A/N~Hey guys. Thanks for reading. It really means a lot. I know I had I lot of grammatical errors in chapter one but bear with me. This chapter is a lot better trust me.
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"Brightpaw!" I hear a voice call. Then Robinpaw topples over me. " I just knew you wouldn't get a hideous name." "Ha ha very funny Robinpaw" then I hear Brackenfur calling to Robinpaw. "I have to go start my training now." Then Raggedpelt walks over to me and my heart thuds against my chest."ready to start training?" I nod vigorously and he purrs walking me outside the camp to a small clearing.
"Since you've been living as a Rogue, you obviously know the territory well and know how to hunt so we will start with some simple defensive moves. First off watch my body and when I move to hit you,dodge out of the way. I nod and focus on him. He has large muscles and he is probably strong, but his size slows him down. So I have an advantage. He shifts his body to the right to hit my side so at the last moment I squat and roll out of the way and shake dirt off my fur.
"Very good. Now dodge and use your size and speed against me to mock me down." I steady myself and wait for him to move. This time his body shifts to the left so I pretend that I am going to go the opposite way but then at the last minute I move to the left, unsteadying his stance then I run around him to get his paws in a weaker stance and then I push off my hind legs as hard as I can, shoving him with my front paws and he falls over.
I smirk at my cunning win. He gets up and he is also smirking. "Very smart. You confused me, got my stance weak and knocked me over easily. But some cats won't weaken their stance. That's when you do this," he says then he dashes towards me and rolls around to my backside before I can do anything and swipes his paw under my legs and I land hard on my side with an "oomph."
I get up "COOL! Can I try?" He nods and I back up looking an him. I look at his left side and pretend to go where I am looking but as he goes to block I run to his right side roll behind him and knock his feet out from under him. Then I jump away. He gets up and shakes his head "you know Brightpaw, your pretty good. Not just anyone can do that on their first try. Even Brackenfur can't knock me over. I might have underestimated you . Go get some fresh kill and then we'll go hunting.
I walk into camp with my crazy fur and walk over to Robinpaw who just grabbed a mouse from the pile. "Hey, wanna share?" I nod and we share the mouse then discard the bones in the wastepile outside the camp. Then we groom each other Until our pelts are clean. "So how is training going for you?" Robinpaw asks me. "Great! I learned how to knock over a cat and dodge attacks like the warriors do! And Raggedpelt said I'm doing great." Robinpaw purrs "well look who's having fun." I purr back and playfully nudge her. Then I notice Raggedpelt sitting near the camp entrance watching me. "Oh I forgot, Raggedpelt is taking me hunting. I have to go. See you later!"