had enough troubles while on the Great Fox. But right now was not the time he had his morning duties to complete. He had to check his guns to avoid malfunction when it counted.
"ugh!"as Fox was cleaning his blaster a headache hit him hard "UGH! OOOOOWWWWW!" he howled as a red mist threatened consumed him he fell to his knees fighting to keep control! "AAAAARRRRRRRGGGGHHH!" then it went almost as quickly as it came yet it still left Fox out of breath. Then Krystal peered round the corner to see Fox slumped over and on his knees.
"I heard shouting and howling coming from here, everything all right?" she asked, a look of concern on her face
"Yeah" he said still feeling the attack "I'm fine just a little tired"
"You tell me the truth or I take it from you," Krystal threatened.
"I've told you the truth!"
"Fine then if you won't tell me I'll just read your mind and..." she paused, surprised, She couldn't read his mind."I can't read your mind."
"But you can read anyone's mind."
"I know but for some reason i can't read yours, i can hear Peppy, Slippy and all the rest but I can't hear your thoughts."she took a few paces back, "I'm going to see Peppy about this, there's something wrong."
Fox grabbed Krystal's wrist "You're not going anywhere!" fox growled
"What's gotten into you, you're not like this!" she pleaded. Fox released her and stumbled backwards, writhing in pain.
"GO!"he shouted through his groans,"Run, Krystal!"
"Or I'll get you!" growled another voice and Krystal ran off down the hall.
"No! I'm in control! You aren't me!" Fox shouted
ooh mysterious!
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