3rd person
Jinx and her flock were not like the original versions of the human-avian breed, they were something the school called "negative human avian". Instead of having positively charged energy in their systems like the other flock had, the negative-human-avian breed's energy was tinkered with to cause the positive energy to become negative. Although this seemed like such a little insignificant change, the outcome had exceeded expectations and done so much more than anyone could have dreamed of.
The negative human avian breed and the original differed considerably in appearance. Each of the negative flock had slightly gray skin with red eyes and silver wings. Out of all of them though, Jinx was the most unusual looking. She was not necessarily ugly, but dreamlike. Her skin seemed to glow a faint white, and radiated a sense of gracefulness with every movement she made. It also seemed as if her jet-black hair swayed in perfect melody with each step she took, reflecting any hint of light that came into view like a brilliant star against the dark of the night.
However, her beauty did not extend inwardly, inside she was a monster, a cruel twisted beast who was out for the blood of others. Aside her appearance, her powers seemed unearthly as well. She could command the dark in ways no one would think possible, and form it into any being, such as balls of energy, and demons who obeyed her every whim.
Her flock consisted of three others, Scar, Rae, and Page. All three of which didn't have as much of a breathtaking effect as Jinx did, but would be considered simply as fairly good looking to normal humans.
Scar had short silky black hair that spiked ever so slightly at the ends, his arms and legs revealed large muscles that could be intimidating to others at times. His face was particularly hansom and blemish free, except for the long angry scar that tore from his eye all the way down to his lips.
Rae had rusty brown hair that ran all the way down to his shoulders, his arms and legs were not as bulky as Scar's, and if anything looked more like toothpicks than limbs.
Page had vivid blonde hair that seemed almost white. Her eyes were two different colors, one purple and one blue.
The negative flock wasn't just designed for the fun of it though. If anything, they had a very big task to perform. Well not the entire flock, more like just Jinx. The scientists at the school had inserted such a strong hate for Maximum Ride into Jinx, that it completely swallowed any hint of goodness in her heart and blinded her from the boundaries between humane and barbaric.
With such an intense blood lust for Max, Jinx would stop at nothing until Maximum Ride had taken her last breath.
Author's Note: Hey sorry if it's bad, I felt like I needed to rush to get this out to your guys. Please review, this is my first story and I would really appreciate constructive criticism. Next chapter soon!